Flying Dutchman
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Hello plot admins,
Here's a revamped version of my first plot submission, with the requested changes.
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Thread 1: Jerdesh travels to Jedha, where he enters the Holy City to find a Jedi Crusader (@Loco), who has information on the location of the lost data-pad of ancient master Zintoi. He also tells of the danger within the cave.
Thread 2: Jerdesh will use the obtained information to locate the last resting place of master Zintoi. He has to complete a task laid out by Zintoi before entering the cave. He follows the path to an ancient breeding place of a powerful creature.
Thread 3: Jerdesh enters the tomb after slaying the creature, uncovering Zintoi's tomb, and has to finish one last task in the burial before he can retrieve Zintoi's Datapads, objects of ancient wisdom.
Epilogue: Jerdesh returns to Ossus, hopefully with the holocron, to hand it over to Master Erach. He will submit his findings on Jedha, and study the datapads.
2. What other players will be a part of this?
@Loco, with his character Fennex Zeerda.
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Jedha, mostly. Ossus for the epilogue.
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread 1: Jerdesh lands on Jedha, enters the Temple of the Kyber to recover the information from Fennex.
Thread 2: Jerdesh explores Jedha. Finds Zintoi's final resting place. Finds a last clue that involves the demise of an ancient creature. Jerdesh goes on to fight the creature.
Thread 3: Jerdesh returns to the tomb with evidence of creature's demise; enters tomb and finds Zintoi's remains; Receives a final task from Zintoi's records; Succeeds to finish the task and recovers Zintoi's datapads.
Epilogue: Jerdesh returns to Ossus; shows holocron to Erach; opens datapad to find message.
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
The goal is to obtain ancient datapads, that of Master Zintoi, one of the members of the Second Jedi Council, in order to use it to invoke a sense of unity among the splintered Order, and to use its wisdom against the dark side.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
I don't know if any creatures on Tython require NPC RP-ing, but I do require the need of somebody DMing Master Riaca Erach in the epilogue, as she is the one that receives the artefact obtained in the plot.
(tagging @Insalius since he reviewed last time and knows if it's all right know)
Here's a revamped version of my first plot submission, with the requested changes.
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Thread 1: Jerdesh travels to Jedha, where he enters the Holy City to find a Jedi Crusader (@Loco), who has information on the location of the lost data-pad of ancient master Zintoi. He also tells of the danger within the cave.
Thread 2: Jerdesh will use the obtained information to locate the last resting place of master Zintoi. He has to complete a task laid out by Zintoi before entering the cave. He follows the path to an ancient breeding place of a powerful creature.
Thread 3: Jerdesh enters the tomb after slaying the creature, uncovering Zintoi's tomb, and has to finish one last task in the burial before he can retrieve Zintoi's Datapads, objects of ancient wisdom.
Epilogue: Jerdesh returns to Ossus, hopefully with the holocron, to hand it over to Master Erach. He will submit his findings on Jedha, and study the datapads.
2. What other players will be a part of this?
@Loco, with his character Fennex Zeerda.
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Jedha, mostly. Ossus for the epilogue.
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread 1: Jerdesh lands on Jedha, enters the Temple of the Kyber to recover the information from Fennex.
Thread 2: Jerdesh explores Jedha. Finds Zintoi's final resting place. Finds a last clue that involves the demise of an ancient creature. Jerdesh goes on to fight the creature.
Thread 3: Jerdesh returns to the tomb with evidence of creature's demise; enters tomb and finds Zintoi's remains; Receives a final task from Zintoi's records; Succeeds to finish the task and recovers Zintoi's datapads.
Epilogue: Jerdesh returns to Ossus; shows holocron to Erach; opens datapad to find message.
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
The goal is to obtain ancient datapads, that of Master Zintoi, one of the members of the Second Jedi Council, in order to use it to invoke a sense of unity among the splintered Order, and to use its wisdom against the dark side.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
I don't know if any creatures on Tython require NPC RP-ing, but I do require the need of somebody DMing Master Riaca Erach in the epilogue, as she is the one that receives the artefact obtained in the plot.
(tagging @Insalius since he reviewed last time and knows if it's all right know)
