He who stalks behind the stars

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What is going to happen in your plot? Darth Victress will meet the "All Powerful One" and her and her two apprentices will gain access to basic R'luh magic
What other players will be a part of this? Darth Victress and her two apprentices: Markov and Mid Samekh
Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Vjun, Mytus
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.

1. (Ask/Player DM) - Darth Victress and her apprentices travel to Vjun, where they interrupt a cultist congregation. Only the strong may advance further, the trio of Sith select a High Priestess to duel and prove themselves worthy of accepting the boon.

2. (Ask/Self-DM) - The last ritual occured on Mytus, a small planet on the outskirts of the Outer Rim and right into the chartering Unknown regions. Darth Victress arrives there, completing a ritual that will summon the All Powerful One

3. (Ask/ Player DM) - The All Powerful One arrives, and the interaction between the Force Monster and the trio of Sith will determine if they survive to receive the blessing or whether the God will deem them unworthy.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Victress will begin the process of being a member of the Cult as well as gain access to the abilities of R'Luh magic. Only the non plot powers will be achieved. Champion of the Void will be claimed in a separate plot later.

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. No

 

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I'm going to say that this plot will need to have something other than self DM opposition with 3 participants for the first two threads. Most thread difficulties are based on a 1 on 1 bases. Whether that be Self-DM, Dice, or DM vs player. In PvP its the possibility of PC vs PC but purely risk. In this case I'm going to say that the other two threads should be dice or at least one other thread DMed at a minimum.

 

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I'm going to say that this plot will need to have something other than self DM opposition with 3 participants for the first two threads. Most thread difficulties are based on a 1 on 1 bases. Whether that be Self-DM, Dice, or DM vs player. In PvP its the possibility of PC vs PC but purely risk. In this case I'm going to say that the other two threads should be dice or at least one other thread DMed at a minimum.

Okay, I’ll make the first thread Player DM as well.

 

[Darasuum]

So far the descriptions state Victress as if she is doing this alone. Can you also word it so that all participants actions matter, not just your own character? Seeing as all participants need to complete a 3 thread plot to earn this reward they should all have a fair stake in the risk and reward.

for example, instead of saying " The All Powerful One arrives, and the interaction between the Force Monster and Victress will determine if she survives to gain his favor."

" The All Powerful One arrives, and the interaction between the Force Monster and the Sith will determine if they survives to gain his favor."

that way if one of them actually completely fails at this the others will still suffer the consequences and hold everyone accountable.

 

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So far the descriptions state Victress as if she is doing this alone. Can you also word it so that all participants actions matter, not just your own character? Seeing as all participants need to complete a 3 thread plot to earn this reward they should all have a fair stake in the risk and reward.

for example, instead of saying " The All Powerful One arrives, and the interaction between the Force Monster and Victress will determine if she survives to gain his favor."

" The All Powerful One arrives, and the interaction between the Force Monster and the Sith will determine if they survives to gain his favor."

that way if one of them actually completely fails at this the others will still suffer the consequences and hold everyone accountable.

Edits made

 

[Darasuum]

Approved

 

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@Darasuum

I'd like to cancel this plot please, this is not a direction I want to go with Victress and I've had some hard times getting Vamp to DM the threads. I have some other goals before end of the TL.

 

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@Darasuum

I'd like to cancel this plot please, this is not a direction I want to go with Victress and I've had some hard times getting Vamp to DM the threads. I have some other goals before end of the TL.

Sounds good.