Erin "The Friar" Wilson

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NAME:Erin "The Friar" Wilson
FACTION: Republic Army
RANK:Corporal
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'1"
WEIGHT: 201lbs
EYES: Grey Blue
HAIR: Black close cropped hair
SKIN: Black
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:A scar on his cheek and on his back.
DOMINATE HAND: Ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: N/A

STRENGTH: 8/10
DESTERITY: 7/10
CONSTITUTION: 9/10
INTELLIGENCE: 5/10
WISDOM: 2/10
CHARISMA:7/10

FORCE POWERS:
N/A

SKILLS:
Demolitions
Sniper
Stormtrooper skills (Charge)
Close Combat

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
N/A

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He can brawl, get out of the way, and is pretty healthy but he doesn't care to learn much and doesn't have much wisdom.Because of his strength people will follow him into battle.

GEAR:
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Slug Thrower modified to have a chainsaw bayonet
A Blaster Pistol
Several Demolitions Charges
Gear Belt (food,ammo,etc.)
Armor

SHIP:
N/A

PETS:
N/A

PERSONALITY:
Erin is a brave individual wanting to stand up to those he deems "inconsiderate". Many will follow him because he says things that are right even if they shouldn't be said. Although he has several "followers" he never cared to command. He cares for all those he fights to protect. He challenges authority because when he is proven wrong his beleif is strengthened.Erin has never followed the easy rout knowing it is more difficult in the end.

HISTORY:
Raised on a "backwater" planet his town was chosen for a attack by pirates. The Republic soldiers that were supposed to protect the planet failed and Erin never forgave them.When the soldiers arrived Erin decided to throw rocks at them since all the weapons were broke or gone. The soldiers apprehended Erin and searched for any other survivors finding only three others. Seeing as how only Erin and three others survived the soldiers put them into their Youth Training Regime. Erin was constantly doubting the superior officers then when they were right his beleif in them strengthened. He quickly proved a strong body and strong leadership but always turned down the offer of going into a officer school. When he was almost old enough to leave the Camp another group of pirates attacked,one that had several force-users. As the other survivors were murdered by the force-users, Erin held on to life although he was almost killed by a rocket launcher. After the pirates got supplies they left and reinforcements called from a nearbye military outposts finally arrived.Erin was found unconscious with a peice of shrapnel next to his spinal chord. The medical facility he wa taken to removed the shrapnel and when Erin asked to keep it he was given it. He made it into a necklace to remember fallen comrades and the hatred he now had for all force users. When he went through several tests to see how far he could go with the healed hole in his back Ein outperformed most of the other people.Erin then asked to go to the nearest recruiting facility. When he arrived he immediantly signed for the Republic army and chose to be better than those who had let his village die.

KILLS:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A
 
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I like the basic concept but maybe you could write a bit more detail into the different scene's.
 

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Different scenes?Elaborate if you will.
 

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Like when your colony is attacked by pirate's it ends after about five lines. I like the profile I think it would be even cooler with more detail and stuff.
 

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Details are a tad bit hard to write about at the moment although I added a few things.
 
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