The Tickled Pink

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DISCLAIMER: I already wrote one of the establishment posts to this arc because I'm old-fashioned and didn't realize there was a new system in place. For that I am sorry. Please find it in your heart to forgive me.

  • What is going to happen in your plot?
    The overall goal of this plot is to investigate Rebel penetration into the Imperial Republica government. That sounds way more intense than I actually want it to be. Basically Jacob is a journalist and a politician has died in a strip club which alone would be enough for a journalist to have a field day with looking into their private life. However, the stripper picked the man's pockets and found a datachip (this part will be in the second establishment post) with accounting books detailing the transfer of money to (rebellion) friendly companies or people.

    The plot will be the journalistic, not criminal, investigation of this situation. Obviously since trolling through account books, which IRL would be much of this investigation, would not make for a particularly exciting story the investigation will be dramatized as a field report.

    The final product of this plot will be a journalistic exposé on the existence of corruption among low level politicians published as a one post thread, written as a Holo News Network article.​
  • What other players will be a part of this?
    At present only Black Noise as Larisa will be part of this plot.​
  • Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
    The plot will be centered on Zeltros, with maybe a few excursions to near-by worlds such as Coruscant, Commenor or Kuat.​
  • Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
    The main plot points that must be hit are as follows.
    [*]Politician dies in the Tickled Pink
    [*]Jacob or Larisa learn about and recover the datachip the stripper lifted from the politician either by convincing her or somehow liberating it from police custody (journalistic ethics are not a primary concern here).
    [*]They identify the transfer of money as aid to the rebellion.
    [*]They identify the recipients of the money
    [*]A plan is made to investigate why the politician was involved with said people or organizations as an aid to the rebels.
    [*]The investigation commences.
    [*]A certain amount of corrupt practices, shady dealings and political fixing is discovered. I should mention here that I don't want this to be on a massive scale since that would turn this in to a very complicated multi-thread faction plot. My goal is to keep it small scale but have a sensational aspect to it that would make for a good story and thus furthering Jacob's career. EG: Money laundering and a small rebel cell exposed.
    [*]The investigation ends.
    [*]Loose ends or residual conflicts are tied up or resolved.
    [*]Article is written.​
  • What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
    As I said at the beginning, Jacob has noted that the scandalous death of the politician in a strip club would make for an excellent story that could return his name to the front page. The whole plot is simply following breadcrumbs that started with the death and went a little deeper. That, and that alone is his main goal.​
  • Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
    I don't think the involvement of canon NPCs is needed. Most characters introduced will be either personal NPCs in Jacob's story-line (friends, family, etc) or there for exposition reasons in the story and exit quickly.​
 
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I know it's rude to request updates particularly since this is a busy time but I submitted on Monday and I was wonder about a status update?
 

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How do you plan to RP this out in a sensationalized field report way? Also how many threads do you expect this plot to take to play out? Including the final report.
 

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Hey @Lucid

Sorry we all seem to have somehow over looked this plot! No idea how that happened o.o

The plot looks solid and I like it, just a few things I'd say and then it can get final confirmation/approval and all that good stuff!

- Please remember that no one in Imperial space knows that the Galactic Alliance is actually a thing. They know there are pockets of resistance in some areas (cells of the GA) but the GA is totally unknown at this point.

- Please remove the bit about Imperial Intelligence knowing about this; it doesn't quite fit that the Intelligence service (which can be called a secret police force) wouldn't crack down on this kind of thing quick imo. If you can convince me otherwise then by all means however!

- As we're saying that this investigation could not uncover direct links to the GA, here are some alternatives that the plot team think would also work well for your character to uncover;

- Credit launders
- A single GA cell (who would not be able to point the finger at the GA)
- Both!

Sorry again about the delay and I hope this looks good to you!
 

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Edits made to remove the imperial intelligence thing.
Edits made to state that the extent will be to uncover money laundering and a single rebel cell.

Would it be possible to have Jacob uncover publish just the name "Galactic Alliance" and nothing more than that after they expose the GA cell?

I'm honestly unsure of how many threads this will take. My gut instinct is to do it in one but that could be confusing. So let's say three, including the final article thread, is that acceptable?

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What I meant by "dramatized field report" is that the RP thread(s) will be framed around their time in the field so you will be watching their investigation until the end when it is published and framed as an actual news report.
 

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Edits made to remove the imperial intelligence thing.
Edits made to state that the extent will be to uncover money laundering and a single rebel cell.

Would it be possible to have Jacob uncover publish just the name "Galactic Alliance" and nothing more than that after they expose the GA cell?

I'm honestly unsure of how many threads this will take. My gut instinct is to do it in one but that could be confusing. So let's say three, including the final article thread, is that acceptable?

@Arclight
What I meant by "dramatized field report" is that the RP thread(s) will be framed around their time in the field so you will be watching their investigation until the end when it is published and framed as an actual news report.

I'm 100% okay with the thread count and everything - I'm not okay about the name "Galactic Alliance" being discovered though. To me it's has way too much information just in the name, showing it's scale and what makes it up

Fine with you making up a name for the cell but I'm afraid it's a hard no on uncovering Galactic Alliance on any level I'm afraid.

That being said and accepted though?

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That's awesome, thanks! I forgot to ask Black Noise what Larisa wanted out of this but I assume either some tech or credits. I'll update when I know just to make sure it's ok.

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