Strife

Strife

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NAME: Jack Archer (Goes By Strife)
FACTION: RANK: Sith, Dark Jedi
SPECIES: Human (Tatoonie)
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'5
WEIGHT: 174lbs
EYES:Orange-Yellow
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Brown?
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Strife is strong hand to hand fighter but mostly he refers using weapons. Since Strife is bond to no code of honor or nothing he fight dirty using anything his advantage.Strife is also able to fight on even grounds with much larger fools
DEXTERITY: Strife is a able to use his quick footing from years of fighting to dodge attack. He also very stealthy when it comes down to sneak into places
CONSTITUTION: Strife is in good health
INTELLIGENCE:Strife is a sinster person and he loves nothing else than taking adavantage of people. Strife looks as the universe as place that he must cause pain. Strife is also a intelligent person. He is able to look at person and guess what state of mind they in. Thats a good ability for Strife to manipulate them.
WISDOM: High
CHARISMA: High
FORCE POWERS:Force Push
Techinque he will try to learn over time
Force Persuasion
Force drain
Force Deflection (without a lightsaber)
Force Jump/Leap
Telekinesis
Force speed
Force Lightning


SKILLS:
Excells Highly in Hand to Hand combat
Skilled tactician.
Pro at Stealing

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form I: Shii-Cho, Dun Möch, Form VII: Juyo / Vaapad (Strife wants to learn it)
Strife wielded a self-built lightsaber containing a red crystal.
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strife is a maniputive person and always use is to his adavantage. His flaw that he becomes ignorant and cause him to get into trouble
GEAR:
Strife carrys but his lightsaber
SHIP:None

PETS:None

PERSONALITY:As a person, Strife was self-reliant, manipulative, and wary of the intentions of others. He used His skills at manipulation to maneuver himself into a position of power.Strife has a excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. Strife is blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin whenever he becomes excited.

BIOGRAPHY:
Strife stated of as Jack Archer, a child born on Tatoonie. He was born into a very poor family and at a young age never enjoyed life. His childhood was surrounded around one purpose to get stronger. At the age of 10 Jack watched as his entired family was wiped out by slave traders as they also capture him. Over the next 2 years Jack begins to show signs that he was force sensitve when he was able to move his chains without moving his body. After 2 years Jack was 12 years and he waited for the day to get revenge.

One day a man in dark robes came to the slave traders looking for someone. He than looks at Jack and walks up to him. He looks into Jack and eyes than asks him a question"Do you want revenge".Jack begins to smile as he answers yes as the man raises his hand at Jack's chains and breaks them. He than turns around and give Jack a blaster. Jack starts to grin as he points his blaster at the slave traders and starts to kill them. The man places his hand over Jack's shoulder and tells him that he will teach him how to become stronger.

The Man takes Jack to Korriban to train him. After landing in the Valley of the Dark Lords. Jack starts to feel a strange urge taking over him as he falls to the ground the man looks over Jack. He starts to explain that this is the homeworld of group of people called Sith. Than picks up Jack as he walks him towards. The man gives Jack a lightsabers parts to construct his own. jack begins to construct his lightsaber as the man closing watches over him. After a while, Jack has finished his lightsaber and the man looks on as he walks over to Jack. He begins to train Jack in the ways of Sith as Jack starts to show promise. At the age of 17, Jack finds a ancient sith Holocron which he opens it. The dark powers starts to pour from inside of it as Jack starts to be overpowered by it. The room starts to turn darks as the negative energy starts cover it. Jack layed on the ground as he slowly sees the man walking up to him.

He starts to tell Jack that he will die if he doesnt give in to the dark side of the force. Jack longing to live starts allow the dark powers to corupt the very being he is and after 20 mins Jack was now full of hatred. He looks at the man and tells, "from this day I will never go by the name of Jack. I want to be called Strife."Strife than begans to attack the man with his lightsaber and after the a intense battle the man layed there as Strife walked up to him.
Over the next 3 years Strife starts to look for a new master to train him in becoming stronger so he can betray him and take his power.
KILLS:None
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DUELING RING MATCHES:
No
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:No

ROLE-PLAYS:
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Brand

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There is a timeskip scheduled tentatively for this Friday; it'd be best to save this character for then as this whole board will be archived, unless you plan on changing all Sith references to only Dark Jedi as the Sith do not exist in this timeline and only using the character for two days. Otherwise, welcome aboard. :)
 

Ehrlich Mar

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Hmmm, interesting profile. Nice character picture; did you draw that yourself? If so, it's very good. :) Just a couple things I'd point out:

Perhaps this is just my opinion, but I believe that your character is a tad overpowered. You describe him as very good at everything with multiple lightsaber forms and many force powers; this is usually frowned upon when creating any new character, regardless of how long a person has been on the site. I'd try picking one lightsaber form, maybe four force powers, and lowering some of his statistics to make him a more interesting and fair character.

Also, in the weaknesses section you say that he becomes "ignorant." Judging from your previous description of the lad, I think the word you mean is "arrogant." I may well be wrong, of course.

Just a suggestion, of course. Welcome to the site!
 

Strife

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Ok but those are are lightsaber form and force abilty he wants to learn. Im going to edit profle but thanks for the help
 
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