The Hangover

Warwick · Jan 10, 2018

1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Crom and Jayjack find themselves targeted by a small time gang in the lower levels of Coruscant, the '66 Massiffs', named for their prevalence on Level 1366. After being drugged and finding themselves tied to chairs in a warehouse, the duo (with help from friends), must work to find out who is targeting them, why they're doing it, and how to stop them; with the eventual goal of revenge, by seeking out their leader and HQ, and taking them down.

2. What other players will be a part of this?
@Notorious , @Pishyakan & possibly more.

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Various levels of the Coruscanti Underworld.

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread One - Into The Pit - Jayjack meets Crom after betting on him in a fight. The two go partying and end up passing out, drunk.
Thread Two - Exposed - Jayjack and Crom awaken, tied to chairs in a warehouse, wearing nothing but underwear. They must fight their way out.
Thread Three - Hard News - Jayjack and Crom call in a favour from an old friend, hoping to find out who was behind their kidnapping.
Thread Four - Dead Ahead - Jayjack and Crom seek out as many friends and associates as they can, rallying forces to take revenge.
Thread Five - Hot & Heavy - Jayjack, Crom and friends head to the hideout of the gang, to resolve the feud in whatever way they can.

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
To remove the targeting of Jayjack and Crom by the small-time gang, possibly with the chance of wiping them out, or working alongside them, or turning them in to the police if necessary; essentially removing the targets from Jayjack and Crom's back, and earning some 'compensation' for what happened to them. It would be nice to each earn a piece of Advanced Tech, though of course we're reasonable people, and don't expect the world if this is not possible. We also acknowledge that a small time gang wouldn't have a fleet, and so there would likely only be a single individual's personal ship to steal, or a small amount of weapons, etc.

(Desired Rewards:)

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No canon NPCs or Faction Leaders; though there will be various PVE fights, which may be required to be monitored by a member of staff.

Other Info:
Our initial thread; Into The Pit; is already up, and ready to be viewed, if the quality of our roleplay needs to be assessed. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/into-the-pit.77190/unread

Deviant · Jan 10, 2018

Very interesting and detailed plot you have here, @Warwick.

Also, five threads for three pieces of advanced technology (as long as you stick to three participants) sounds like a lot... however, after briefly reviewing the first thread you linked, I was pleasantly surprised by the length. Fantastic job!

I would approve this as long as you maintain a similar length with the other threads (and keep it to three pieces of advanced tech), but I need to know what technology you want in particular. An armor set, an armor function, an advanced ship? I need names, links, and the like, because the importance of advanced technology varies.

For example, if all three of you want to receive an advanced ship each, you would need to up the threads and require someone to DM. But, if you choose to refer to an armor function or one weapon each, then it's good. Like I said, it varies.

I like that you're being open to this, but I need something concrete to follow.

Thanks!

Warwick · Jan 10, 2018

Thanks for the response, Deviant! Threads would aim to be 10-15 responses, from all participants, at least.

As for the reward; we're realistic, so we know there'd only be a small amount of things available to steal (along with IC credits), so how about 1 ADV Ship, 1 ADV Weapon and 1 ADV Armor Function; with the promise/intent of a total of 150 posts (around 50 posts per participant)? Would this be something you'd be okay with?

We've never done this before, so we're open to criticism, changes and support!

Oh, also would we need DMing from a staff member for the NPCs that are essentially mooks?

Thanks for the response!

-Warwick

Deviant · Jan 10, 2018

Yeah, no problem.

Also, for that amount of advanced rewards, a DM would be a must. Not just any ordinary DM, either, but most certainly one with an intent to maim, wound, and kill. Like me! :^)

Same with the length, it would most certainly need to reach a similar length to your first, which I don't doubt given your promise.

Or, as I mentioned, you can tone down the advanced rewards. Exchange the advanced ship for something generic. Up to you.

Warwick · Jan 11, 2018

Hey, as long as we don’t die in a bullshit way, or something completely unreasonable/unfair, that’s fine with me!

For the sake of realism, we can drop down the rewards too, now that I think about it. I think an advanced ship would be nice, along with some non-advanced weapons/armour.

Would this also decrease the difficulty?

Deviant · Jan 11, 2018

If you choose instead to go with just an advanced ship, then a DM won't be necessary at all.

Thanks!

Warwick · Jan 11, 2018

Deviant said:
If you choose instead to go with just an advanced ship, then a DM won't be necessary at all.

Thanks!

Ah, okie dokie. I’ll talk with my companions and confirm ASAP.

Warwick · Jan 11, 2018

So; after chatting with my crew, the rewards we'd like to aim for are as follows:
(Red for ADV, Green for Generic)

If you could let me know what this is going to require in terms of posting, and whether or not it'll require a DM, that'd be great, just to finalise. Thanks!

Deviant · Jan 11, 2018

Those color codes weren't necessary— mainly because they don't work on links and I had to go through them anyway. But, it's the thought that counts!

Since the only thing you're really getting out of this is the advanced fighter and a bunch of generic technology, DM is not required. As for length? Your promise is also not required, either. As long as you can hit average, or like a little over one page each thread, you're good in my book.

Sound good?

Warwick · Jan 12, 2018

Sounds perfect; thank you, Deviant!

Deviant · Jan 12, 2018

Of course.

Just don't forget to edit your submission to reflect those changes. Like, your endgame rewards.

After that, this should be all good for approval. Thanks!

Warwick · Jan 13, 2018

Deviant said:
Of course.

Just don't forget to edit your submission to reflect those changes. Like, your endgame rewards.

After that, this should be all good for approval. Thanks!

All done!

Deviant · Jan 14, 2018

Approved.

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