Maotr Krahen

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Name: Maotr Krahen
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Knight
Species:Caamasi
Age:42
Gender:Male
Height:5' 11"
Weight:105 lbs.
Eyes:Brown
Hair/fur: Brown
Credits:1000

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, is currently a Jedi padawan

FORCE POWERS: Force Push, Force Sight, Telekinesis

STRENGTH:Average
DEXTERITY:Slightly above average, Maotr is skilled in basic sword combat, although he is not a master.
CONSTITUTION:Average, Maotr has no serious health or other such problems.
WISDOM:Above average, Maotr's moral code is higher than other species, due to his race, and he is a very thoughtful being.
CHARISMA: Below average.

SKILLS
Maotr is an excellent diplomat and bargainer, although he is very firm with what he believes in. He is proficient in swordfighting.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
Maotr has a very intuitive feel for people, so he works well with others. He is also very witty. He stands by his beliefs unless it is absolutely necessary that he doesn't. He is not a very good leader, as he is often unsure of what to do in such a position. He is very thoughtful, to the point that some who don't know him consider him a loner.

GEAR:Robe, blaster, inherited lightsaber, his own lightsaber.

PERSONALITY
Maotr's feelings can vary. He is normally very warm and friendly, but he occasionally needs time to think. He is very strong willed, but he is often uncomfortable in a leader position, although he will rise to almost any challenge.

HISTORY
Maotr was born on Caamas to poor parents. When he was 18, he set off to make a living in the galaxy, with only a small blaster, a robe and a lightsaber inherited from his grandfather. He worked at various odd jobs on coruscant, occasionally carrying legal goods to tatooine, but none of these jobs used his intelligence. And he knew he was force sensitive. So he set off for the Jedi temple, in hopes of being trained. Before long, he was taken as an apprentice by Rev Ultor, a reknowned Jedi Master. A few months later he became a Knight. Shortly after, he trained his own padawan, Jacob Ryker, to knighthood.
 
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Cailst

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History should be longer, otherwise, I don't see many problems.
 

Dan.

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I'm not so sure you can have a lightsaber if you haven't been trained by Jedi, so....yeah....
 

sankai

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It's inherited from his grandfather, who was a Jedi. He doesn't know how to use it.
 

Ser Gregor

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You haven't met the required minimum for history or personality.
 

sankai

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Sorry to bump it up, but updated again.
 
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