Holding Out

Nightfall

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Plot Outline Submission Template:

1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Marina Giulestei, her mind pieced back together, knowing the end is nigh chooses to put her skills to use in holding out against the darkness. Making her mind up to recruit her old comrades from the revolution on Sahmina, where they fought against the darkness once before, and unite them once again to establish a hold on the planet Mustafar, a desolate planet where they would be difficult to detect. Where they might harry the empire from for many, many years to come...

2. What other players will be a part of this?
Will look for interest

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Sahmina
Mustafar

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.

ASK - Marina returns to Sahmina, meets with her remaining allies from the Zharran Rebellions, and convinces them to join her in the inevitable fight against the Empire.

ASK - Landing on Mustafar, Marina and her companions face dangers as they search for a location to set their home.

ASK - The base set, Marina brings in the remaining younglings she can, as well as any further allies, defending them from the planets dangers as they settle in for the long fight to come.

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Set up a small Jedi/Rebel enclave on Mustafar for next timeline, using Marina's revolutionary backstory to some effect, and giving a hidden staging point for the nascent rebellion that will bloom in the future.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
Wouldn't say no to a dm, but I'll look around.
 

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Hey, @Nightfall096!

Sorry, but Mustafar would genuinely make zero sense for a Jedi refuge. Not because it's literally covered in lava, or because there are a dozen other perfectly good planets neighboring Sahmina, but Mustafar is a nexus of the dark side.

Plus, the thread count is a little insufficient. For a Level 2, I'd expect a minimum of five threads if we're talking about a new "base," which would additionally require an approved write-up.

And, with respect, I will say that such an enclave may stick out like a sore thumb when the new timeline does begin. How it would, I won't elaborate, but that's my two cents.

Love you, Night, but I'm going to take a dump on this and archive.
 

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No stress much appreciated! From a look up I wasn't sure if that nexus would have existed yet so I thought it might be neat, it had come up once in the council chat as a possible spot so I thought I might go for it, so no stress :) I'll have a think of what to do then!
 
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