The Final Curtain

Zigara

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So given the new timeline is about a week away I'm just going to go ahead and post this and see if we can mark it as complete.
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Character Name and Link:
Bruce Guleya (LINK)
Character Level: 3
Character Rank: Jedi Council
Name of Plot: The Final Curtain
Participants in the plot (Character accounts): @Bruce Guleya (3); @Fennex Zeerda (3); @Ralaa Talus (3); @Marina Giulestei (3)
@Nefieslab for DM
Intended Outcome of Plot: Locate and Power on Eclipse Station / Base (System ; Base )
Actual Outcome of Plot: Fennex created his Holocron, Bruce created his Holocron, and Eclipse was located and a hidden Jedi Refuge was started under the everlasting guideance of Jedi Master Bruce Guleya
Any PVP or Staff DMing involved? No
Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:
  • Thread #1: Fading Wishes - Bruce and Fennex call Marina and Ralaa for a final meeting. They explain the plan of NOT fighting and instead hiding artifacts and knowledge of the Jedi Order.
  • Thread #2: A Desperate Refuge - Bruce returns to his homeplanet Bardotta and seeks refuge for a group of younglings he has taken into his care. The Dagoyan Order agrees and contributes to the younglings Force control and understanding while Bruce finishes his mission. DM'd by Nefie.
  • Thread #3: Jedha Revist - Fennex takes Ralaa & Marina to Jedha where they hide artifacts and little 'Jedi Starter Kits' for the future generations. (The cache is in a remote location)
  • Thread #4: Crystal Caverns - After Jedha, Marina heads to Hoth to where the Jedi had intended to build a temple. There she leaves more artifacts and kits for the future. Buried deep within the planet.
  • Thread #5: Rekindle and Fade - With Jedha done, Bruce and Fennex carry out one final mission and say their goodbyes. They hide more artifacts and kits away.
  • Thread #6: Flashlights in the Dark - With Dantooine behind him and his final goodbyes. an upset Bruce heads to Eclipse with Marina in search of a secret project created to act as a hidden base.
  • Thread #7: The Curtain Falls - With Eclipse operational, Bruce creates his holocron and keeps it close for years. Once the base established, Bruce gathers the younglings he left on Bardotta and the group continue to be a small pocket of Jedis to keep the traditions alive until they are called upon, but for now they lie in secret. (Over the years, Bruce creates a detailed library as well. I would also like Marina to NOW be considered a Jedi Master)

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    SO I NEED TO MAKE A NOTE!!


    I can't link the system entry that was approved. The Atlas is empty and hidden away.

    I wouldn't normally do this. With the timeline coming to a complete end here, I don't believe we have the time to successfully wrap up each individual thread. ALL of us ended up getting busy and wasn't able to devote as much time as we typically would have.

    With that being said, there's really only one thread that TRULY has an impact to the site. That's thread #6. That's the thread in which Bruce finds and starts up the base.
    Thread #2 was needed as a hideout and thread #7 was the outcome of everything and what the future holds. The rest of the threads are basically filler / fluff. I WOULD NOT TYPICALLY DO THIS IN TRUE PLOTS (and no one should either, FYI)

    With that being said, those threads are nearing done or are done and therefore I would like to be considered for completion, once again I would not do this but at this point credits don't actually matter either.

    I'm sorry for the sad turn out or lack of or whatever. I only want to be considered so that IF the team deems it plausible, I would like to see Eclipse and our Holocrons advance into the next timeline. Further, we will still keep plugging away at the threads until the official changeover.

    Thank you & Good Night.
 
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The Lore entries for the Holocrons are down in Archives if you want to view them, @Zigara, but they're also prepped in the new lore board for release at lainch.

To reiterate what zig said, I think most of these threads will be well progressed by the time we go down for relaunch, even if they dont have definitive conclusions.
 

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Lovely premise! However:

I understand how busy the days are leading up to the deadline, and I have no right to judge incomplete threads or a dip in activity, because I'm no different.

But from what's been seen and said, I cannot approve this submission the way it is. End of the timeline or not, it would be unfair to other members who underwent similar plots but in greater length and care. Of course, as you've said, it's still ongoing.

This plot will be reevaluated the day before the timeline ends by both @Malon and I. If improved, then approved!

Thanks.
 

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Awesome progress! Exceeded my expectations.

Credits rewarded, even if they're virtually worthless at this point. Still, what you asked for is all set in stone.

Thank you for being patient with me!
 

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No, @Deviant thank you for working with us. I appreciate your help.

The only thing I was hoping I'd be able to accomplish is to hit that level 4 mark (on my own / with the plot) but the difference might have been too great for a few days haha.

That is okay, I'm fairly happy.

Thanks to everyone.
@Loco @Nightfall @MatureContentWarningx
 
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