Jedi Order K'Narr Foo (Neti Jedi)

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K'Narr Foo

BIOGRAPHY

K'Narr Foo is a Neti considered a myth by most of the Galaxy due to there rarity especially after The Jedi Purge due to K'Narr being a Neti he was Force Sensitive and like many others of his species learnt both the Neti Language and Basic, after his gestation period was over he joined the Jedi Order at the age of 300 not that old compared to the other Neti.

But K'Narr learnt the secrets of the force in more detail and picked up some basic abilities like being able to Force Pull and Push and he picked up lightsaber combat quite easily and was able to get his Kyber Crystal for his own lightsaber and it took on an Orange Colour after going through all the basics for a Youngling he was taken as an Padawan by another Neti who was a Jedi Master so he could learn things that Neti could do.

K'Narr's Master taught K'Narr the basics of the hibernation trance in case he ever needed to meditate as well as honing his force abilities and Lightsaber skills.
K'Narr and his master encountered a Sith while out on a mission and they went into an intense battle against the Sith but it resulted in the death of K'Narr's Master and K'Narr barely holding off the Sith became enraged and killed the Sith after K'Narr returned to the Order with the body of his master and the sith he was awarded with the rank of Knight but K'Narr said he was going to take a leave of absence to meditate on what happened (and to suppress the dark feelings he felt after his master's death) and the Jedi Order agreed.

So K'Narr went to a planet with plenty of sunlight and water so he wouldn't be disturbed while he meditated and that lead him to Naboo and he found a place to root and begin meditate and that was the last anyone saw of him for 500 Years until he was finished quelling his dark feelings and he then decided to return back to the Jedi Temple.

A lot of thing change while he was in hibernation the Sith had been defeated and hadn't been seen for over 200 years there was a new Jedi Grand Master by the name of Yoda and the planets were at peace, after finally happy with things now K'Narr decided to take on a Jedi Padawans.

K'Narr trained a few Jedi Padawans over the years training a grand total of 5 Padawans after being satisfied with that many Padawans becoming Jedi Knights he decided to go back to his meditation spot on Naboo and begin another long stint of Hibernation to see if he could uncover any other secrets of the force.
Eventually he ended his hibernation, and went back to the temple and again many things had changed the was a completely different Jedi Counsel and the Sith had been seen again on Naboo but was quelled by the Jedi Knight known as Obi-Wan Kenobi and he had taken on a new apprentice by the name Anakin Skywalker.

K'Narr seeing the massive danger about the possibility of there being more Sith decided he would take on another Padawan, a Female Twi'lek by the name of Aicokmupal and he trainer her until just before the Clone Wars where she finally became a Jedi Knight and took on her own Padawan.
When the Clone Wars started K'Narr was given his own Company of Clones and was tasked by the Counsel to guard the planet of Raydonia after the slaughtering of an innocent village by Darth Maul so he could apparently draw Obi-Wan Kenobi out for revenge.

K'Narr was left on the Planet of Raydonia for the duration of the Clone Wars, before the execution of Order 66 he was at a village and was giving them some food when he noticed a sudden shift of the force to the dark side and he saw his clones begin to bring out there blasters, he barley fought off the clones by force pushing the squad off a cliff.
And he then tried to grab his ship to go off world but it was surrounded by the Clones so he couldn't get on his ship without a fight, so he charged towards his ship and fought off the clones before heading off world to go hide, he decided to find a completely abandoned world out of the reach of the republic, he landed on said Planet and began to build a place where he could try and get in contact with other Jedi.

Through meditation he got through to Aicokmupai and he found out she barely escaped her clones as well but her Padawan had perished during the fighting he told her to come to the planet he was on and then they could hide out together.
Once Aicokmupai arrived however he found out that she had fallen to the Dark Side and she had brought several first-wave stormtroppers with her, she then tasked the Stormtroppers to either capture K'Narr or kill him either way was going to leave to massive battle.

K'Narr was slowly making his way to his original ship that he had landed on the planet with but not before Aicokmupai had sensed him and that lead to him having to fight her, he tried to get her back to the light side but it was of no use whatever this new empire had done to her had left her tormented and he couldn't find a way of pulling her back to the light with a sorrowful expression he ignited his lightsaber and began to fight off Aicokmupai and due to his superior abilities he was able to fight her off but it was at the expense of Aicokmupai's life. Sad and heartbroken he left the planet and began his journey of hopping planets while fending of stormtroppers and other Fallen Jedi, while on his journeys he picked up many different languages not at the extent of how well he knew Basic and Neti but just enough to know basic interactions.

K'Narr had eluded the empire for 2 decades at this point and he kept his Lightsaber with him even though he had used it in over a decade the Jedi Order may have been gone but he hadn't given up hope in the force, had picked a holocron with a message from Obi-Wan to trust in the force and he still did, he took many hibernation meditations when he had faltering feeling about the light-side of the force.
He had heard of the rebel alliance but due to the fact he needed to stay hidden from the empire he didn't want to be on the forefront of the battle against them but one day when he was collecting water from a nearby fountain he heard from someone nearby that the Emperor had been defeated by a Jedi and the Rebels had won.

A Jedi so he wasn't the only one still left alive and they had given there allegiance to the Rebel Alliance, it seemed it was about time he made himself known to the rebels, hopefully this wouldn't comeback to haunt him at a later date, he made his way over to the Planet of Endor where apparently was the last sighting of the Rebels when he landed on Endor he pledged his Rebel Alliance.

Overtime the Rebel Alliance changed to Resistance K'Narr not having the time to process what happened to the Jedi after the clone wars he decided that now was a probably a good time to do so now that the balance of the force was in the light forces favour, he decided that he needed to attune himself to the force again.

He found a safe planet to begin hibernation again and began his meditation, after over a whole century in Hibernation he was discovered by a Jedi from The New Jedi Order who began looking for him after he left a memory crystal for Light-Side inclined force users to find if they needed his help again.

After sensing the a new light-side force wielder on his planet K'Narr re-awoke and he went to go find this Jedi after finding this Jedi they had informed him the Sith were finally defeated and they were in an era of peace and they offered him a place in the New Jedi Order he agreed and left the planet and began making his way to this New Jedi Order because he didn't want to have this Jedi Order to fail like his did nearly two centuries ago.

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NAME: K'Narr Foo
AGE: 1500
SPECIES: Neti

FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Knight

HEIGHT: 12ft
WEIGHT: 71.4 Stone
HAIR COLOR: N/A
EYE COLOR: White

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STAMINA:
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PERSONALITY


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PRACTICAL SKILLS

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Slicing
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Tracking
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Hunting
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Invest.





COMBAT SKILLS


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Daggers
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Lightsabers





EDUCATION

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Huttese
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Ryl
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Politics
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Espionage






After surviving the Clone Wars and spending many years in hiding, K'Narr has become very cautious when it comes to new people, he is mentally scared from Order 66, he is very careful about what he says and he is very loyal to the Jedi and the light side of the force so he treats all of the Jedi with Respect.
He can get very angry when people mention what happened during the Clone Wars and he wishes that no one talk about it when he nearby and when it comes to people younger than him (which is a majority of people) he doesn't like getting corrected.
Due to his multitude of Padawans and Apprentices he is very caring and compassionate to the very young of each species and when he knows people have had a rough go of things he sympathises with them.

He is very generous to the less fortunate or to those who have had there home or village ravaged by outside forces and he tries to help them as best he can even going as far as giving them a majority of his thing that he had brought with him.
If anything bad happens he prefers to just go off to hibernate until it is sorted out and the more it impacts him the longer his hibernation.


LEGACY


1000


EQUIPMENT
Armor
—Black Cloak
—Green Robe
VCX-Series Auxiliary Starfighter


Weapon
—Orange Lightsaber




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Credit to Jeremymjack (I assume he made this/I found it on Google and followed it to the source) for this image
 
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Apologies for the delay in the delay in reviewing this profile.

Lets get the small stuff out of the way first: The ship needs a link to an approved write-up in the tech boards.

Now onto more important stuff: Overall this character seems beyond the level of a starting character. I don't mind long-lived characters, i had one myself, but the whole goings on in the biography basically put him on level of a Jedi Master or greater, and reputation in the backstory would be greater than 'unknown' as well (Training over 50 padawans to Knighthood, throwing an entire battalion off a cliff, being offered Jedi Master in the New Jedi Order (i'm not sure if it's referencing Luke or Reys, but either way) .etc

Another thing to keep in mind that unknown reputation entails not being known by canon characters either, just a FYI.

And a minor thing your character would be more likely to leave behind a memory crystal instead of a Hologram, as they tend to be more rare and not every Jedi/Sith would be able to make one.

Overall, the character will be needed to be toned down quite a bit inline with how a starting character should look like. If you have any questions or anything, feel free to message me on her, or DM me on Discord and I'll answer when I can. When you are ready for me to look at this again, tag me and I'll take a look when I get a moment.
 

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@Faster Than Light Okay tried to contact you on discord but it seems we are in quite different timezones, I've changed it so he only had a company of clones (didn't know how big a battalion was that's my bad) during the clone wars and had him only push a squad of the cliff.
Really dulled down the fact that he trained 50 padawans now looking at it after your message yeah that was pretty big so I've made it that he only trained 5 in that stint and then another padawan after hibernation (which is important for his backstory).

In the backstory he was offered to join Luke Skywalker's Order because he was another Jedi who helped during the time of the Rebellion I would think he would have been offered it but if that's not the case I can just remove this, I put New Jedi Order when I'm talking about Luke's Order because it the 2nd iteration K'Narr had in his lifetime and New New Jedi Order when talking about Rey's because this would be the 3rd iteration of the Jedi Order in his lifetime (Like New New York in Futurama).

Changed the holocron he left behind to a memory crystal didn't know holocrons were rare because they were used quite alot in the movies and the show, I'm confused of what to do with the ship though I couldn't seem to find the ship in previous approved tech so I might used an already confirmed tech and make a reskin in generic tech, but I don't know, been a while since I've done a ship.
 

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Apologies for the late response again

Training a few padawans is fine.

In the backstory he was offered to join Luke Skywalker's Order because he was another Jedi who helped during the time of the Rebellion I would think he would have been offered it but if that's not the case I can just remove this, I put New Jedi Order when I'm talking about Luke's Order because it the 2nd iteration K'Narr had in his lifetime and New New Jedi Order when talking about Rey's because this would be the 3rd iteration of the Jedi Order in his lifetime (Like New New York in Futurama).


I feel like omitting that would be easier as we are cutting connections to canon characters (Luke), so I would do that.


Anyways, canon tech will need an approved tech profile, a reskin won't suffice. If you can remove the ship or change it to something that's approved then that would help approval.

In the meantime you could submit the ship and if it's approved just change it on the profile.

Your call. Tag me when ready for me to look at this again.
 

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@Faster Than Light
The Ship has been changed to a ship from what has been approved and I have also omitted the part about Luke and made him leaving to become attuned with the force and cope with loss of the Jedi (After the Battle Of Endor) because he hadn't had the time to process it.

As well as the last paragraph instead of Luke's Order that failed I changed it so, it's about the original Jedi Order.
Is that everything or is there anything else I will need to change to get approved?
 

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Hi @Faster Than Light I haven't heard back from you in 5 days and I have made the required, edits can you check if this is okay please.
Thank you :)
 

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Sorry for the delays. It's looking better

I might over overlooked this "K'Narr had eluded the empire for 2 decades at this point and he kept his Lightsaber with him even though he had used it in over a decade the Jedi Order may have been gone but he hadn't given up hope in the force, had picked a holocron with a message from Obi-Wan to trust in the force and he still did, "

If I recall that was in a signal boardcast, not a holocron. (Again holocrons are quite rare things and wouldn't be used for getting across messages quickly)

Other than that. I'll approve. Again, a reminder keep in mind that even long-lived, your character is not and wasn't known by canon characters, keeping in line with unknown rep.

Also, I'd link the ship as well. I do see that it does exist in the tech boards, but I'd link it in there too so other people can just click it to get to it if needed.
 
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