Too Innocent?

[Lillianne Crasse]

Ok...Khaluq's been in the rping world for a bit now. I'm taking from her backstory things that would affect her personality. Granted she was orphaned at the age of 9 and lived on a farm on Dantooine, so her exposure to certain things is very slim. She then would pick pockets in the streets and hack into the cargo areas of ships and move from planet to planet trying to stay in the shadows hidden from sight.

Soooo..my question is, do you think she's acting a little too innocent? I think it's great. No other character I've ever created has been so wholesome before. Please give me some feedback..hehehe. It's gonna be fun to see what ways I can change her by how she interacts with other persons.

Please give me feedback. I want her believable and not outlandish.

 

[SophiaM]

aint seen much of her, but that may change :16:

 

[Lillianne Crasse]

Uh oh....I'm scared now. Lirreka found Kyra and Arael interesting along with Sable...looks like I've attracted another potential bad person's eye! LOL.

 

[SophiaM]

no no, not bad, you'll like it

 

[Lillianne Crasse]

as much as I liked that Death guy when I was a padawan with Kyra? lol

 

[SophiaM]

no it won't be Gisho, someone much nicer

 

[Lillianne Crasse]

good...Gisho kinda scared me. Kept saying that death followed me when I was a good lil' Jedi...lol. Death did follow that character though in a major way. ROFL

 

[SophiaM]

this time its not death thats following her, its someone that IS dead

 

[Lillianne Crasse]

I'm curious to know why he's so interested in her...or is it in Kael? dun dun duuuuuuunnnn LOL

 

[Damien Nightblade]

Kinda lost about your death and what not.

But as far as Khaluq goes, i think shes great. From what ive seen so far she is auctually being influenced as far as her behavior and points of view and actions based on how others act towards her..something a lot have tried to do but never really nailed. She's *tony the tiger voice* GRRRREREEEAAAAT!

 

[Lillianne Crasse]

Yeah, I've worked hard with all my characters since Laili to get to the point where how they act is literally based on how others treat them. Laili had a story plot she had to follow a bit though so I didn't have as much freedom with her. Khaluq is completely different and has no real agenda at this point. It's really like a walking person who is influenced by their surroundings the way a character should be. I'm having a blast with her though Milla is more interesting right now..hehe.

 

[Kit Rendar]

Here's the story... of a lovely lady....


Just kidding. She is a bit innocent for from what I know of her background.

 

[Lillianne Crasse]

hehehe...you should always know I have twists to my characters.

 

[Raze]

yes, it never hurts to kick it up another notch... so yeah i guess.. :13:

 

[Arthas]

Well ideally I like there just to be a few innorcenet people around but the idea of being orphan at 9 is at worst interseting. I would personaly like a darker feel toward it but that is just me.