Sith Order Devree Wren

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Devree Wren was a human male who abandoned his Mandalorian clan during the 'Force Eternal' era of the Galaxy. After his betrayal he worked as a mercenary in the Outer Rims. He was given work by a Guardian of the Sith Eternal. Eventually, he found himself fiercely loyal to the Sith Eternal due their manipulations.

Basic Information

Name
Devree Wren
Homeworld Nar Shaddaa
Age 42
Height 172 centimeters
Weight 91 kilograms
Gender Male
Faction Sith Eternal
Force Sensitive No

Background

Devree grew up on Nar Shaddaa, where his Mandalorian parents tried to take care of his teachings. Joel, his father, saw huge drawbacks of Clan Wren. They decided to abandon their culture when Devree was a teenager. Heirlooms were kept, albeit now they just collect dust. Many others of Clan Wren also scattered.

On the Smuggler's Moon Devree worked for local authorities. The corrupt security detail ran protection rackets. Certain gangs knew him personally, since he sold back confiscated spice way below market-price. That was nothing new on Nar Shaddaa.

Tension arose between two warlords on Nal Hutta, the planet below. Even alone the sign-up bonus worth it for Devree, so he jumped in and gained military experience in his twenties. He was rigorously trained, practiced with blaster rifles, learnt piloting. He was mostly tasked with hijacking shipments, every now and then involved in live combat. The mercenaries became good friends.

A former partner introduced Devree to an intriguing person. The man called himself Yung. He paid Devree enough to not hear any questions. They were looking for some kind of artifact, that was well hidden. Yung handled talking, but Devree was the muscle.

Yung revealed he was a Sith after working together for ten years, but he also used Force Manipulation throughout the time to make Devree relentlessly loyal to him. Devree didn't learn about the cult's structure or the eternal, but he had a rough idea he worked with the Jedi's enemy.

While Devree wasn't force-sensitive, he had proven himself as a valuable asset. The consequences of betrayal were also obvious, he's seen Yung's cruelty before. Yet, he liked working for them. He liked that he belonged.

Equipment

Despite abandoning his clan, Devree still kept his Mandalorian armor. It is dark colored and doesn't resemble any clans.

Devree has a piece of WESTAR-55 Heavy Blaster Pistol that he keeps out of plain sight.
 
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Hello, Ediwa. I've taken some time to review your profile and have some issues that will need to be addressed.
I understand the length of time Devree was employed by the Sith Guardian, Yung, wasn't short-lived. Still, after some discussion, I don't believe it would be realistic given their desires to remain hidden, that this Sith would reveal his affiliations to the Eternal, even to a loyal hired gun. given the idea that it would put them at risk of discovery. This will need to be changed before it can be approved, meaning the faction would need to be changed as well.

Please make the appropriate changes and tag me for approval.
 

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Hello, Ediwa. I've taken some time to review your profile and have some issues that will need to be addressed.
I understand the length of time Devree was employed by the Sith Guardian, Yung, wasn't short-lived. Still, after some discussion, I don't believe it would be realistic given their desires to remain hidden, that this Sith would reveal his affiliations to the Eternal, even to a loyal hired gun. given the idea that it would put them at risk of discovery. This will need to be changed before it can be approved, meaning the faction would need to be changed as well.

Please make the appropriate changes and tag me for approval.

I see what you mean. I made changes to note Devree doesn't know jack and he was victim of severe force manipulation, not just a simple hired gun.
 

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Hi, Ediwa. These were not the changes I had asked for in my previous review. Given that the Sith Eternal, up until this most recent public event, remained unknown, Devree would not have had contact with him to the extent suggested in your biography. Devree's faction will need to be changed from Sith Eternal to another available faction (I suggest again, Independent). References to the Sith Eternal and Sith will need to be removed or redirected to another organization. I understand your ideas for this particular character, but it does not fit within the current / past events of this particular timeline.

Please make the requested edits and tag me for review. If you'd like some additional time to rework this character, you can also request that he be moved to the player workshops until you're ready to have him reviewed.
 

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Okay, I'll put this aside for now then. Just archive please.
 
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