Jorren Vel'Sana Training

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Jorren wanted to pursue the topic further, but felt she didn't want to. Perhaps she would be more willing to after a sparring match. "Right.. You may lead." He said, taking one of the training blades from the wall, he dropped into his defensive stance.
 

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Niva stamped her foot, a wave of force energy spreading across the ground as she simultaneously leaped into the air, the force simultaneously propelling her upwards. She timed it so she would come down with a strike to the padawans shoulder, just after the wave of force would hit.
 

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Jorren decided to do the first thing that came to mind, also the craziest. He decided to use both of his new force abilities. Sending his force powers into his legs he leapt up into the air straight towards his master. He then chanelled the force directly where she came down with her blade, it took the hit, and he attempted to take his master straight into the ceiling with his shoulder.
 

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When Niva's blade hit the invisible wall, she instantly changed her tactics. Using the force, she blasted herself out of the way, landing 7 ft away from the padawan.
 

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When Niva had blasted her way away from Jorren, he raised his hand to the ceiling and focused the force within his arm, if it worked for his legs, hopefully it'd work here. He used the force to strengthen his arm and take the blow from the wall, he then used it to help him push off the ceiling and slid as he hit the ground. He used all four of his limbs to send himself back into the air and over Niva, landing behind her he sent a kick into the back of her knee, with his blade following behind at her back.
 

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Niva felt her knee buckle at the attack as she collapsed, spinning in place to catch the second attack with her own blade. A white light seemed to emanate from her knee for a coupe seconds before she was off again.

Using the force, she pushed her body away from the attacking padawan. Bringing herself back to her feet, she sent out several attacks through the force. all coming form different directions, and all enough to slam the student into the ground.
 

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The force that pushed her away, aided him in leaping backwards away from her. Landing with a small skid backwards, he then felt the ripples in the force coming at him from all directions, he wasn't sure how to stop all the attacks, so he decided to try and power through. Sending another surge of force through his legs he leapt into the force attack, blade towards it to try and negate any pushes.
 

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((so close!!! if you had coated your blade with your own force energy it would have worked.))

The force attack slammed into the padawan.

((I'll let you write how much damage you take, but you did not avoid this attack.))
 

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The force took the blade right out of Jorren's hand and hit him in the face with it, it aswell sent him back across the room and he hit a wall. Sliding down the wall he landed on his knees and grabbed his weapon back. He groaned while standing back up to his feet, one hand gripped his stomach and the other his blade.
 

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Niva dropped her blades and rushed foreward.

"Are you ok?" She asked reaching him.
 

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Jorren raised his hand to signal he was fine. "Dizzy, is all.. Stomach hurts a bit but I'm fine." Jorren said, noting the pains in his body as he swayed slightly. It wasn't too bad, he figured he had hit his head on the wall, and perhaps winded himself.. Or at the very extreme bruised a few ribs.
 

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A white light emitted from her hand as she touched it to his stomach. The healing energy flowed from her body into his.

"Is that better?" She asked.
 

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Jorren flinched at the touch of her hand, a surge of pain went through his body but was soon replaced with calm feelings. "Hmm.." He inspected, poking his stomach and feeling no pain. "Much better, thanks!"
 

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"Do you wish to learn this technique?" Niva asked.
 

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Jorren nodded his head. "Yes, I am very interested in it, now." He continued to inspect his stomach by poking and prodding it with his hand.
 

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"Tomorrow," Niva instructed. "Go to the hall of fountains. Find one you like as you will be looking at it for the next couple of weeks. Then sit down in front of it and begin to lift the water out drop by drop. Once you have amassed a ball of water into the air about the size of a grav-ball, release it back into the fountain. Do not be surprised if this takes several days to accomplish. I want you to continue to do this until you are completely tired out. Return to me when you can do the water exercise for the entirety of your normal waking day and can complete at least one grav-ball sized water orb. This is not an easy ability to learn. Expect it to take awhile."
 

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Jorren nodded his head. "I will go now, then." He said, putting his weapon back on a nearby rack before walking to the door. He waved a goodbye before leaving through the door and walking to the Hall of Fountains where he took to a fountain in the center of the room. Here, he dropped to his knees and closed his eyes, meditating. He concentrated on the water infront of him and began practising the technique.
 

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((Go ahead and make your next post nice and long. Take as long as you have to. I require usually 3-4 of these posts during training.))
 

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The sound of the running water soothed Jorren as he kneeled before the fountain. He cleared his mind and focused only on the water that was infront of him. He pictured the fountain in his mind, every detail, every blemish, with all the water within it moving around delicately. Almost instinctively he reached out with the force, touching the water and causing rings to form in the fountain, before dispersing and going back to its regular state. He was now ready to try this technique, while having reached out with the force he now concentrated on moving the water.

Jorrel slowly removed a single drop of water from the fountain, raising into the air above the fountain he held it in place with the force, surrounding it to keep it safe. He continued to move water into the bubble of the force, making it larger to hold the oncoming water. A few times he had nearly lost focus due to several loud younglings wandering into the Hall, being loud and giggly as usual. A few hours had passed when they had desturbed him, the distraction and exhaustian and caused him to release the ball of water infront of him.

The water hitting the fountain sent splashes around Jorrel, hitting his robes and splashing some of the younglings around them making them even more hyper than usual. Being exhausted from the battle earlier and then this technique Jorrel fell back as the water splashed him, closing his eyes and resting there on the spot.

( Better? :CHappy )
 
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((sorry about the wait, holidays, you know how it is.))

((ok, your character is dead if you keep this post as is. You've basically been in a trance for days expending insane amounts of energy. This is a technique that if done right, will force you to pass out within 4 hours of beginning it. A 72 hour stint of this would kill you, or permantly damage your connection to the force. Please edit it. Also you need to do this without meditaiting as your opponent won't let you stop to meditaite in the middle of battle. This is why its done in the hall of fountains where there are constant distractions going on.))
 
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