Kres'hel'kleoni

Shel

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NAME: Kres'hel'kleoni (Shel)
AGE: 23 Standard Years
SPECIES: Chiss

FACTION: Sith Empire
RANK: Sith Marauder

HEIGHT: 5'3''
WEIGHT: 115lbs
HAIR COLOR: Black-ish blue
EYE COLOR: Red
FORCE: Trained in the ways of the dark side


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  • Shel was born on Csilla to a family absorbed deep in politics and intrigue. She was discovered by a Sith while he was searching the galaxy for Force sensitive children. Her parents, unable to control her bouts of rage and use of the Force and wanting desperately to save face, gave her willingly to the Sith to raise as his own. Her "Father" is the only parental figure she can recall.

    She was raised to have complete faith in the Darkside. Her Father's teachings pushed her to accept the Darkness as more than a tool, it was a complete way of life. Every waking moment of her childhood and adolescent life was spent training her mind and body. Her Father had many children, Shel was by far his favorite, as he took her on his many trips around the galaxy in search of more children to add to his family. As she grew older, he began to use Shel's aptitude for charm to talk people into giving their children to him for training.

    Completely devoted to her Father, she did as asked, assisting in the training of her brothers and sisters, taking children from unsuspecting parents. Even as his affection shifted to a younger sister, she remained totally enraptured with his teachings. Upon reaching the age of nineteen, her Father took her to Lothal and dropped her off with the mission to bring more children to him on her own. She has spent the past four years searching the galaxy for the perfect child to return home with.

  • Shel is generally quiet and well mannered. She tends to be a wallflower, enjoying the edges of the room, watching and waiting for the perfect opportunity to strike up a conversation with her intended target, as she was raised to be seen and not heard.

    She doesn't shy away from those that approach her, usually welcoming conversation, though her demeanor can be cold and aloof unless she is pursuing something. Quick to anger, she typically attempts to avoid situations where she is asked a lot of questions, however, she isn't usually successful and ends up in trouble more often than not.

  • SKILLS:

    Force Push: Average
    Force Pull: Average
    Force Grip: Average
    Choke: Average
    Force lightning: Novice
    Force Crush: Novice
    Force Drain: Novice
    Lightsaber combat: Basic teaching in all 7 forms, more thorough development in form six.
    Personal fighting style: Mostly form 6, Niman.

    GEAR:
    Black hooded gown, silver hilted twin red lightsabers, as pictured below.

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    SHIP:
    She pilots an older, but still functioning Mark VI Supremacy-class starfighter

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Malon

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Hi Shel!

Welcome to the site and congratulations on your first character profile! I — as you can see — am Malon. I am the site's content admin and the Sith Faction Leader (FL), and I'm looking forward to working with you in the future!

Reading through your profile, I wanted to mention what appears to be a minor inconsistency in your profile that you may want to consider before signing her up for the faction: You mention, in her backstory, that she suffered dangerous bouts of rage, which is what caused her politically-minded family to give her up. Great! That makes sense. However, moving over the Personality tab, you mention that she is "quiet and well-mannered." These two things vastly contradict one another—you'll want to stay consistent with your characterization to tie this profile together well.

Also, please consider giving her an Abilities tab, as well as a tab detailing the type of gear she wears/uses. As always, feel free to PM myself, @Vinny, or @Intratec. Both are my Assistant Faction Leaders (AFLs) and would be more than happy to help you with anything you need.
 

Shel

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Thank you!! I hadn't noticed the inconsistencies. I have updated the profile and added an Abilities tab, as suggested!
 
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