Jedi Order Kanden McCreath

randomKansan

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NAME: Kaden McCreath
FACTION: jedi order
RANK: jedi knight
SPECIES: human
AGE: 22
GENDER: male
HEIGHT: 6'1
WEIGHT: 190lbs
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes and trained as a jedi

APPEARANCE:
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ATTRIBUTES:
kaden trusts everyone. this can lead to him being misguided, but he loves a good fight

PERSONALITY:
kaden is trustworthy,kind,easily excitable, and arrogant

BIOGRAPHY:
kaden is a new jedi knight likes to seek adventure and action.

SKILLS:
specialises in lightsaber combat

GEAR:
blue lightsaber, old FO stormtrooper chest and leg armor
 

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Heyo Kansan!
I decided to check out your character profile after you messaged me about joining the social. Profiles are required to have a minimum amount of sentences for the biography and personality. I believe it’s roughly 2 paragraphs for a biography and a paragraph for a personality.

You have a really good base to work off of here and if you need help expanding this be sure to message me! I’d love to help out where I can my dude! Glad to see another Jedi pc! 😊
 

randomKansan

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Heyo Kansan!
I decided to check out your character profile after you messaged me about joining the social. Profiles are required to have a minimum amount of sentences for the biography and personality. I believe it’s roughly 2 paragraphs for a biography and a paragraph for a personality.

You have a really good base to work off of here and if you need help expanding this be sure to message me! I’d love to help out where I can my dude! Glad to see another Jedi pc! 😊
im only in high school so i didn't have that kind of time.sorry 'bout that! (just let me know if i make a typo)
 

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im only in high school so i didn't have that kind of time.sorry 'bout that! (just let me know if i make a typo)
No worries, the paragraph and sentences things are from a bygone era. I was corrected on that! My bad! 😊
 
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