Xano Mettengar. "The Rogue Assassin"

n2crimson

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NAME: Xano Mettengar
FACTION: BHG (Hopeful)
RANK: Hopeful
SPECIES: Arkanian
AGE: 17
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6’1”
WEIGHT: 155lbs
EYES: Lime Green
HAIR: White
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Lime Green Eyes due to genetic alterations
DOMINATE HAND: right hand
FORCE SENSITIVE: slightly force sensitive

STRENGTH: Adequate, swimmer’s body 5/10

DEXTERITY: quite agile: 9/10
CONSTITUTION: Immune to most toxins and disease due to cybernetic enhancers 8/10
INTELLIGENCE: Genius: 10/10
WISDOM: Sometimes acts before thinking but otherwise quite wise: 4/10
CHARISMA: Medium-high, easily makes friends but just as easily makes enemies : 6/10

FORCE POWERS: N/A
SKILLS:
Genius when it comes to technology can interface with most technology
Long-Range expert Adequate at close range combat
Heals quickly due to nanobots in blood stream
Highly capable pilot (fighter pilot)
Super-fast reflexes due to increased vision
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: N/A
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
-STRENGTHS: Technological Genius, Professional Sniper, Genetically altered slightly to change vision
-WEAKNESSES: Arrogance, at close range can be weaker, takes a long time to interface sometimes.


GEAR:
Comp. Slicer
Interface pack
Powerpack Charger
Flash grenades
Smoke grenades
Vibro blade
Slug-Thrower Custom Automatic Rifle
Slug-Thrower CustomSniper Rifle with enhanced scope
Duel Silenced CustomSlug-Thrower pistols w/ quick-draw grips and holsters.
Enhanced Med-kit

SHIP:
Name: Archblade
Type: Personal Transport/ Fighter
Equipment: 2 Auto- turrets and a front mounted twin pulse cannon, can reach sub light speeds, active camo.

PETS: N/A

PERSONALITY: Arrogant, cruel and cunning. Yet, loyal ,dependable, and highly religious. May occasionally have berserk moments. Focuses mostly on self-preservation or protection of friends. Wants redemption for his sins and wishes to cleanse the universe of scum.

HISTORY:

Born to the lower echelons of the Arkanian world as a slightly mutated human-like Arkanian, Xano had always led a deprived life. His family abandoned by his father, had always been on lower standards due to their place in society. Xano’s father, Golgi had left his family on pursuit of higher fundings for his research. He was developing a new cybernetic tool for his race to use, Nanobots. Nanobots were microscopic robots that worked in similar ways that the Force worked in Jedi Knights, could heal a body almost instantaneously.

Therefore, young Xano had no father, a poor lifestyle, and was looked down upon by most of his society; however, Xano had one extreme gift, he was a genius, even by his prodigious race’s standards. Through school he progressed and performed at an exponential level. He grew up bitter and angry at his father, often using his anger to fuel his determination to be the best.

Yet, young Xano soon grew tired of his life on the planet Arkania and went in search of his father at the age of 16. He built his own ship using money he had gained from several academic contests and went to the nearby asteroid belt where his father was rumored to be studying his new technology.
Xano, shortly found his father on a space station and confronted him… brutally.

After murdering his father he saw what he had done in his rage and was devastated by what he had done. In his righteous anger he had killed his deserter of a father and had halted his research… permanently. Xano, seeing that the Nanobots his father had been working on had not been field tested made the choice to let his God decide whether he lived or died and injected himself with the cybernetic mutagen.

He passed out for a few hours and awoke to find himself still perfectly alive and healthy. In fact, he felt better than he had in his entire life, his eyesight had improved so that he could even see the individual articles of dust floating in the air, evidently an unknown side-effect. Unable to return home he ventured into the universe with one wish. He wanted to use his new gifts to rid the universe of scum and somehow redeem himself in his own eyes and his God’s.
KILLS: N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES: N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: N/A
ROLE-PLAYS: N/A
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Arm514ve

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so far looks good but I'll read mor indepth tommowo when I'm not RPing
 

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kk:CHappy: Anyone else can comment as well
 

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um all I can sgest is you add a little more to the history of what led up to the reason of him killing his father other than him leaveing.

also does you're ship need a hyperspace drive attachment cause I want to model it, but you were a little vege on the size and or shape if you can send me a sketch I can turn it into a 3d model.
 

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ship...

Hey is it ok if it is on note book paper. It's all I have at the moment.:CIsee:
 

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thats fine just need a quick scan.
 

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Okey Dokey here is a quick sketch... :CHappy: BTW: the hyperdrive is installed in the rear wing (its the shaded in thingy) hope you think its kwl !!!
 

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I find it well written enough, but cliché.

Yeah, I admit it follows a very basic backstory but I had a better idea but it wouldn't fit the timeline so I threw this one together in a few minutes. Thanks for the feedback though and feel free to check out my other character and his training progress. Thanks!!! :CHappy:
 

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Make sure to add more to your character as you Rp and get a better feel for him :) I have a character Aries who I haven't used in ages, he's probably my most in-depth profile though. I fleshed him out over the course of RPing with him over a few weeks.

I like the drawing btw.
 

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Make sure to add more to your character as you Rp and get a better feel for him :) I have a character Aries who I haven't used in ages, he's probably my most in-depth profile though. I fleshed him out over the course of RPing with him over a few weeks.

I like the drawing btw.

Thanks for the tip :CHappy: I'm glad you like my sketch, yeah my other profile is more in-depth i guess but I had a really cool idea of like a cyborg hybrid kinda guy for this character and then realized after arm514ve pointed out to me it didn't fit with the time line... Oh well :CHappy: dues must be made with what is given to us.
 
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