Independent Jeyten Dres

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Nar Shaddaa
117 ABY


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Force-sensitive
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Human
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1.82 meters
72 kilograms
Black
Hazel
Russet
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Jeyten Dres

"Force has an annoying way of pushing you into doing shab you don't want to do."
— Jeyten Dres

Jeyten Dres was a Force-sensitive human male mechanic, bartender, explorer and one-time smuggler. Hailing from the planet Nar Shadda, he was the descendant of a Jedi Knight that fought during the Clone Wars, Jey initially rejected his Force-sensitivity and aimed to keep his head down and live out his life on Nar Shaddaa unnoticed. Until he was forced to reveal the truth about himself, leading him to fleeing Nar Shaddaa and going on a journey to discover more about himself as well as find his father.


Biography

Early Life
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A young Jey
Jeyten Dres was born on Nar Shaddaa and raised in Hutta Town to a Force-sensitive father Cayne Dres and mother Annaya Dres, who was a mechanic. Like his father, Jey was discovered to be Force-sensitive and upon that discovery when he was only eight years of age - Cayne decided to tell the young and confused Jey about their family's history and of how they come from a long line of Force-sensitives that started from a former Jedi Knight that fought in the Clone Wars and had survived Order 66.

Cayne explained that their ancestor escaped the Purge and went into hiding before falling in love and having a daughter, his daughter was Force-sensitive like himself and he began secretly training her in hopes of rebuilding the Jedi Order and overthrowing the Galactic Empire - however, he was discovered and killed by the Inquisitors before he could complete their training. Before his death, he left his damaged lightsaber to his daughter. That lightsaber became an heirloom in their family and for generations, it had been passed down and eventually ended up with Cayne.

After processing the revelation about his family's history and the discovery of his Force-sensitivity - Jey was ready, willing and eager to being learning more about the Force from his father. Cayne and Jey kept their Force-sensitivity a secret as to not risk being captured by the town's new Hutt rulers and forced to serve under them. Cayne trained Jey for four years in how to use the Force and how to use a melee weapon before abruptly leaving Jey and Annaya without a word, only leaving their family's damaged lightsaber behind. Hurt, confused and angry at his father leaving them for no reason - Jey turned his hatred inward and detested the Force that was inside him and his family's connection to the Jedi, that day Jey opted to block and ignore his connection to the Force by any means necessary. Five years later, Annaya was the only one supporting their family and a year later she fell ill before dying shortly after. Now alone in the galaxy, Jey hated his father as well for abandoning him and his mother and causing her to work herself to death to support him.


Party Phase

Jey would find some companionship, even though it was only surface level, with his co-workers at a new job with a repair service where he specialised in fixing or upgrading air speeders. After their shifts were over at the repair service, Jey and his co-workers would spend their nights at the clubs - partying, picking up girls (or guys, Jey didn't judge) and consuming alcohol and death sticks. Even if it was brief, it was his only form of happiness.
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Jey at the repair shop
Although at night, just before drifting off or while dreaming - Jey would see visions or hear the disembodied voices of his family, his Jedi ancestor in particular - express their disappointment in where he was going in his life, how he had no direction, he would always be told that it wasn't his destiny to party his life away and damage his connection to the Force and that he couldn't hide from his destiny forever. Jey would always wake up, sweating and confused, always unsure if what he had dreamed about were really his dead relatives haunting him... or if it was the death sticks taking their toll on his mind and body.


Discovery

On a seemingly normal day after closing up shop and getting ready to hit the club with his co-workers - Jey felt a strange feeling in his chest but ignored it, little did he know that this was his connection to the Force beginning to restore itself and it was warning him that his life was about to change forever. Jey's night resumed as normal, he decided not to consume any alcohol or death sticks that night as he had to be the designated driver and get everyone home alive. While leaving the club, Jey and the crew took a shortcut through an alley way to get to their speeder truck - inside the alley way, they were stopped by three thugs with blasters and a vibro knife. Jey attempted to deescalate the situation with humour but his drunken friends began mouthing off and standing up to the thugs which resulted in the situation to escalate.

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Jey at the club
It all finally came to a head when one of the thugs shot off a blaster into Jey's friend's stomach, shocked and angered, Jey unconsciously called upon the Force to blast the thugs away, knocking them unconscious. Jey and his friends picked up their injured friend, hauled him in their speeder truck and drove him to the hospital. The drive was tense as Jey could ever so slightly feel the fear and tension in his friend's - and it wasn't fear for their injured friend's safety, it was fear of Jey.

Arriving at the clinic, Jey waited in the waiting room while his other friends stayed with the injured. With his secret out, feeling shame and disgust within himself - the young man was visited by an apparition or a hallucination from his Jedi ancestor, explaining that it was time to face his destiny. While not fully agreeing or ready to face his "destiny" - he understood that he had to leave Nar Shaddaa, in case the Hutts discovered him. Jey left without saying a word, went to his apartment, packed his bags, stole a freighter from the repair shop and left the planet in the dead of night. Unsure of where he needed to go, he knew he needed to think of what he was going to do next in his life.





Personality and traits



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Jey in his explorer outfit
Jey was a human male who stood at 1.82 metres and weighed 72 kilograms. He had black hair, hazel eyes and russet skin. On the surface, Jey portrays himself as a lighthearted jokester without a care in the world. Jey frequently tells jokes and responds to things with sarcasm or zingers, this was a way to deflect and hide the conflict within himself about his past and lineage. Recently, however, Jey is learning to accept who he is, his past and his lineage - although, he still faces insecurities regarding self-worth and the expectations held on him by others.

Despite his lighthearted nature on the surface, Jey is very outspoken and tends to speak his mind a lot - regardless of who he is addressing, if you were a bum or a noble, he wouldn't hesitate to reveal his true feelings. His outspoken nature also translates into his flirting, if Jey is attracted to a person or not - he'll be sure to let you know.

Because of his age, Jey is immature, brash, cocky, impatient and proud. He also has a tendency to recklessly jump head forward into danger at the expense of his own safety without thinking of any potential repercussions, through sheer luck, he has survived most of his dangerous exploits. Jey is also very emotional, in the sense that he follows his heart more than his head and is more likely to react to things emotionally instead of rationally. He cares deeply for the people close to him and would risk his life at any given moment to save them. Jey's re-connection to the Force has opened him up more to the temptations of the Dark side, although he desperately tries to reject its allure, it is an uphill battle.

Powers and abilities


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As a result of his excessive death stick consumption, Jey's connection to the Force was severely damaged. However, after willingly re-connecting to the Force, Jey is becoming more and more attuned to it as time goes by, thus allowing him to perform more Force techniques, he is most proficient in techniques such as telekinesis and Force sense. Because of his lineage of Jedi and Force-sensitive individuals - he has the potential to become very strong in the Force.

Since rebuilding his family lightsaber and attaining his father's journal, Jey has begun using it to train himself to use a lightsaber in combat. Jey's style of combat is influenced by both Ataru and Djem So. The Mandalorian Song Wren has described his skills with a blade as fast, strong, and graceful. Similarly to a Jedi or Sith, Jey's ongoing self-training has made him more athletic than the average person.

Growing up on Nar Shaddaa, Jey knows how to defend himself - with his fists or with a blaster. Engaging in many street fights in his youth, and frequent drunken cantina brawls in his late teens; Jey is quite adept in hand-to-hand, while not professionally trained, his tactics rely on dirty manoeuvres, such as scratching, biting, spitting, throwing objects - anything to disorient and defeat his foe. Regarding a blaster, however, Jey's skills with a blaster are moderate at best. He's not a sharp shooter but he isn't clueless either, he knows how to work a blaster and how to shoot an enemy - that's all, no fancy stuff. Anything to get the job done.

Jey's piloting skills are above average due to his Force-sensitivity. He is a very skilled mechanic, being taught the trade in his youth by his mother. Being raised on Nar Shaddaa, Hutta Town specifically, Jey is practically fluent in Huttese and has also picked up some other languages too but it isn't as proficient as his ability to speak Basic and Huttese. Ever since acquiring 4EY-18, Jey has begun to pick up binary.




Equipment
  • Yellow Lightsaber - Jey carried a damaged lightsaber hilt that's inoperable, the lightsaber was wielded by Jey's ancestor and was heavily damaged during his final stand against the Inquisitors. Jey carries this damaged lightsaber to feel connected to his family. However, he repaired it in Bountiful and is now his primary weapon.
  • 'Explorer Outfit' - Jey's default outfit, he now wears this during his travels.
  • 2x DL-18 blaster pistol - Jey was given this blaster by a co-worker as protection living in Nar Shaddaa. He obtained a second one off of the Quarren mercenary Segarr on Corellia during The Great Escape.
  • Datapad - During his travels to explore Jedi and other Force-sensitive temples, he decided it would be useful to carry a datapad.
  • Kath Hound - A YT-2000 Light Freighter that Jey 'fairly' won in a totally legitimate Sabacc game on Ryloth in between the events of Paying your Debts and Sugar and Spice and Everything Not Nice.
  • Cayne Dres journal - A journal left behind for Jey in the Temple of Eedit. It contains all of Cayne's research, thoughts, knowledge of the Force and their techniques, lightsaber construction and how to wield one, as well as lightsaber combat. Jey theorises this was left for him as some sort of contingency in the likelihood that he never became a Jedi.
  • 4EY-18 'Scouty' - A 4EY series scout droid that Jey discovered in the ruins of the Temple of Eedit. They both learned that 4EY-18 was previously owned by Cayne and left for Jey to aid him in his search for his father.



Jeyten's Story



'Lost' Arc

Chapter I. Conned
Chapter II. Paying your Debts
Chapter III. Sugar and Spice and Everything Not Nice
Chapter IV. The Great Escape
Chapter V. Nah Shaddaa
Chapter VI. We Have to Stop Meeting Like This
Chapter VII. Finding Purpose

'The Search' Arc

Chapter I. What Remains of our Pride
Chapter II. Bountiful
Chapter III. Self-Training
Chapter IV. Rumble in the Jungle
Chapter V. Confronting Fear

Chapter VI. To Stare into the Abyss
Chapter VII. Dark Findings
Chapter VIII. Wrong Place, Wrong Time
Chapter IX. A Civilisation Passed
Chapter X. Broken Bonds
 
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This looks good so far. There are a few things to be corrected before approval:
- Please include, somewhere easy to see, that Jeyten is a Force-Sensitive. This should be listed near his basic information as well as within his biography.
- Remove the explicit reference to him drawing upon the Dark Side. The reasoning behind this is that telekinesis is a neutral force ability, even when used in anger and many children / teens reach out to the force through their emotions without drawing specifically upon the Dark Side.

Tag me when this is completed.
 
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