Wade Jamieson

[Jason Whipple]

NAME: Wade Jamieson

FACTION: None

RANK: N/A

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 22

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 5’9”

WEIGHT: 131 Pounds

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, Untrained


APPEARANCE:

As Of Current Knowledge Wade Jamieson Has A Bald Head & Blue Eyes. His Complexion Seems To Be That Of Tan. Apparently He Has A Tattoo Of A Star On His Wrist & Another Tattoo Of An Eyeball Somewhere On His Left Shoulder. Reports Say Years Ago He Was In A Fight Where His Pinky Finger Was Removed In A Fight With A Jedi.

He Was Last Seen Wearing A Long-Sleeved Blue Shirt With Light Green Stripes Coming Down The Sides. He Also Has On Black Cargo Pants Along With Black Running Shoes.


ATTRIBUTES:

I Repeat Our Target Is Armed & Dangerous. He Is Wanted Alive For Crimes Against The Sith. My Reports Indicate That This Guy Is Cunning. He Managed To Break His Way Into A Sith Owned Bank Undetected. His Intelligent Stats Are Off The Charts Too.


His Description Is Of A Man About Four To Five Years Older Than Himself So He Must Be Strong As Well As Mature.


The Fugitive Escaped With A Band Of Wookiees. He Is Missing A Pinky Finger He Is At A Slight Disadvantage. He Has No Family So Killing Him Wouldn’t Be A Problem If Push Comes To Shove. He’s A Kid So Hopefully He Has A Heart Or Something That Prevents Me From Pulling My Trigger.


PERSONALITY:

According To Juvenile Records He Was Not A Troublemaker Yet He Was Involved In A Lot Of Fights. Records Also Indicate That He Is Not Force Sensitive. At The Age Of Sixteen He Was Up For Early Release For Good Behavior But He Escaped With A Group Of Wookiees

He Entered Prison At The Age Of Twelve For Assault.


BIOGRAPHY:

It all started when I got into a fight one day at school. I did my best to prevent any harm but those guys kept messing with me. I couldn’t take it, I just lost control; But that was a younger me, and today I have control. I Was Only Twelve Years Old When They Threw Me In A Cell. It Was Cold; like those cold streets I slept on before I stole that money. Before the chase began.


You know they killed my only family. Those Wookiees I that I used to share a cell with. They all died trying to save me. I knew them since I got in the place. It’s okay I guess. I don’t hate the Sith for it, in fact I love them for it. They showed me that I can lose everything, But I won’t; and if I do I will die trying.

It was an accident, I don’t know but I ran into a Jedi one day. He was being chased by a group of mercenaries and I got caught in between the cross fire. Tark was there. Tark was my last friend and he died trying to save my life. I couldn’t take it. The mercenaries were slayed by the Jedi but the Jedi didn’t except for a punk kid to lay a bolt in the back of his head. I lost my pinky finger too. That’s a funny story so they say people who can’t use the force will like chop the arm off or something when they use a lightsaber, well the myth is true. I ended up cutting my pinky finger off I must be lucky or something.


SKILLS:

Wade Jamieson is a known brawler, yet he seems to be a man who can make friends easily. Trust me he knows how to use a blaster, he robbed a bank before. He must be some kind of genius to break out of a Sith guarded prison. Some say that he is force sensitive because he won a fight against a Jedi. The Jedi lost his life Wade lost his pinky.


GEAR:


XR-1200fp light freighter

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/xr-1200fp-light-freighter.87831/


(2X) WESTAR-1 Blaster Pistol

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/westar-1-blaster-pistol.84735/


X-01 Dagger

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/x-01-dagger.89518/


Deck Sweeper


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/deck-sweeper.86749/


B-series astromech droid

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/b-series-astromech-droid.86076/



ROLE-PLAYS:

N/A


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RELATIONSHIPS:

N/A



SHIP:

He Rides Around In A Dusty Yellow
XR-1200fp light freighter
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/xr-1200fp-light-freighter.87831/

DROIDS:

He Has A B-series Astromech Droid That Is All White With A Blue Stripe Coming Down The Left Side

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/b-series-astromech-droid.86076/


PETS:

He Has No Pets That Are Known To Us.


KILLS:

N/A


COMBAT:

N/A

 

[Wit]

Sorry to be blunt, but this character seems a little too perfect to me. Strong, able to defeat a Jedi and only lose a finger, genius with off the charts intelligence. I’d say tone down heavily on his abilities and also add some more details in the biography to explain when the events such as his escape from a sith facility and the fight with the Jedi occurred as right now it’s not actually clear.

 

[Sunfrog]

I might add as well- it looks a little on the short side, maybe consider fleshing it out a bit more?

 

[Versok]

And the ship you are using is advanced tech, which has to be earned via tech plots, you will have to change it for one that isn't

 

[The Good Doctor]

I'm basically going to echo Wit in this case.

He's strong, "his intelligence stats are off the charts" and defeated a Jedi by shooting them in the head the head (and somehow lost a pink finger too?)

I'd tone them down. Something like he "is intelligent and quick on his feet, is a decent fighter and gunman .etc" along those lines

And despite the above sections reading like a wanted poster, your character isn't going to have any reputation. You can have that style, just keep what I said in mind.

Anyways, I'm not sure I'm comfortable with your character beating the Jedi in the way that is written. Not even a Jedi Padawan or Sith Acolyte. I think the easiest change would be changing the Jedi to a bounty hunter or something else that seems more plausible. The changing the backstory to something else shouldn't not affect the backstory.

Minor note but the ship and droid is listed twice.

When you are ready for me to look over the profile again please let me know. You can tag me with @Faster Than Light

 

[The Good Doctor]

Any updates on edits @Jason Whipple?