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A Wolf's Tale: The Cleansing

In the wake of Rowa's capture at the Wheel, he has been interrogated and for Oren Zapan believes he can be rehabilitated. Therefore by his request Rowa is to be sent to the planet Dantooine to see if Rowa can truly be brought to the light side of the Force. In doing so Rowa may possibly discover more about himself, both of his potential...and of his past...

What is going to happen in your plot?
Rowa begins his journey to the Light as the curtain of the lie is pulled back and long buried truths are revealed.

What other writers (and their characters) will be a part of this?
@Rowa (Played by @Kenico), @Oren Zapan (Played by @TWD26 [Threads 1 and 5]), @Indyana Sati (Played by @Killa Ree [Threads 1 and 5]), @Adenn Rytt (Played by @Timmen [Threads 2, 3, 4, and possibly 5])

How many threads will this plot have?
5
Thread 1 (Players involve Rowa, Oren Zapan, and Indyana Sati)
Thread 2 (Players involve Rowa and Adenn Rytt)
Thread 3 (Players Involve Rowa and Adenn Rytt)
Thread 4 (Players Involve Rowa, and Adenn Rytt)
Thread5 (Players involve Rowa, Oren Zapan, and Indyana Sati)

Include opposition type for each thread (DM, dice, ASK/OPEN, etc):
Ask/Open, DM (if applicable)

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game?” Link any items you’re seeking if applicable.
Rowa, through the assistance from a outsiders point of view (Adden Rytt), Manages to see through the lies of his former Master Xerxes. The end result is Rowa uncovering long buried secrets about himself...

Do you need any involvement of canon/site NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
None (Shouldn't really need any)
 
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First off sorry for the delay.

You only need to put the number of threads in the "How many threads will this plot have" and not explain each thread specifically just so you know. That's what the first section is for.

I advise you first find some people willing to do this plot with you since character plots are usually smaller in terms of participants (4 total people or less) Especially if you want to ask if a master (and not some random jedi) wants to lead Rowa's reformation that makes more sense than expecting a bunch of lightsiders training him all things considered.
 

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Alright I'll rewrite and try and find some Jedi (#volunteers can sign up here XD) but yeah no problem thanks for updating this XD
 

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@Darasuum, I did some modifications and added some players to the RP. I decided instead of going with them trying to train him he well, as the endgame part says gains and outsiders perspective and of course strikes up a rivalry with a Sith (who in turn kind of unwittingly helps in his redemption more on that as the story is revealed)
 

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@Darasuum, I did some modifications and added some players to the RP. I decided instead of going with them trying to train him he well, as the endgame part says gains and outsiders perspective and of course strikes up a rivalry with a Sith (who in turn kind of unwittingly helps in his redemption more on that as the story is revealed)
please limit the number of total participants to 4 (including your own character)
 

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I would have argued that Xath would only show up in one thread and the Jedi only show up in just the first and last threads, but I will make the needed changes. :)

And done

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Can you link subaccounts in the future in character section please.

It looks like most of your threads will just be between Rowa and Adenn who is not a lightsider so why does a Mandalorian helping out Rowa help him move towards the path of the light side?
 

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Well I figured that instead of a Jedi or a Sith pointing him towards the Lightside, why not a Mandalorian? Particularly since A: Rowas' path kind of sort of moves in that direction anyway, and B: Adenn's Clan has some familiarity with Force Sensitives since according to his Clans Lore they were ostracized by other Mandalorians due to their connection to the Force*. So having the Rytts a force sensitive mandalorian clan, kind of sort of give Rowa a different view point is an interesting thing...

Also aside from Killa Ree's Character who for some reason won't link, the rest are good @Darasuum

* @Timmen could you please clarify this cause i think i may be wrong about this statement?
 

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The previous statement is correct. Basically the Founder of Clan Rytt was a Tarre Viszla in the making but had the unfortunate timing of bwing born during the persecutions of Mandalore the Mad. He was ostricized when he attempted to return to his people and nearly lost his lifw in the deal but managed to begin a clan. In his old Age he meditated on the Force and is believed by the Rytts to have entered the Manda. He began a religion surrounding Kad Harangiir as a force being and inttoduced practices of the light side of the force and Jedi Order. it also included a comprehensive understanding of the Force as well.
*clarification* he was also inducted into the Jedi Order but left to rejoin his people
 
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The previous statement is correct. Basically the Founder of Clan Rytt was a Tarre Viszla in the making but had the unfortunate timing of bwing born during the persecutions of Mandalore the Mad. He was ostricized when he attempted to return to his people and nearly lost his lifw in the deal but managed to begin a clan. In his old Age he meditated on the Force and is believed by the Rytts to have entered the Manda. He began a religion surrounding Kad Harangiir as a force being and inttoduced practices of the light side of the force and Jedi Order. it also included a comprehensive understanding of the Force as well.
*clarification* he was also inducted into the Jedi Order but left to rejoin his people
Mandalore the Mad happend 6000 years ago, not 600 so if that was the intention of your lore writeup you might want to ask for that to get fixed. It also doesn't mention anything about Mandalore the Mad so maybe add that in there since that seems to be a major part of the clan's background.

Still, I can understand the angle so APPROVED
 
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