Independent Kegari

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NAME: Wisk'egari'houci/“Kegari”
FACTION: None
RANK: None
SPECIES: Pantoran
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 1.7 meters
WEIGHT: 97 pounds
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes (un-trained)

APPEARANCE:
Kegari stands at 5ft and weighs 97 pounds she is a dark blue skinned Pantoran with black hair and blue streaks that she was born with. She also has glowing golden eyes. She wears dark green military-style garb. She also wears face makeup that she crafted herself with leftover fruits.

ATTRIBUTES: Kegari is a survivor, abandoned at birth she learned the basics of survival and fending for herself. By bargaining she got with the food and water needed to survive. She is also skilled in crafting weapons such as hand grenades and blaster guns, she gets with the scraps she either finds or bargains for. Also, she makes her own makeup. Hobbies include singing, crafting weapons and reading. Because she is always in survival mode, she is hyper-vigilant and always has a guard up.


PERSONALITY:
Kegari is a fighter by nature, she trusts no one especially humans. She is fierce with a passion for standing up for what she believes in.

BIOGRAPHY: Abandoned at birth, Kegari never knew much about her family she was pretty much on her own her entire life. She often fends for food and other goods by bargaining. She learned of her Force sense when she heard voices calling to her. Oftentimes, she denies those voices and her Force abilities. Only in battle she uses them to her advantage. Kegari is the product of a test tube experiment. After Kegari was deemed a defective experiment she was banished off to an abandoned and unknown planet where she was left to fend for herself.


SKILLS:
Kegari is skilled in the architecture of basic weaponry, basic survival skills, she is proficient in both her native language and Galactic Basic which she taught herself. She also knows how to sing and make her own makeup out of fruit. Although she’s not trained in the Force, she discovered possible Force sensitive abilities when she heard voices calling out to her. She often denies those voices, along with her Force sensitive abilities.

GEAR:
B20 Survival Blaster
ROLE-PLAYS
A Layered Death-Trap
My Little Sanctum
Odds and Trinkets?
The First Steps
 
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Hey there. So, just a reminder that in NuCanon Chiss's force sensitivity works differently. IE: they lose their force sensitivity during adolesence. They have limited abilities as well, as can only use telepathy and precognition, are very rare as well. FS females are used as navigators (as opposed to being used 'in battle' in an army" The profile doesn't read like it takes into account the new lore. If the character is age 19 then the character would be on the verge of losing her force powers complete if they aren't lost already


You can read that wiki page for more infomation for Chiss in canon.

If you are wanting to play a character that won't have limited force abilities, I advise changing the species to Pantoran, another blue skin race. You can even use the images you wanted to use should you change to Pantoran.

The blaster will need to be linked to a write-up in the tech boards as well.
 

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Profile is fine. Although the weapon will need to be approved before the profile can be approved. you can use an approved weapon in the meantime.

I also just noticed the grenade is linked to wiki. Grenade would have to be something in the tech rules or in the tech board as well.
 

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Okay my weapon is awaiting approval and I will do a write for the grenade as well.
 

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Apologies for the confusion, i typoed in my previous post and edited to 'you can use an approved weapon' while you were posting. (Didn't catch my mistake quick enough). So just to be clear, unapproved tech can't be used.

Like, there is a list of grenades. if they are similar to what you are planning on using, probably better to use one of those. And there is a list of weapons as well. But yeah, until the unapproved tech is approved can't approve the profile. But if you want to get approved quicker you can use approved tech. Or at least until your submissions are approved.
 

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The unapproved tech is still on the profile?
 
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