Ona'bak Retrade Enlistment

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Nevermore

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Name:Naya Sinclair
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Noted Skills:Exceptional understanding of any and all things mechanical, technological, etc., etc..
Liability:Totally a liabilit- no, not really. Joining the Retrade, Naya believes that she'll be able to do what she was intended to do.
Desired Rank:Layman
 

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Name:Naya Sinclair
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Noted Skills:Exceptional understanding of any and all things mechanical, technological, etc., etc..
Liability:Totally a liabilit- no, not really. Joining the Retrade, Naya believes that she'll be able to do what she was intended to do.
Desired Rank:Layman

Approved. Don't pay any attention to the roster at the moment-- it's in dire need of some pruning. I'll have you added soonly.

In the meantime, feel free to browse the mission log. PM me if you have any questions or concerns. :P

Glad to have you!
 

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Name: Lancer Deece
Link: The Hunter
Rank desired: contractor
 
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Character Name: Nor'Baal VesaJilic Diori
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?36712-Nor-Baal-VesaJilic-Diori
Noted 'Events': At present, none, this would be my first RP
Noted 'Skills': Business, Intimidation, Negotiation, Contacts
Liability: A Hutt never rats out his partners
Desired Rank: Underlord or Chieftain, something that would suit a Hutt, your choice really (preferably a position with room for advancement.)
 

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Character Name: Nor'Baal VesaJilic Diori
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?36712-Nor-Baal-VesaJilic-Diori
Noted 'Events': At present, none, this would be my first RP
Noted 'Skills': Business, Intimidation, Negotiation, Contacts
Liability: A Hutt never rats out his partners
Desired Rank: Underlord or Chieftain, something that would suit a Hutt, your choice really (preferably a position with room for advancement.)
Unfortunately, the retrade only enlists "the best". Individuals who haven pulled amazing feats of criminality, or who's skillset has reached the ears of the retrade. Given their secrecy, recruitment is strictly invite only.

As far as noted events go, we accept NPC events, I.e. backstory things as suitable, but prefer rp'd events.

Once you set yourself up with one or two events that would interest the retrade to approach your character, re is a possibility. And as a last point, I find the notion that because your character is simply a hutt, he is entitled to being a high rank a little weird. Especially when (at this stage) he's got no draw factor.

If you need help refining your request to join the retrade feel free to pm me or hit me up on Skype.
 

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Cool, just shot you a PM. I have some stuff in my Bio, so would be willing to go in at a much much lower rank, in so long as it was possible for me to advance.
 

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Character Name: Duthorian Blackguard
Link: OOOoooOOO
Noted 'Events': Hijacking space freighters, finger man, heists, terrorism, miscellaneous crimes. None IC yet.
Noted 'Skills': Good with guns, skilled at hacking and re-purposing droids, demolitions expert by choice and accident, unscrupulous morality.
Liability: Do not promote Duthorian Blackguard to any management position, unless it's a drug den/sex club/protection racket. Otherwise, no.
Desired Rank: Layman
 

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Character Name: Moria

Link: Here

Noted 'Events': All events completed ICly. Brutally defeated a Jedi Padawan and a mercenary while evading Cor-Sec authorities. Killed a mutant, Sithspawn Rancor. Found a Dark Side Holocron(still in possession of it). Is a semi-important player in an unpredictable anarchist organization.

Noted 'Skills': Trained assassin, best knife thrower/wielder PC currently, adept dark force user.

Liability: No, obviously. Note, religious anarchist does not equal political/trust liability. It does mean that she's trained to shut up and keep everything she sees to herself, her 'church' is not exactly a peace loving, open religious organization.

Desired Rank: Layman or Contractor, whichever involves less diplomacy and more on-the-ground, unnoticed assassinating/killing/general mayhem causing for the good of companies that might profit from it.
 

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Character Name: Red Dawn
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Noted 'Events': Red had done quite a bit of thieving on his home world, enough to get him noticed by the government and is now pretty much on the run from their police force. Most notably was his attempt to procure a rare red krayt pearl from one of the nest mothers on the shashay home world.
Noted 'Skills': Red is a thief at heart, he'll steal anything that isn't bolted down and will find a way to steal things that are bolted. Also as a tech expert Red would help with expanding the tech of the Retrade.
Liability: Nope, being a Shashay, Red is an extremely loyal bird person.
Desired Rank: Layman
 

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Character Name: Duthorian Blackguard
Link: OOOoooOOO
Noted 'Events': Hijacking space freighters, finger man, heists, terrorism, miscellaneous crimes. None IC yet.
Noted 'Skills': Good with guns, skilled at hacking and re-purposing droids, demolitions expert by choice and accident, unscrupulous morality.
Liability: Do not promote Duthorian Blackguard to any management position, unless it's a drug den/sex club/protection racket. Otherwise, no.
Desired Rank: Layman
Congratulations, Layman. You're laaammeeee.
Welcome to the Ona'bak Retrade.

Character Name: Moria

Link: Here

Noted 'Events': All events completed ICly. Brutally defeated a Jedi Padawan and a mercenary while evading Cor-Sec authorities. Killed a mutant, Sithspawn Rancor. Found a Dark Side Holocron(still in possession of it). Is a semi-important player in an unpredictable anarchist organization.

Noted 'Skills': Trained assassin, best knife thrower/wielder PC currently, adept dark force user.

Liability: No, obviously. Note, religious anarchist does not equal political/trust liability. It does mean that she's trained to shut up and keep everything she sees to herself, her 'church' is not exactly a peace loving, open religious organization.

Desired Rank: Layman or Contractor, whichever involves less diplomacy and more on-the-ground, unnoticed assassinating/killing/general mayhem causing for the good of companies that might profit from it.
You're lame too.
Welcome to the Retrade, Layman.
I look forward to the thread in which we bump and meet. *dramatic music*

Character Name: Red Dawn
Link: In sig
Noted 'Events': Red had done quite a bit of thieving on his home world, enough to get him noticed by the government and is now pretty much on the run from their police force. Most notably was his attempt to procure a rare red krayt pearl from one of the nest mothers on the shashay home world.
Noted 'Skills': Red is a thief at heart, he'll steal anything that isn't bolted down and will find a way to steal things that are bolted. Also as a tech expert Red would help with expanding the tech of the Retrade.
Liability: Nope, being a Shashay, Red is an extremely loyal bird person.
Desired Rank: Layman
You're lame too, dude.
Welcome to the Retrade, Layman.
 

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Character Name: Maxx Thrall

Link: link

Noted 'Events': worked as a mercenary where they fought the CSA, was a temporary guard for a Hutt until he disrespected Maxx and so Maxx had to kill him and the 10 Gammoreans(he's wanted by that particular Hutt family)

Noted 'Skills': Excellent shot with blaster pistols, deadly with a blade, a decent pilot

Liability: No, he is loyal to whoever he respects (and pays his tab ;))

Desired Rank:Layman
 

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Character Name: Maxx Thrall

Link: link

Noted 'Events': worked as a mercenary where they fought the CSA, was a temporary guard for a Hutt until he disrespected Maxx and so Maxx had to kill him and the 10 Gammoreans(he's wanted by that particular Hutt family)

Noted 'Skills': Excellent shot with blaster pistols, deadly with a blade, a decent pilot

Liability: No, he is loyal to whoever he respects (and pays his tab ;))

Desired Rank:Layman
His liability thing concerns me slightly, but considering the Retrade keeps the tabs very much paid, then there shouldn't be an issue.
You're lame!
Welcome to the Retrade, Layman.
 

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Character Name: Amy Me'kor
Link: Tada
Noted 'Events': Series of thefts and scams in the underlevels of Coruscant. Desire to move into larger things
Noted 'Skills': Diplomacy and excellent slight of hand, makes for an excellent pickpocket or possibly bigger thefts
Liability: Narp
Desired Rank: A low rank or possibly just someone who associates with the group.
 

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Character Name: Amy Me'kor
Link: Amy Me'kor
Noted 'Events': Series of thefts and scams in the underlevels of Coruscant. Desire to move into larger things
Noted 'Skills': Diplomacy and excellent slight of hand, makes for an excellent pickpocket or possibly bigger thefts
Liability: Narp
Desired Rank: A low rank or possibly just someone who associates with the group.
Welcome to the Retrade, Enforcer.
 
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Character Name: The Spectre
Link: Right here
Noted Events: Responsible for the destruction of half of Reikto City on Cato Neimoidia, via bombing the West Supports, causing half of the city to fall to the surface, killing thousands. (See here)
Noted Skills: Combat (Hand-to-hand, ranged, and sword fighting), Strategic Knowledge, Torture Expertise
Liability: Negative, Ghost Rider. The Spectre may be an insane terrorist, but he sticks to his word.
Desired Rank: Retainer
 

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Character Name: Listian Diamondblade
Link: Thanks for saying please]
Noted 'Events': He was once apart of a pirate which over half are in jail right now. He was also trained from a young age to be an Elementalist (controller of elements) and trained by the Sith in other ways.
Noted 'Skills': Besides the fact that he's a trained force user and can use a lightsaber....he's ok at flying that's about it.
Liability: No mam
Desired Rank: Enforcer
 

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Character Name: The Spectre
Link: Right here
Noted Events: Responsible for the destruction of half of Reikto City on Cato Neimoidia, via bombing the West Supports, causing half of the city to fall to the surface, killing thousands. (See here)
Noted Skills: Combat (Hand-to-hand, ranged, and sword fighting), Strategic Knowledge, Torture Expertise
Liability: Negative, Ghost Rider. The Spectre may be an insane terrorist, but he sticks to his word.
Desired Rank: Retainer
Well you're banned! So NO!

Character Name: Listian Diamondblade
Link: Thanks for saying please]
Noted 'Events': He was once apart of a pirate which over half are in jail right now. He was also trained from a young age to be an Elementalist (controller of elements) and trained by the Sith in other ways.
Noted 'Skills': Besides the fact that he's a trained force user and can use a lightsaber....he's ok at flying that's about it.
Liability: No mam
Desired Rank: Enforcer
When we're talking about Noted Events, and skills, we're looking for things like "marketable skills" - something that the Ona'bak Retrade can use to make money. So skills like mercenary experience, slicing, legal aide, scientific R&D. Being a member of a failed piracy enterprise doesn't really inspire much success. Force users, while welcome, do not receive any special notice due to any training they have received - mostly because the majority of members are Force skeptics, and thus it carries no "real-world" weight to them.

When we're mentioning Noted Events, the Retrade is specifically talking about key events in a character's history, where they've performed a noted feat (Either RP'd or in the characters biography) that would have attracted the Ona'bak's attention to your character. A keen display of skill, cunning, or merely dumb luck. Examples of these events are; bank robberies, impressive gun battles, shows of skilled piloting. As i mentioned, these don't need to be RP'd out, but we need something to make reference to when talking about your character's reasons for being approached.

As it stands; Rejected.
 

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Character Name: Tran'Karn'Inrokini. Known aliases: The Master, the Program, Virus.

Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?48750-Tran-Karn-Inrokini

Noted 'Events': Outlined in the above link.

Noted 'Skills': Unstoppable slicer. Put me into a computer and its mine. Simple as that.

Liability: No?

Desired Rank: Err... Layman I guess? I really have no clue which means which.
Until my concerns are addressed (Link) I'm inclined to say the following: Rejected.
Sorry.
 
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