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Phoenix

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Character Profile Link: Hannibal
Character Subaccount Link: Grayza
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Summary of Deeds: Along with Ash Valentine, Hannibal worked to recover cultural artifacts belonging to the people of Eriadu, avoiding violence whenever possible. When Durr the Hutt's holonet transmission resulted in a gathering of Jedi he loudly and abrasively made his opinions on the matter known, pushing heavily for cooperation and trust. He led a guerilla strike against the malicious Jade Company mercenary group raiding Cantonica, guiding two weaponless Padawans and a Syndicate medic through the warzone.

Twice he encountered the renowned terrorist and criminal killer, the Arcanist. Pure luck brings Hannibal and Ash Valentine into contact with the Arcanist in person, though Hannibal and Ash failed to stop him or capture him before he made his escape. The second meeting was in a smuggler's port on Nar Shaddaa. Though the Arcanist walked away, Hannibal managed to prevent his use of explosives through sheer, stubborn obnoxiousness, as neither of them was looking for a fight in the streets. When another gathering of Jedi was called by Ky Maryk regarding the slaughter of innocents on Mimban, Hannibal handed off the information he'd gathered on the Arcanist so far and put forth the idea the two groups may be connected somehow.

When Master Oren was arrested, Hannibal went along with Maxims to visit him in prison and present a different face of the Jedi. There he sincerely offered to help the Rangers in their work investigating and bringing down the saber-wielding terrorists, hoping to alter their perception of the Jedi Order.

He has overall tried to make himself seen, heard, and useful whenever he can. Despite his attitude, Hannibal is trying his best to be a Jedi worthy of the Order in deeds if not necessarily attitude.

Link To IC Threads:

  1. Cultural Reappropriation (Ongoing)
  2. The Cycle of the Force
  3. Fighting the Jade Company (Ongoing)
  4. Sending the Wrong Message
  5. The Final Nail
  6. Black Tidings
  7. Listen to the Man
Character Profile Link: Here
Subaccount Link: @Talon Vizsla
Current Reputation: Unknown
Reputation Seeking: Notable Newcomer
Requested Region: Outer Rim
Link to Reputation Tracker: Here
Summary of Deeds:
Talon's most notable deed was gaining initiation in the BHG by bringing in the criminal Jon Kabian. This included hunting down an associate of his, killing multiple body guards, and taking out an AT-ST. He has established a strong relationship with @Dolworth and @Timmen, two members of a bounty hunting group that he joined. He competed in a friendly competition with 5 other PC's, including a two sector rangers. He has fought against pirates on Rishi alongside those same two sector rangers and a mandalorian.

OOC Plot: Hunting Jon Kabian
Includes IC Threads:
The Meeting
The Interrogation
The Flight
The Hunt
The Capture
The Turn-in

Other IC Threads:
Blazing Engines: Talon joins a Bounty Hunting group.
The Biggest Iron in All the Sands: Talon competes in a shooting competition.
Ranger Down: Talon fights pirates to save a Sector Ranger.
Character Profile Link: Dolworth Solus
Subaccount Link: Dolworth
Current Reputation: Unknown
Reputation Seeking: Notable Newcomer
Link to Reputation Tracker: Dolworth Solus
Summary of Deeds: While looking for work on Nar Shaddah, Dolworth Solus met and joined the crew of the Spooky Mistress, gaining comraderie with the Two Mandalorians @Adenn Rytt and @Talon Vizsla. After agreeing that a source of income via bounty hunting would be profitable, the trio of Mandalorians set out and capture Jon Kaiban, a wanted criminal from Ord Cantrell. During this time they discovered the crooks genocide of Clan Rytt and avenged it along with the Saving of @Etr Wyara. Upon Completion and turning of the bounty, Dolworth would encounter the warrior @Song Wren during a later job on Lothal.
Link To IC Threads:
Blazing Engines
That Awkward Moment
The Meeting
The Interrogation
The Flight
The Hunt
The Capture
The Turn-In

All three of your gentlemen are approved for reputation increase. Congratulation notable newcomers!
 

Timmen

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Character Profile Link: Adenn Rytt
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Summary of Deeds: While on Nar Shadaa looking to hire a smuggler, the Mandalorian @Adenn Rytt ran in another two Mandalorians @Talon Vizsla and @Dolworth, recruiting them into working for themselves. Upon deciding the three of them would do well as bounty hunters they decide upon entering the Bounty Hunters Guild, choosing the target, Jon Kabian, as their initiation bounty. The Pack of Mandalorians Flew to Ord Cantrell, Seeking information on the Criminal, Only to have their First Lead killed and causing the location of aforementioned Lead to break out into a gun fight. Upon the end of the Gunfight the only survivor was taken Prisoner bt Rytt and the others, who, Upon leading them to the gang's hideout, attempted to Kill Adenn for killing his brother. After a struggle Adenn finally killed the man, blasting him and then removing his lungs and heart with his bare hands. Adenn would discover later that his Clan had been massacred at the hands of Kabians gangs and he dawned his father's armor and became the new leader of clan Rytt. The group were lead to the Planet of Sorgan where Kabian was hiding. There they fought many more of his thugs with the assistance of Etr Wyara, Adenn's Nephew, who had been enslaved by Jon Kabian. Upon the successful capture of Kabian following the destruction of his AT-ST, the group brought him to the client who attempted to Fleece them but after hard nagotiations a settlement of 20,000 credits was arranged, but only after the destruction of the clients new "security system" a small group of B1 Battle Droids.
Link To IC Threads:
Blazing Engines
The Meeting
The Interrogation
The Flight
The Hunt
The Capture
The Turn-In
 

Sreeya

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Subaccount Link: @Trys Aran
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Requested Region: Deep Core
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Summary of Deeds: Trys has been very actively involved in solving cases pertaining to slaver rings in the outer ring and also tracking serial killers. Her work has gotten her involved in tracking down the red sabers and in the target of the terrorist organization. As she had been collected a lot of evidence on the Red Sabers, this led to her promotion to Lieutenant and also her assignment as lead on the Arcanist case. She has since assigned task orders to other Rangers and taken on a larger responsibility. Trys arrested a Jedi Master that had violated the law and has gone on Holonet to report the results. Her face became recognized throughout the Deep Core media, and it soon garnered the attention of the Red Sabers after she made it clear she was hunting them. Since there, a Holo has been posted where Rangers were executed live and she has been named a target of the Red Sabers.

  • Payback - Trys, with the aid of Talak, solves a murder and busts three slaving ring locations. (Note that this thread is 188 replies long and can be considered the equivalent of multiple threads. Please review the reply length/content to verify that a lot of work went into this)
  • On The Trail - Profiling of a mass murdering Sith that includes mug shots and weapons. Perp successfully logged into Ranger database.
  • Piecing The Puzzle - Mass murdering Red Saber linked to Mimban. Footage of complete evidence successfully obtained from this investigation to tell the complete story of what happened on Mimban.
  • Rangers Assemble - Trys presents her findings to the chief on Force users and is assigned to lead the effort.
  • Sector Ranger Assignments - Trys assigns tasks to other Rangers on the Force users. I'm including this because all but one thread are completed, and the last thread is almost done.
  • Jedi master arrested - Trys arrests and formally announces the arrest and the revelation that she's aware of red sabers.
  • Calamity - Trys is personally called out and targeted on Holonet for her efforts

I have a ton more threads if needed, but these are the big relevant ones. Also, she has been promoted to Lieutenant which should also hopefully add to rep.
 

Phoenix

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Character Profile Link: Adenn Rytt
Subaccount Link: Adenn
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Summary of Deeds: While on Nar Shadaa looking to hire a smuggler, the Mandalorian @Adenn Rytt ran in another two Mandalorians @Talon Vizsla and @Dolworth, recruiting them into working for themselves. Upon deciding the three of them would do well as bounty hunters they decide upon entering the Bounty Hunters Guild, choosing the target, Jon Kabian, as their initiation bounty. The Pack of Mandalorians Flew to Ord Cantrell, Seeking information on the Criminal, Only to have their First Lead killed and causing the location of aforementioned Lead to break out into a gun fight. Upon the end of the Gunfight the only survivor was taken Prisoner bt Rytt and the others, who, Upon leading them to the gang's hideout, attempted to Kill Adenn for killing his brother. After a struggle Adenn finally killed the man, blasting him and then removing his lungs and heart with his bare hands. Adenn would discover later that his Clan had been massacred at the hands of Kabians gangs and he dawned his father's armor and became the new leader of clan Rytt. The group were lead to the Planet of Sorgan where Kabian was hiding. There they fought many more of his thugs with the assistance of Etr Wyara, Adenn's Nephew, who had been enslaved by Jon Kabian. Upon the successful capture of Kabian following the destruction of his AT-ST, the group brought him to the client who attempted to Fleece them but after hard nagotiations a settlement of 20,000 credits was arranged, but only after the destruction of the clients new "security system" a small group of B1 Battle Droids.
Link To IC Threads:
Blazing Engines
The Meeting
The Interrogation
The Flight
The Hunt
The Capture
The Turn-In

The plot is definitely a good start, but I'd like to see him RP with a couple of other PCs before he ranks up. I'm going to decline this for the moment.


Character Profile Link: Link
Subaccount Link: @Trys Aran
Current Reputation: Unknown
Reputation Seeking:Regional
Requested Region: Deep Core
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Summary of Deeds: Trys has been very actively involved in solving cases pertaining to slaver rings in the outer ring and also tracking serial killers. Her work has gotten her involved in tracking down the red sabers and in the target of the terrorist organization. As she had been collected a lot of evidence on the Red Sabers, this led to her promotion to Lieutenant and also her assignment as lead on the Arcanist case. She has since assigned task orders to other Rangers and taken on a larger responsibility. Trys arrested a Jedi Master that had violated the law and has gone on Holonet to report the results. Her face became recognized throughout the Deep Core media, and it soon garnered the attention of the Red Sabers after she made it clear she was hunting them. Since there, a Holo has been posted where Rangers were executed live and she has been named a target of the Red Sabers.

  • Payback - Trys, with the aid of Talak, solves a murder and busts three slaving ring locations. (Note that this thread is 188 replies long and can be considered the equivalent of multiple threads. Please review the reply length/content to verify that a lot of work went into this)
  • On The Trail - Profiling of a mass murdering Sith that includes mug shots and weapons. Perp successfully logged into Ranger database.
  • Piecing The Puzzle - Mass murdering Red Saber linked to Mimban. Footage of complete evidence successfully obtained from this investigation to tell the complete story of what happened on Mimban.
  • Rangers Assemble - Trys presents her findings to the chief on Force users and is assigned to lead the effort.
  • Sector Ranger Assignments - Trys assigns tasks to other Rangers on the Force users. I'm including this because all but one thread are completed, and the last thread is almost done.
  • Jedi master arrested - Trys arrests and formally announces the arrest and the revelation that she's aware of red sabers.
  • Calamity - Trys is personally called out and targeted on Holonet for her efforts

I have a ton more threads if needed, but these are the big relevant ones. Also, she has been promoted to Lieutenant which should also hopefully add to rep.

Approved! Congratulations!
 

Nefieslab

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Character Profile Link: Maxims Tionson
Subaccount Link: @Maxims Tionson
Current Reputation: Unknown
Reputation Seeking: Notable Newcomer
Link to Reputation Tracker: Max Tionson Reputation Tracker
Summary of Deeds: Max has taken on several Jedi Padawans and worked hard within the Order both on his own missions and others. He has aided Eriadu in their time of need, arranging Jedi-based relief forces (2 completed missions personally to be considered even please even if the pack is bogged down OOC). Equally he has aided the efforts of the Jedi on Ifane to collect Wyck's holocron and assisted efforts in securing the ruins on Yavin 4, securing a rather generic holocron but amongst rescued relics. He had participated in some of the Jedi discussions going on but has focused on aiding the Jedi repair their relationship with the Sector Rangers, meeting with Oren and Trys after Oren's arrest and beginning joint operations with Rangers. So far he has managed to avoid taking a single life.
Link To IC Threads:

  1. Emotion yet Peace - Despite falling foul of both the environment and the local pirate band, Max managed to get his allies through their injuries and even talked down the pirates, at the cost of his private ship.
  2. Ignorance, yet Knowledge - Maxims and his group make their way past the molten rivers, and find an old Imperial Mining Facility. They make their way through the remnants of a bygone Empire as they look for help for Saul and Moza, as well as a way to power the lift that would take them to the Praxeum.
  3. Death, yet the Force - Darkside apparitions appear and Max, Oren, and Izel have to cleanse the darkside by giving parts of themselves to cleanse it. With the darkness gone, the temple doors slowly shift open to reveal Wyck's Holocron, and the mysteries of a bygone Era.
  4. Eriadu - Waterproofing - Max and Oren go to sort out the cause of the pollution in the water supply. They overcome the threat of violence and challenges with non-violence and peaceful self-sacrifice.
  5. Heavy Lifting - Max and his apprentice Nashyr clear the main routes into the city on Eriadu of rubble after securing some shaped charges from some security droids. Their efforts open the city up to mechanized assistance again.
  6. Valley of the Shadow - Max and a fellow Jedi are charged with stopping grave robbers and treasure hunters on Yavin 4.
  7. Listen to the Man - Max and Hannibal met with Trys and spoke to her and Oren about how Oren came to be imprisoned. He hoped to make a favorable impression on the Ranger and ensure Oren knew that the Order would not forget about him, while promising greater assistance from the Jedi in the investigation into the red sabers.
 

Darasuum

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Character Profile Link: Roland Rook
Subaccount Link: @Roland
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Reputation Seeking: Notable Newcomer
Link to Reputation Tracker: link
Summary of Deeds & links:


Log 1 - Early Days

Roland worked frequently in the outer rim and stuck to it for the most part even when there was a known lack of cooperation in Hutt space. Trying to work covertly and gather information on Gurrba the Hutt (and associates) he got entangled in the events around the Hutt's fighting Pit. Coincidentally the disguised Sith Eternal operators Talak and partnered Five Syndicates scoundrel Alais (at the time) had infiltrated ahead of him, running into Sector Ranger Duke Winters. While Roland did not directly interact with either of them during the incident he did manage to infiltrate the security center and subsequently recover recordings of the events that had previously taken place.

Numerous other occurrences of force sensitives came to light and a broadcast from Durr the Hutt explained plenty. Returning to Coruscant he brought his intelligence directly to Chief Hudson with consideration for how things might look for fellow Ranger Winters. Towards the end Roland was granted permission to look into the Quarzite angle as well as links to the Bounty Hunters Guild.

The arrest of Oren Zapan the Jedi Order and the Sector Rangers arranged a meeting which Roland took part in along with recently promoted Lieutenant Aran and Duke Winters. Afterwards with assignments from Lieutenant Aran, he returned to Nar Shaddaa and encountered another person searching for information, not realizing it was a Jedi by the name of Hannibal. During that time Roland was able to recover the data of what type of slicing equipment and programs had been used by the disguised perpetrator for future forensics should the suspect utilize the home made program again.

Recently the attack on the Coruscant Prison had Roland Rook face off against a mandalorian helmeted Knight of Ren being the first non-force sensitive person to defeat a dark sider in open combat since the Battle of Exagol over a century ago. While he defeated Sin he was not able to aid anybody else until it became apparent the prison was being evacuated. Roland stole the starfighter belonging to his defeated opponent and also the BG unit which contained the records of where the Knight of Ren had previously traveled allowing the Sector Rangers to learn of other Knights locations.




plain thread links:
1) The Pit
2) Rangers Assemble!
3) For His Eyes Only
4) Intergalactic Incident
5) Returning to the Rubble
6) Attack on Coruscant Prison
 

TWD26

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Character Profile Link: Oren Zapan
Subaccount Link: @Oren Zapan
Current Reputation: Notable Newcomer
Reputation Seeking: Regional
Requested Region: Deep Core
Link to Reputation Tracker: Here
Summary of Deeds: So a ton has happened since my last request. Oren has reached the rank of Jedi Master and has assisted in the investigations on the Red Sabers arrival within the galaxy. He's helped guide Jedi on where to investigate, has assisted in his own searches. His investigations lead to a confrontation with The Rain, and which lead to his arrest which was put on full display to the galaxy for everyone to see. His arrest put the relationship between the Jedi and the Rangers at danger, but it caused both sides to come together and slowly form the alliance that they have today.

He's aided in several Jedi Missions across space, and was one of the Jedi that discovered AMS, and has been working with Trys Aran on finding the origins. He also, with the help of Trys and another Jedi caught a Knight of Ren, and also served on the front lines against the Sith Champions when the Sith Eternal Champion arrived.

Link To IC Threads:

Jedi Knight Threads
The Cycle Of The Force
Helping the Lost

A Second Chance
The Shadow of The Temple
Déjà vu
There's More Than Sand

Jedi Master Threads
The Great Disease
A recently promoted Oren travels the galaxy, putting the weight of the order on his shoulders, he goes out to the galaxy, seeking to find the truth about the Arcanist and other darksiders, which changes his fate and many around him forever.

Thread TitleDescriptionStatus
Paths Cross
While searching for clues on darksiders, Oren comes across Talak's apprentice Llilth, the two of them have a moment and share blades in public--he's badly wounded and arrested.
Completed
Wrong Place, Wrong TimeOren is in custody of the Sector Rangers after being caught on Naboo, he offers his case to the ranger, but is ultimately detained.Completed
Hitting the BooksWhile in Custody, Oren has a dream about Nash where his mind conjures up her dream like appearance, who then offers him words of wisdom about his failures.Completed
Jedi Master ArrestedThe news of his arrest is broadcast to the galaxy at large, painting an image on his back and the ranger who took him in.Completed
Listen to The ManA group of Jedi come to visit Oren during his imprisonment, they seek to free him, but also learn about the actions that had lead to his arrest.Completed
Connected FatesOren is visited by Lilith in prison, via a force vision. The two's bond continue to grow, as Oren Purify's one of her blades through the force, and the two share what haunts them.Completed


Returning to Life
Two years have passed while Oren was in prison for his actions on Coruscant. His body and mind has slowly changed, though his desire and understanding of those close to him have been paused. A lot can happen in two years and Oren has to learn to pick up his life in a galaxy that has kept moving without him.

Thread TitleDescriptionStatus
Sand Surf SunshineAfraid to return directly back to the temple, Oren heads to the golden beaches of Rishi. In a drunken state he calls Nash to visit him, where the two open up about their feelings they never got to share.Completed
Kept You WaitingOren meets with one of his oldest friends, Mila, and the two reconnect and share a moment.Completed
Reunions and RocksOren returns to his apprentice, and the one person he's closest to, Nara. He apologizes for leaving her without a word, and expresses that she's ready to become a knight.Completed
Reluctant DuosPart of Oren's rehabilitation back into the galaxy is to serve community service with the Sector Rangers. Oren contacts them with information pertaining to a Bio-Terrorist Organization he had been hunting as a knight, but when Officer Trys arrives--he knows things are about to become interesting.Progress
Time for EverythingOren meets the Arcanist on Naboo, the two talk for a short bit of time, about the philosophy of the Jedi and his actions. The two realize that they are both outsiders in their Order, and that they could be of use to each other.Completed
A New LifeOren, feeling estranged in the temple, wanders the halls. But, the Force in its mysterious ways draws the energetic youngster, Asaara, into his life.Progress
Cool Diplomacy For Hot HeadsOren's first mission back with the Jedi is to Chandrila, where he and Nashyr attempt to stop riots.Completed
Gilded NightsTrying to get the scoop on a mob boss on Nar Shaddaa can be hard enough. Sprinkle in a complicated young woman with a knack for destroying things, and ties to the Jedi...it seems the night is only going to get more complicated.Completed


The Tenants of a Jedi
With conflict growing within the galaxy, a voice is needed for the galaxy, each generation and era needs one. Yoda, Obi-Wan, Luke & Leia, and Rey Skywalker. The galaxy needs someone that is willing to stand for others, and to be the mantle of the light, and Oren has come to the realization on what he must do. Thus, he has taken to the galaxy, exploring the force, mastering skills, doing right, and preparing his mind and body to become that vessel.

Thread TitleDescriptionStatus
TransitioningA young Jedi with great promise, Fiach, is in need of a mentor to progress her training in the force. Oren offers to take her on, and together they begin to study advanced force concepts.Progress
Return of a JediA mysterious Jedi Knight returns to Ajan Kloss after years of being away, to find out if the news of the Dark Side's return is true.Completed
Attention Shoppers: Blasters on Aisle ThreeOren with the help of Trys and Jedi Knight Vin, stop and capture a Sith Eternal LegionnaireCompleted
Cleanup on Aisle ThreeOren meets with the captured Knight of Ren, and questions him on who he is, and decide to give him a second chance on life.Completed
Attack on Coruscant PrisonOren arrives to the Ranger's help with his fellow Jedi, and the aide in the defense of the prison, but it's quickly overrun and he loses the love of his life in the process.Completed
Honoring the DeadThe Memorial Service for Nashyr and Saul are held on Ajan Kloss. Oren meets with several others that come to sympathize with him about his loss.Progress
Blind SidedOren and Nashyr were supposed to track down the destination of the Star Map he found on Ifrane, but with her death, he is now lost. During the funeral, Oren and Nara decide to honor her memory by heading to the stars to discover what's waiting...Progress
Changing DestinyWith the event on the prison, the galaxy is facing a lot of uncertainty. Oren and the Rain meet nearly a year after the events on Nar Shaddaa, where the two of them reconcile about their own guilt.Progress


Other Information:
Let me know if you would like more threads! A lot of those "Progress" threads are about a post or two away from being finished. Thanks!
 
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Sreeya

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Character Profile Link: Maxims Tionson
Subaccount Link: @Maxims Tionson
Current Reputation: Unknown
Reputation Seeking: Notable Newcomer
Link to Reputation Tracker: Max Tionson Reputation Tracker
Summary of Deeds: Max has taken on several Jedi Padawans and worked hard within the Order both on his own missions and others. He has aided Eriadu in their time of need, arranging Jedi-based relief forces (2 completed missions personally to be considered even please even if the pack is bogged down OOC). Equally he has aided the efforts of the Jedi on Ifane to collect Wyck's holocron and assisted efforts in securing the ruins on Yavin 4, securing a rather generic holocron but amongst rescued relics. He had participated in some of the Jedi discussions going on but has focused on aiding the Jedi repair their relationship with the Sector Rangers, meeting with Oren and Trys after Oren's arrest and beginning joint operations with Rangers. So far he has managed to avoid taking a single life.
Link To IC Threads:

  1. Emotion yet Peace - Despite falling foul of both the environment and the local pirate band, Max managed to get his allies through their injuries and even talked down the pirates, at the cost of his private ship.
  2. Ignorance, yet Knowledge - Maxims and his group make their way past the molten rivers, and find an old Imperial Mining Facility. They make their way through the remnants of a bygone Empire as they look for help for Saul and Moza, as well as a way to power the lift that would take them to the Praxeum.
  3. Death, yet the Force - Darkside apparitions appear and Max, Oren, and Izel have to cleanse the darkside by giving parts of themselves to cleanse it. With the darkness gone, the temple doors slowly shift open to reveal Wyck's Holocron, and the mysteries of a bygone Era.
  4. Eriadu - Waterproofing - Max and Oren go to sort out the cause of the pollution in the water supply. They overcome the threat of violence and challenges with non-violence and peaceful self-sacrifice.
  5. Heavy Lifting - Max and his apprentice Nashyr clear the main routes into the city on Eriadu of rubble after securing some shaped charges from some security droids. Their efforts open the city up to mechanized assistance again.
  6. Valley of the Shadow - Max and a fellow Jedi are charged with stopping grave robbers and treasure hunters on Yavin 4.
  7. Listen to the Man - Max and Hannibal met with Trys and spoke to her and Oren about how Oren came to be imprisoned. He hoped to make a favorable impression on the Ranger and ensure Oren knew that the Order would not forget about him, while promising greater assistance from the Jedi in the investigation into the red sabers.

Please see here for Maxims being removed from the Will plot and not having it count to his rep. I don't see Eriadu in completed plots. However, if you can point to a few more threads that aren't socials and larger story contributing things, then I'd be willing to bump up to NN. More like the last one.


Character Profile Link: Roland Rook
Subaccount Link: @Roland
Current Reputation: Unknown
Reputation Seeking: Notable Newcomer
Link to Reputation Tracker: link
Summary of Deeds & links:


Log 1 - Early Days

Roland worked frequently in the outer rim and stuck to it for the most part even when there was a known lack of cooperation in Hutt space. Trying to work covertly and gather information on Gurrba the Hutt (and associates) he got entangled in the events around the Hutt's fighting Pit. Coincidentally the disguised Sith Eternal operators Talak and partnered Five Syndicates scoundrel Alais (at the time) had infiltrated ahead of him, running into Sector Ranger Duke Winters. While Roland did not directly interact with either of them during the incident he did manage to infiltrate the security center and subsequently recover recordings of the events that had previously taken place.

Numerous other occurrences of force sensitives came to light and a broadcast from Durr the Hutt explained plenty. Returning to Coruscant he brought his intelligence directly to Chief Hudson with consideration for how things might look for fellow Ranger Winters. Towards the end Roland was granted permission to look into the Quarzite angle as well as links to the Bounty Hunters Guild.

The arrest of Oren Zapan the Jedi Order and the Sector Rangers arranged a meeting which Roland took part in along with recently promoted Lieutenant Aran and Duke Winters. Afterwards with assignments from Lieutenant Aran, he returned to Nar Shaddaa and encountered another person searching for information, not realizing it was a Jedi by the name of Hannibal. During that time Roland was able to recover the data of what type of slicing equipment and programs had been used by the disguised perpetrator for future forensics should the suspect utilize the home made program again.

Recently the attack on the Coruscant Prison had Roland Rook face off against a mandalorian helmeted Knight of Ren being the first non-force sensitive person to defeat a dark sider in open combat since the Battle of Exagol over a century ago. While he defeated Sin he was not able to aid anybody else until it became apparent the prison was being evacuated. Roland stole the starfighter belonging to his defeated opponent and also the BG unit which contained the records of where the Knight of Ren had previously traveled allowing the Sector Rangers to learn of other Knights locations.




plain thread links:
1) The Pit
2) Rangers Assemble!
3) For His Eyes Only
4) Intergalactic Incident
5) Returning to the Rubble
6) Attack on Coruscant Prison

Approved!

Character Profile Link: Oren Zapan
Subaccount Link: @Oren Zapan
Current Reputation: Notable Newcomer
Reputation Seeking: Regional
Requested Region: Deep Core or Outer Rim (either one)
Link to Reputation Tracker: Here
Summary of Deeds: So a ton has happened since my last request. Oren has reached the rank of Jedi Master and has assisted in the investigations on the Red Sabers arrival within the galaxy. He's helped guide Jedi on where to investigate, has assisted in his own searches. His investigations lead to a confrontation with The Rain, and which lead to his arrest which was put on full display to the galaxy for everyone to see. His arrest put the relationship between the Jedi and the Rangers at danger, but it caused both sides to come together and slowly form the alliance that they have today.

He's aided in several Jedi Missions across space, and was one of the Jedi that discovered AMS, and has been working with Trys Aran on finding the origins. He also, with the help of Trys and another Jedi caught a Knight of Ren, and also served on the front lines against the Sith Champions when the Sith Eternal Champion arrived.

Link To IC Threads:

Jedi Knight Threads
The Cycle Of The Force
Helping the Lost

A Second Chance
The Shadow of The Temple
Déjà vu
There's More Than Sand

Jedi Master Threads
The Great Disease
A recently promoted Oren travels the galaxy, putting the weight of the order on his shoulders, he goes out to the galaxy, seeking to find the truth about the Arcanist and other darksiders, which changes his fate and many around him forever.

Thread TitleDescriptionStatus
Paths Cross
While searching for clues on darksiders, Oren comes across Talak's apprentice Llilth, the two of them have a moment and share blades in public--he's badly wounded and arrested.
Completed
Wrong Place, Wrong TimeOren is in custody of the Sector Rangers after being caught on Naboo, he offers his case to the ranger, but is ultimately detained.Completed
Hitting the BooksWhile in Custody, Oren has a dream about Nash where his mind conjures up her dream like appearance, who then offers him words of wisdom about his failures.Completed
Jedi Master ArrestedThe news of his arrest is broadcast to the galaxy at large, painting an image on his back and the ranger who took him in.Completed
Listen to The ManA group of Jedi come to visit Oren during his imprisonment, they seek to free him, but also learn about the actions that had lead to his arrest.Completed
Connected FatesOren is visited by Lilith in prison, via a force vision. The two's bond continue to grow, as Oren Purify's one of her blades through the force, and the two share what haunts them.Completed

Returning to Life
Two years have passed while Oren was in prison for his actions on Coruscant. His body and mind has slowly changed, though his desire and understanding of those close to him have been paused. A lot can happen in two years and Oren has to learn to pick up his life in a galaxy that has kept moving without him.

Thread TitleDescriptionStatus
Sand Surf SunshineAfraid to return directly back to the temple, Oren heads to the golden beaches of Rishi. In a drunken state he calls Nash to visit him, where the two open up about their feelings they never got to share.Completed
Kept You WaitingOren meets with one of his oldest friends, Mila, and the two reconnect and share a moment.Completed
Reunions and RocksOren returns to his apprentice, and the one person he's closest to, Nara. He apologizes for leaving her without a word, and expresses that she's ready to become a knight.Completed
Reluctant DuosPart of Oren's rehabilitation back into the galaxy is to serve community service with the Sector Rangers. Oren contacts them with information pertaining to a Bio-Terrorist Organization he had been hunting as a knight, but when Officer Trys arrives--he knows things are about to become interesting.Progress
Time for EverythingOren meets the Arcanist on Naboo, the two talk for a short bit of time, about the philosophy of the Jedi and his actions. The two realize that they are both outsiders in their Order, and that they could be of use to each other.Completed
A New LifeOren, feeling estranged in the temple, wanders the halls. But, the Force in its mysterious ways draws the energetic youngster, Asaara, into his life.Progress
Cool Diplomacy For Hot HeadsOren's first mission back with the Jedi is to Chandrila, where he and Nashyr attempt to stop riots.Completed
Gilded NightsTrying to get the scoop on a mob boss on Nar Shaddaa can be hard enough. Sprinkle in a complicated young woman with a knack for destroying things, and ties to the Jedi...it seems the night is only going to get more complicated.Completed

The Tenants of a Jedi
With conflict growing within the galaxy, a voice is needed for the galaxy, each generation and era needs one. Yoda, Obi-Wan, Luke & Leia, and Rey Skywalker. The galaxy needs someone that is willing to stand for others, and to be the mantle of the light, and Oren has come to the realization on what he must do. Thus, he has taken to the galaxy, exploring the force, mastering skills, doing right, and preparing his mind and body to become that vessel.

Thread TitleDescriptionStatus
TransitioningA young Jedi with great promise, Fiach, is in need of a mentor to progress her training in the force. Oren offers to take her on, and together they begin to study advanced force concepts.Progress
Return of a JediA mysterious Jedi Knight returns to Ajan Kloss after years of being away, to find out if the news of the Dark Side's return is true.Completed
Attention Shoppers: Blasters on Aisle ThreeOren with the help of Trys and Jedi Knight Vin, stop and capture a Sith Eternal LegionnaireCompleted
Cleanup on Aisle ThreeOren meets with the captured Knight of Ren, and questions him on who he is, and decide to give him a second chance on life.Completed
Attack on Coruscant PrisonOren arrives to the Ranger's help with his fellow Jedi, and the aide in the defense of the prison, but it's quickly overrun and he loses the love of his life in the process.Completed
Honoring the DeadThe Memorial Service for Nashyr and Saul are held on Ajan Kloss. Oren meets with several others that come to sympathize with him about his loss. Progress
Blind SidedOren and Nashyr were supposed to track down the destination of the Star Map he found on Ifrane, but with her death, he is now lost. During the funeral, Oren and Nara decide to honor her memory by heading to the stars to discover what's waiting...Progress
Changing DestinyWith the event on the prison, the galaxy is facing a lot of uncertainty. Oren and the Rain meet nearly a year after the events on Nar Shaddaa, where the two of them reconcile about their own guilt.Progress

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Let me know if you would like more threads! A lot of those "Progress" threads are about a post or two away from being finished. Thanks!

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Nightfall

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Summary of Deeds: Marissa has completed her first big score since joining the Black Suns: A heist from Canto Bight casino, going off without a hitch, walking away with an inordinate amount of cash, and a strong reputation because of it.
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Canto-Cover - Marissa and Preef secure identities to get into the casino.
Canto-Confusion - Marissa and allies plant explosives for a distraction during the heist.
Canto-Crafting - Marissa and Baymon acquire a getaway vehicle for their unique circumstances.
Canto-Credits - The Heist. Marissa and Preef stick to the plan and fly out of there with fistfuls of credits and bullion.

(All part of the successful Canto Break-In plot)
 

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Summary of Deeds: Marissa has completed her first big score since joining the Black Suns: A heist from Canto Bight casino, going off without a hitch, walking away with an inordinate amount of cash, and a strong reputation because of it.
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Canto-Cover - Marissa and Preef secure identities to get into the casino.
Canto-Confusion - Marissa and allies plant explosives for a distraction during the heist.
Canto-Crafting - Marissa and Baymon acquire a getaway vehicle for their unique circumstances.
Canto-Credits - The Heist. Marissa and Preef stick to the plan and fly out of there with fistfuls of credits and bullion.

(All part of the successful Canto Break-In plot)
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Summary of Deeds: Kal has helped in the investigation into The Arcanist, such as investigating the scene of one of his rampages and learning about the Jedi. He also helped investigate an arson and murder in Coruscant made by similar perpetrators to The Arcanist, though instead it seemed that it was done by others. After the attack on the Corellian Ranger office, Kal worked with Jedi Master Oren to gather evidence and leads to find those who had done the deed, though soon after Ender had been captured and brought to a prison on Coruscant. There, Kal helped evacuate whoever he could from the prison with the Sith Eternal attacked, being injured by Force Lightning as he did what he could to help the Jedi escape.

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Summary of Deeds: Preef has completed his first big score since joining the Crimson Dawn: A heist from Canto Bight casino, going off without a hitch, walking away with an inordinate amount of cash, and a strong reputation because of it.
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Canto-Cover - Preef helps Marissa Hesse secure identities to get into the casino.
Canto-Confusion - Preef helps Marissa Hesse to plant explosives for a distraction during the heist.
Canto-Credits - The Heist. Marissa and Preef stick to the plan and fly out of there with fistfuls of credits and bullion.

(All part of the successful Canto Break-In plot)

Making a Living - Preef, Kholvar and Kuro Sawa destroy an upstart gang on Nar Shaddaa to keep the Five Syndicates in control.
 

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Summary of Deeds: Ender with the help of some Knights of Ren, led an attack on a Ranger Station in Corellia and killed most of the people inside. He held a broadcast that declared open war against the Rangers and Jedi if they worked together that was shared through the galaxy. After that, he fought against the leader of the Knights of Ren, Kai, and took their place as the one in command.

Ender went to hunt down Trys and managed to injure her but was captured in the process and sent to a high-security prison. He was broken out of captivity by the Champions of the Eternal and some fellow Knights and escaped to be at large again.

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Summary of Deeds: Kal has helped in the investigation into The Arcanist, such as investigating the scene of one of his rampages and learning about the Jedi. He also helped investigate an arson and murder in Coruscant made by similar perpetrators to The Arcanist, though instead it seemed that it was done by others. After the attack on the Corellian Ranger office, Kal worked with Jedi Master Oren to gather evidence and leads to find those who had done the deed, though soon after Ender had been captured and brought to a prison on Coruscant. There, Kal helped evacuate whoever he could from the prison with the Sith Eternal attacked, being injured by Force Lightning as he did what he could to help the Jedi escape.

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Summary of Deeds: Preef has completed his first big score since joining the Crimson Dawn: A heist from Canto Bight casino, going off without a hitch, walking away with an inordinate amount of cash, and a strong reputation because of it.
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Canto-Cover - Preef helps Marissa Hesse secure identities to get into the casino.
Canto-Confusion - Preef helps Marissa Hesse to plant explosives for a distraction during the heist.
Canto-Credits - The Heist. Marissa and Preef stick to the plan and fly out of there with fistfuls of credits and bullion.

(All part of the successful Canto Break-In plot)

Making a Living - Preef, Kholvar and Kuro Sawa destroy an upstart gang on Nar Shaddaa to keep the Five Syndicates in control.

Approved.

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Summary of Deeds: Ender with the help of some Knights of Ren, led an attack on a Ranger Station in Corellia and killed most of the people inside. He held a broadcast that declared open war against the Rangers and Jedi if they worked together that was shared through the galaxy. After that, he fought against the leader of the Knights of Ren, Kai, and took their place as the one in command.

Ender went to hunt down Trys and managed to injure her but was captured in the process and sent to a high-security prison. He was broken out of captivity by the Champions of the Eternal and some fellow Knights and escaped to be at large again.

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Calamity
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Attack on Coruscant Prison

Approved for Regional: 1 in the Deep Core, but as per our discussion he is only known by the mask he wore during the ranger station attack and broadcast. His actual face was never shown on the broadcast after his capture and all information/files gathered on him were destroyed during the prison attack.
 

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Circle of Friends: Xath has become business partners with another Sith (Argyle Paltos). He's also created a friendship with another Sith (Jafan Jakar) and a sketchy partnership with a Mandalorian (Arden Kryze). He's finally developed a suspicious friendship and slight mentorship with a young boy (Laeonas Tannaras), which he is currently continuing to develop. He's managed to convert a strange creature (Polcyc) to the dark side, whose training is not yet complete but just beginning.


PC Interaction: Besides maintaining a group of allies, Xath also has met multiple other characters. He was stalked after walking openly on a 5S controlled planet by multiple people (Song Wren, Preef Callo, Kholvar Varaxes, Annileen Vhett). He met a Twi'lek (Sieen Kairn) who repaired his ship. He's also participated in combat against a Jedi Knight (Eileen Van Alasdaire) for the first time and defeated a group of vengeful dirtbags with a clone (Aska Dominique Ryun). He's currently attempting to go after a Kray't Dragon and its pearls and learn teleportation.


Currently, he battles for his life after the backstabbing Mandalorian and a misunderstanding Sith (The Rain) shot his legs off. Those who became aware of this injury have a wide influence in the galaxy and are pretty well known (Kai, Vinry Forge, Trys Aran, Talak Rand).

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Complete
1-Chilling in the Shade-
2-Not a Care in the World-
3-Making Ends Meet-
4-Where In Space-
5-A Bar in the Desert-
6-Corruption Begins-
7-Clashing-
8-Stumblin'-

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9-Krazy Kray't-
10-You Have to Start Somewhere-
11-Clearing Things Up-
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Summary of Deeds: Although Corran Velt joined the Sector Rangers with no law enforcement, soldierly, or mercenary background of any kind, the youth was determined to make an impact in the galaxy. After getting his feet wet on some smaller crimes, Corran eagerly volunteered to participate in providing security for a Dr. Zafina Strop during the TAU court case. While all other Ranger groups did not succeed in their tasks, Corran Velt was notable in protecting the life of the good Doctor and apprehending several criminals in the process. After the brutal massacre at the Corellia Ranger Station, Chief Hudson learned the rookie Ranger's name and gave the novice some heartfelt advice on seeing past the hurt and seeking real justice, not vengeance.

That charisma from the Chief of the Sector Rangers led to Corran volunteering for the harrowing Outpost Blue campaign. Selected by Lt. Kal Dross, the rookie Ranger performed admirably in securing the pirate fuel depot intact; allowing it to be an additional permanent Sector Ranger base in the system and the fuel for their ships. Also on the world of Cona, Lorcan and Corran partnered up to destroy or capture the main pirate starfighter base. The pair was successful enough to even capture an extra starfighter.

The real struggle began when the Sector Rangers began their assault on Outpost Blue - the main pirate station in the Manaan system. The first wave was wiped out completely and two simultaneous assaults began in earnest to rescue any survives and capture the station for good. Corran teamed up with Darmus Onn once again to retrieve the IDs of their fallen comrades and rescue Bast Emblai. They managed to overcome the local Pirate security and rescue their fellow Ranger with their squad mostly intact. Despite the completing the objective, Corran Velt sent Darmus and Bast off the station to safety and continued to fight across the station to support Alpha and Omega squad remnants in securing the station. After a series of near-failures, the surviving Rangers and Corran captured the vaunted Command center and put the station on lockdown. Outpost was theirs.

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Automated Defense - Doctor's Orders - In tandem with a fellow Ranger, Corran was assigned to protect a key witness in a corporate trial. - Complete

We Carry On - The assault on the Corellia Ranger Station led to the Rangers mourning their fallen. Corran has a chance encounter with Chief Hudson himself. - Complete

Outpost Blue - Securing the Fuel - Kal Dross and Corran Velt stealthily secured a pirate fuel depot on the world of Cora as part of a larger Sector Ranger operation to secure a station in the Manaan region. - Complete

Outpost Blue - Dagger in the Back - Corran and Lorcan were sent on a mission to infiltrate and destroy a pirate starfighter landing strip. - Complete

Outpost Blue - No One Left Behind - Darmus Onn and Corran land on a pirate station to rescue Bast Emblai from a failed first wave assault. - Complete

Outpost Blue - Second Sword - After completing their objectives to rescue Ranger prisoners, Corran and Echo squad decided to stay on the station and help capture it for good. - Complete
 
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