Tucker Tulber

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NAME: Tucker Tulber.
FACTION:Bounty Hunter.
RANK:.
SPECIES: Kel Dor.
AGE: 15.
GENDER: Male.
HEIGHT: 5’ 11”.
WEIGHT: 165.
EYES: Emerald Green.
HAIR: None.
SKIN: Tan.
CREDITS: 100.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A scar across his face.
DOMINATE HAND: Right hand.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No.

STRENGTH: Tucker is average strength for a Kel Dor. 5/10

DEXTERITY: Tucker is very agile. 7/10

CONSTITUTION: Tucker health remains steady unless sick. 6/10

INTELLIGENCE: Tucker has photographic memory and never forgets what he learns. 9/10

WISDOM: Tucker has street smarts. 4/10

CHARISMA: Tucker has high charisma and can get anybody to join him. 6/10

FORCE POWERS:
none.

SKILLS:
Pilot skills. 7/10
Shooting skills. 9/10
Vibroblade skills. 8/10
Sneaking skills. 9/10

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths are he has a great amount of passion in his work.
Weaknesses doesn't like to kill civilians in the middle of his work.

GEAR: Tython suit of armor.

TEAM: Ruby River(second in command), Trevor Tolkin (engineer), Kulder Billings (informationist/pilot of the Nell3d-4), Cole Anderson (medic), Joshua Williams (pilot of the Demolisher sotg).


PERSONAL SHIPS: Chopper-fighter-concept.
COMPANY SHIPS: Nell3d-4, Demolisher sotg, BA2, Sentinel class landing ship.



PETS:
Sharnaff named Bull. (I ride on him behind my hound)
Slice Hound named Hunter. (I use him as a hunting hound)

PERSONALITY:
Fierce, strong, honorable, loyal and intelligent.

HISTORY:

PART I - YOUNG LIFE
Tucker grew up in the low/high life most a low harsh life with his father very close to him. He would steal food and vehicles while his father was gone on “business trips.” But when his father got home they would live in the best things till the credits ran out then they be on the streets till his fathers next “business trip.” Finally when he became 12 he went on trips with him. And they went and got more credits a bought all new pets and vehicles (that’s the pets and vehicles above).

PART II – Death of Father
Tucker’s father soon went into debt with a Hutt and was killed in an “accident”. His father was accidentally crushed on a landing pad walking to his chopper fighter. Tucker has been looking for the killer and will keep looking on the side of his jobs.

PART III - The First Job
Tucker was once approached by his dad’s employer he was asked if he wanted a job. Tucker of course said yes so they employer took him to a hanger where his dads stuff was. All the gear was new and Tucker knew how to use it.

KILLS:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None.

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None.

TRAINING:


ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Johnnysaurus Rex

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Well... first off I'd say that you need to go through and fix some grammatical problems in the profile. It also seems to have some odd bits that could be weeded out. Like the bit about how the gear was "all new and he knew how to use it" it's assumed that he knows how to ues this type of equipment if he has been doing this work all his life apparently. I don't think you ever state what it is that he does either. Is he a thief? A merc? Perhaps a bounty hunter? That is something that would be crucial to the character as his purpose and means for being in any situation. Your history seems a bit lacking, it may be within the requirments but it couldn't hurt to flesh things out a bit.

You put average strength at 5/10 but when you state he has very high charisma then you also put that at a 5/10. He has passion in his work but he feels remorse after he does it? That doesn't seem quite right, like a guy who loves to drown puppies but feels bad aftrward. Though sure enough he has such passion in it that when he sees another puppy he'll be damned if it ain't forced into the water. You cast him as intelligent but that's only possible if you can RP him that way. Finally, he's a Kel Dor... to my knowledge Kel Dor do not have hair.
 

D.C.

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Uhm, you already put up your profile sheet and it was exactly the same... You just changed the race. Am I correct?

If you made any other changes, you could have editted your other profile sheet as well, you did not have to put up a whole new thread.
 

Ser Gregor

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In addition, both Nexu and Dewback come from planets not currently discovered, and you wouldn't be able to tame a Nexu regardless, so they'll have to be removed.
 

PuffyCow

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Dude, you need to fix up the way you write, big time. Like, make it comprehendable and, readable, at that. Use more punctuation and try to write like you talk, generally speaking.

Sorry, but are you from a English-speaking country, or household, at that?

Not trying to offend, just wondering...
 
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