Eisa's Personal Development Plot

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Character Name and Link: @Eisa Nimbus
Character Level: 2 (When Started - Currently Level 3)
Character Rank: Sith Knight (When Started - Currently Sith Master)
Name of Plot: Eisa - Character development plot
Participants in the plot (Character accounts):
@Abigail Nimbus = @TheBrokenMadMan,
@Darth Malos = @The Matt
@Eisa Nimbus = @Plebometer
@Darth Evandrus = @Nefieslab
@Darasuum As DM

Intended Outcome of Plot: To Provide a means for Eisa to grow away from being a loose cannon by developing and learning to focus and harness her abilities and powers to give her the stepping stones to develop towards Sith Master
Actual Outcome of Plot: As intended outcome
Any PVP or Staff DMing involved?
@Darasuum Providing DMing Services as noted in the thread list below

Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:


Thread 1 - Not you again!!!
The history surrounding Eisa is shadowy and vague at best, often there were rumors that stemmed from her home planet Bakura that spoke of a 'Crimson Menace' that had nearly brought the planet to the brink of collapse through decades of indiscriminate destruction. But for those who regarded her could not see that for someone with a child like demeanor and lack of any concern-able abtitude would be capable.

Thread 2 - Famous last words
Eisa whilst dispatched to carry out a simple retrieval mission, by one of the Exile masters, Malthazar, to meet with a freighter pilot to get star charts for the unknown regions, learns through conversation that her dad is still alive and currently residing in a remote part of Bakura
@Darasuum Acting as DM for the role of smuggler / information barterer

Thread 3 - Lost Track
Upon obtaining the star maps she finds the Junction unusually empty, an in her haste Esia leaves a note for Darth Malos providing him with the requested star maps before heading off to Volik to track down her father.

A week after the teen's departure Abigail learns of Eisa's where abouts through Malthazar coneying a message shortly before the holonet is flooded with reports of a Jedi (she possesses a yellow / orange blade) destroying the capital city of Bakura

Thread 4 - Broken Home

Through her travels Eisa finds that her father is living on Bakura, and returns to her home planet to find that her dad does not recognise her and had thought her to be long dead after going missing at the age of 6. But finds that with his 'little girl' being an Exile and the one who had wrought senseless destruction on their home planet, denounces her, causing her descend fully into the darkside and in her anger picks up where she left off, bringing Bakura back to the brink of collapse. Following the revelation of the news cast that Abigail receive and after she travel out talk Eisa down, accompanied by Malthazar should she be unable talk sense into the girl. The attempts to placate the girl, by talking to her, using bribes like ice cream and even the telepathic trick where Abigail masquerades as Eisa's 'conscience' fail as the young Exile is too consumed with rage

Abigail is forced to allow Malthazar to step in and intervene to incapacitate Eisa, bit of a skirmish errupts between the two before she eventually is subdued / knocked out.
The side plot / PR spin from this could be that the Exiles are seen to be actively tracking down and eliminating rouge dangerous Jedi, even though it is more damage control

Thread 5 - Last Hope
Eisa awakens back at a remote location (Korriban) not fully aware of what she had done, yet alone the discussions that had taken place between Malthazar and Abigail, who were witness to the full destructive potential of the young Exile, who elected to rather let it go to waste, decided to assist with her recovery and coming to terms with being overwheled by the Darkside

Thread 6 - Last of the Wilds
Following in the wake of the events on Bakura, Eisa finds that her lightsaber has become unstable and in a moment of uncertainty requests the assistance of Cregan, to help try and fix her lightsaber, owing to her assumption on the Sith Lord and former Jedi's knowledge of the weapons. Cregan notes that her kyber is cracked, and assists with her bleeding a new kyber crystal to replace the one she damaged due to her mental instability.

Thread 7 - Throne
Following the latter conversation with Lord Evandrus, Eisa travels to Korriban to make use of an artifact she had captured for the Sith on Ossus, having received authorisation from the Sith lord to use it so she could manifest her alternate self to fight it and force it into submission. Allowing Eisa to fully gain control of her dark side abilities.
@Darasuum Acting as DM for the role of Shadow Eisa
 

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Character development plots are genuinely the best kind of plots. Fantastic as always, @Plebometer.

Credits will be handed out appropriately!

@TheBrokenMadMan, @The Matt, @Darasuum:
Hit me up on discord or tag me here when you decide where you want these plot credits to go. kthxbai.
 
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