Folnov Ack'zev

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Folnov Ack'zev (Dead)

Dead, killed by Caden Danderfluff in the story Role Play Just Another Day


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NAME: Folnov Ack’zev
FACTION: Republic
RANK: Sergeant
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 25
GENDER: male
HEIGHT: 6 foot 5 inches
WEIGHT: two hundred pounds
EYES: blue
HAIR: brown
SKIN: white
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: various battle scars
DOMINANT HAND: right
FORCE SENSITIVE: no

STRENGTH: 80/100
DEXTERITY: 65/100
CONSTITUTION: 80/100
INTELLIGENCE: 80/100
WISDOM: 60/100
CHARISMA: 70/100
FORCE POWERS:


SKILLS: Leadership, Ground combat (He has been trained by his father to be a soldier since he was two), Demolitions, Speeder flying

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: Folnov lives for combat; the rush he gets from battle is his only care in life at this time. His skills as a soldier are unparalleled, even a Mandalorian would be hard pressed to keep up with him.

Weaknesses: He actually doesn’t know much beyond combat, He has great charisma with any troops he is commanding, but his rough and tumble ways seem to turn civilians off.

GEAR: Folnov almost always wears his trusty fatigues. The rank patches are not real for Folnov, they were a gift from his Mandalorian mentor, when he said Folnov was "Almost Mando" In general, when going into battle he will wear a helmet with integrated nigh vision and other “goodies”. Durasteel plating goes over the fatigues and he wears a large ALICE pack on his back. In the pack are some of the essentials of combat. A first aid kit, extra ammunition, more extra ammunition, extra more ammunition, food, and a PLEX rocket launcher. His blaster is a custom assault rifle made by an unknown weapons smith on his home planet. The rifle is very durable and has the capacity to fire either blaster bolts or projectiles. When firing projectiles the rifle has a multi caliber bore, meaning he could load it with rocks if he wanted to. Two combat knives are on his body, one on his right forearm, and the other on his right calf.

SHIP: None


PETS: None


PERSONALITY: Folnov is a courageous man, he will keep fighting to save his comrades and win a battle no matter what the danger to himself. Folnov's tenacity is a major assest in battle, he will assault an enemy position untill he takes it, even if he has to do it by himself. He is excellent as a leader in battle; his personality inspires his troops to fight their best.
Because of the fact he has spent his entire life training for the military he almost always uses military lingo. While this is annoying to civies Folnov believes there is nothing wrong with it and he is just being very clear and presice.

HISTORY: Raised by his father in the art of war since he was two. Folnov was always destined to be a great soldier. When he was young his frame was always built taller, stronger, and heavier than the other kids. By the age of fifteen Folnov was superior to even his father in firing a blaster, fighting, and tactics. Because of this, Folnov’s father hired a Mandalorian mercenary to teach his son. Throughout five years of training by the Mandalorian, Folnov learned to speak Mando'a and adopted some of their principles.

At the age of twenty he applied for the military academy his father had gone to and was at the top of his class, when he was expelled. A fellow student had pulled a serious prank and then blamed Folnov. Even though Folnov denied all involment he did know who had done it. Knowing that the other student, a skinny lad by the name of Ge'tan would never make it in life if he didn;t graduate and become an officer, Folnov did not tell you had really commited the act. he knew that he could survive as a mercanary like his Mandalorian mentor had.

By twenty two Folnov had become a soldier for hire and fought in numerous campaigns. He had fought as a soldier for planetary governments untill at one point in a battle the officer in charge of the platoon he was attached to was killed. Stepping up to the command Folnov lead the platoon into the very heart of the enemy encampent, displaying superior tactical supremecy to the other commanders. Now though at a twenty five he wants to find a cause worth fighting for, and stick to it.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS: Just Another Day (Open)
 
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Not that its a huge deal, but why would a char who's life has been an enlisted soldier and picture depicts an NCO rank be an officer?

And also, you could do with quite a bit more history/personality, maybe explaining my prior point. Just come constructive critcism.
 

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Not that its a huge deal, but why would a char who's life has been an enlisted soldier and picture depicts an NCO rank be an officer?

And also, you could do with quite a bit more history/personality, maybe explaining my prior point. Just come constructive critcism.

Well, the pic is just one I found on the web, and his father was a career soldier, Folnov is a mercanary
Thank you for the contsructive criticism though seriously that is always good to get
 

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The pic wasn't my main point. Bear in mind there are career soldiers who are enlisted men who never get higher than Sergeant Major; the officers tend to have a reason to be officers, they tend to have a great deal of intelligence, leadership and attended an officer academy. This profile is an out and out soldier; maybe add into the history something along those lines. Again, just a suggestion, but I say this because you've applied to be a Republic Lieutenant with no real reason why he would be one.
 

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We have a minimum requirement for Personality and History. More are required.
 

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Fixed it up, added history, personaliy, and explained patches in gear section
 
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