Mandalorian sign-ups

[Malon]

I don't know whether I have the authority yet to say this, but I'm going to go ahead with it anyway:

Razor, I don't think your character stands a very good chance of becoming a Mandalorian. As Malon said earlier in this thread, the chance that a former/current dark jedi would be allowed in are pretty slim.

Also, unless I missed it (and this isn't all that major of an issue) I couldn't really see any reason why your character would even want to be a Mandalorian.

You have the authority. I just need to get off my lazy butt and update the roster :CSly Okay, well I'm not really lazy, these past few days have just been ridiculously busy... Anyways, Raif is right on all counts.

 

[Carud Aaray]

My Other Character Silva Jolce,Would like to Join
Link To Profile For Silva At the bottom,
Ill take whatever given,I do make a good assassin,

 

[Raif]

My Other Character Silva Jolce,Would like to Join
Link To Profile For Silva At the bottom,
Ill take whatever given,I do make a good assassin,

Ok...the character as a whole isn't too bad. However, I'd personally like to see something written into her background as to why specifically she's trying to join up with the Mandalorians. We're becoming increasingly...I don't know, nationalistic I guess, meaning it's not just a "I'm a badass mercenary so I'm going to join the Mandos" sort of thing anymore. Instead, we want warriors who are going to fight and die for Mandalore the planet and Mand'alor the character.

Also, your grammer/capitalization could use a bit of work. It may not seem like a huge deal, but I think Malon would agree that we're trying to turn the Mandos into an elite faction on this site. That means that when we enter a thread, we have to be able to post messages that people can read, understand, and most importantly enjoy. If you have a bunch of errors in your profile it doesn't make the most confident that those same errors wouldn't plague your IC posts.

I know this may seem like I'm throwing the book at you, but I really mean this all as constructive criticism. If you need any help feel free to send me a message. Like I said though, I do like the character as a whole - the Mandos can always use another badass chick character to give Kali a run for her money lol

 

[Carud Aaray]

Well,I need lots Of Advice I could get From you,Even about my character,What could I say About her when She left the planet tatooine how would she fit in with the mandos?