Sith Order Severus Creed

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NAME:
Severus “Sev” Creed
FACTION:
Independent
RANK:
Nomad
SPECIES:
Half-Morellian
AGE:
27
GENDER:
Male
HEIGHT:
6’0”
WEIGHT:
172 lbs.
FORCE SENSITIVE:
Yes/Trained
HOMEWORLD:
Batuu

APPEARANCE:
Paler skin with black eyes, he has a scar across his face from a lightsaber attack during the Battle of Taris. He has thick black hair that goes to his shoulder. He likes to wear darker clothing namely dark ashy grey robes and a black hooded cloak. He’s always seen wearing long sleeves, even on planets where it would be more relaxing to show more skin. Severus, for unknown reasons, likes to remain covered almost completely, leaving his hands and head open for everyone to look at- even his neck is usually covered up by a turtle neck robe of some sort.

He now wears a helmet that has been fashioned to mimic that of the once living Sith Champion, Aziz. Severus sees Aziz as the person who unlocked his potential, even though Aziz had taken his leg in the process. The helmet is also worn to strike fear into those he meets in combat and to make things appear as if Aziz has come back to life to have his vengeance. Due to Severus’ serious OCD, he cut off both of his legs after the loss of his foreleg and replaced them with cybernetic legs just below the knee.

ATTRIBUTES:
Severus is a good pilot and likes to work on “Sundance” when he has nothing better to do, taking pieces of it apart and putting it back together again just for fun. He may be young, but that has not stopped him from learning as much as he can from the Force and what it has to offer.

He’s also trained in the basics of all the forms of lightsaber combat so he could perfect Form X, when it comes to fencing, using a quick and decisive defensive to make equally quick counter attacks to break his opponent’s defenses, using both offense and defense equally. Sev’s calculating and cunning personality greatly help his practice of this form, noticing weaknesses and acting upon them. Though, if he needs to, he will always fall back to using Form II.

He also studies biology and medicine frequently as he likes learning about other species and how things work on a molecular level as a way of trying to understand people. As such, he knows of various non-Force related ways to heal others and patch them up while also being pretty adept in understanding how a certain creature works compared to others and being pretty tech savy, and occasionally shares these bits of information to show off- but this is the one of the few things he'll actually take pride in.

Sev is incredibly smart for someone his age and has a knack for noticing things that most people don’t pick up on right away whether it’s investigating a crime scene or picking up on an opponent’s fencing flaw so he can end the fight faster than it started. This intellect comes with the price of Severus excluding himself from social situations. In all aspect of the word, Sev is very anti-social. Because of this, Severus is usually not called upon to serve as a negotiator and isn’t the best at making friends, though his behavior doesn’t really allow an opening for potential enemies either.



PERSONALITY:
Sev appears to be very cynical, cold, and sarcastic for someone his age. But this bitterness is 60% of the time just Severus not knowing how to talk to people, but the other 40% of the time it’s actually directed to someone on purpose. He may seem like one to enjoy a fight, but he doesn't delight in infighting and believes that it is extremely counter productive for the Jedi Order so he tries to down play some situations the best he can, but his lack of social skills usually don't help him out much.

He's pretty mature and thinks of most others around his age or even older to be very immature which contributes to his natural disdain for the people around him. He gets along with very few and Sev struggles with the concept of how to make friends and is usually terribly awkward when trying to make connections with others on his own. Sometimes he thinks he's made friends with someone when the other person probably doesn't feel the same way either as well.

Severus may not be very good at socializing but that doesn’t stop his tongue from acting like a dagger, as when he finds something that he can use against someone he doesn’t like to well, he will definitely use it. Otherwise he’ll just keep to himself which he does with most things, being very secretive about almost everything. Sometimes he does it to give his peers a sense of paranoia that he knows something dreadful about them, but 90% of the time it’s just because he prefers keeping his private life private.

During his time as a Jedi, Severus Creed may not have seemed like your stereotypical Jedi, but in the end he was extremely loyal to the Order and the Jedi Code and despite his bitterness. He still is a good student and can be very patient and long suffering when it means he can grow in knowledge and in the Force. Now, as a Sith, Severus believes himself to be free of holding back his once thought to be dark ambitions. He values freedom above all else and will not tolerate being ordered around like some mindless soldier.


BIOGRAPHY:
4 yrs old- Taken to the Jedi Order to be trained in the ways of the Force. Severus was sold by his parents to the Grimmhook Crime Family- a sect of Crimson Dawn that specialized in Force related artifacts and has been kidnapping Force sensitive children to bring up as Inquisitors for the Sith Empire. He became a Padawan. Bounces around Jedi mentors but lingers with Alexandria Voran more often than not. Severus was rescued by Alexandria Voran from "Two-Face Hardware" and taken to the Jedi Order to train as a Padawan Learner.

At 14, he found his kyber crystal and creates his lightsaber; orange blades with crossgaurd hilt.
Severus found his parents on Zeltros, but after learning that they sold him because they wanted the money, he left to Jedha instead of Yavin IV to blow off steam and eventually came across his kyber crystal on accident. He took it back to Yavin IV and in a week, he created his own crossguard lightsaber hilt with an orange blade. A Sith scarred Sev’s face on the battle of Taris. Due to his lack of knowledge on Force Healing, he was only able to fix himself up enough to regrow his hair. Severus kept the lightsaber and has been trying to learn how to purify the crystal. Through the saber, he has been learning- but not practicing -about the Dark Side and it's nature.

However, Severus soon fell under the influence of the Dark Side, thinking he could use his fall from grace to infiltrate the Sith. Upon requesting such a dangerous endeavor with the Grandmaster, she declined and took the Sith Lightsaber from him. Then, on the battle of Taris, Severus was brought to Mustafar as a prisoner of war. This is where he met the Ex-Sith Lord, Darth Veles, who was responsible for swaying Severus to completely give himself up to the Dark Side. Severus then left to meet his parents again on Zeltros, only to find that they had actually kidnapped him and sold him to Crimson Dawn.

However, Severus still longed to serve the Grandmaster and requested a meeting with her on Batuu. His hopes were to have her help find his true parents, but it all went wrong when she asked him if he had joined the Sith. He was then captured and returned to Yavin VI, never to be let out of his prison again. But, when the Sith would come and take the world for themselves, Severus was able to escape. However, instead of joining the ranks of the Sith, he decided that he needed to completely understand what was worth fighting for and left to the Outer Rim never to be seen again.


LIGHTSABER FORMS:
Form X(Primary)
Form II (Secondary)

GEAR:
Cross-guard Lightsaber [Orange Blade] (1)
Single bladed Dual-Phase Lightsaber [Blue Blade] (1)
Datapad (1)
Comlink (1)
Utility Belt (1)

ARMOR:
Sith Armor (1)
Black Jedi Wanderer Robes (1)


SHIPS:
Belbellub-22 Starfighter “Sundance” (1)
 
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I posted this in discord, should have probably put it here as an inform. Chiss force sensitivity goes away around age 16-18, so that might impact your character as a jedi. Pantorans are a good alternative if you want similar background and aesthetic.
 

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Thanks for the heads up, Wit!

As a quick edit note: I'm just going to have him be human, it makes the rewrite a little easier.
 
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I like him, lots of detail. Awesome! Give us a shout if ever you want to thread 😀
 

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Absolutely, my man!!
 
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