Sith Order Independent Crown Prince of Alvaeria, Ravus Sephyre

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RAVUS SEPHYRE

O V E R V I E W
Age
26

Species
Firrerreo-Sephi

Height
6'3"

Weight
188 lbs

Eyes
Blue

Hair
Brown

Homeworld
Skynara

Gender
Male

Faction
Sith-Independent

Rank
Champion-Prince

Force Sensitive
Yes, Trained

Era
Force Eternal
Ravus was born to the Sephyre royal family of Alvaeria, one of Skynara's kingdoms that broke off from the Enwynn royal family long ago. Due to the culture's political prejudices his parents were forced to hide his true identity from just about everyone else. Even his mother was forced to hide away, remaining a secret while a false queen was crowned in her stead for the sake of the Sephyre family and Alvaeria. Only a select few were allowed to know of the half-Prince, and they would go on to look over and train him while he grew up in the shadows of his family's fortress at the base of the extinct volcano that Alvaeria was built into. It was discovered pretty early on that the lad had an affinity with the Force, though the loyal subordinates he'd been given lacked the ability to guide him in its ways. His father was trained by a Sith, and did what he could to teach his son the ways of the Force, but due to his responsibilities and the need to keep the boy's identity secret Ravus had to develop his powers mostly on his own for a time. It wasn't until he was a teen that the guidance he needed would finally arrive.

A grey-skinned Sith Besalisk's starship crash landed on Skynara between the Alvaerian kingdom's territory and the Ebania's kindgom on the other side of the small planetoid. The stranded Champion carved his way out of the wildlands in the neutral zone between the two kingdoms with his pair of crimson splitsabers, and eventually discovered the Alvaerians. Impressed by the Sith's abilities, and eager to have his son's powers with the Force properly tempered, the king struck a deal with the wayward Besalisk. He'd be supplied whatever he needed to live comfortably yet obscurely while the people developed the parts necessary to repair his ship. In turn he was asked to train Ravus. Suspicious of the lad's identity, the Champion saw an opportunity to bring the planet into the grasp of the Empire through him, and hid his true agenda while he took Ravus as his Apprentice.

After a few cycles spent training on Skynara, the half-Prince, the Besalisk, and the loyal group of royal guards would all eventually disembark on the repaired starship that had brought the Champion to Skynara. Together they would continue to protect, raise, and train the adolescent Apprentice while they scoured the Galaxy for relics, forgotten temples, and anything else that caught their power-hungry attention. After several more cycles spent training and exploring the galaxy Ravus was eventually able to become a Champion. The group continued their nomadic spacer lifestyle until the pair of Sith found themselves ready to return to Skynara once more to reunite Ravus with his rightful heritage.




P E R S O N A

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Reserved and patient. Steadfast and vigilant. Courageous and protective. Ravus tends to keep control of his emotions, preferring to stick to cold and calculated strategies when dealing with most situations. He tends to follow orders without question, but prefers to be in control and tends to be guided by his own sense of morality.



M O T I V E S

Having recently restored himself as the prince of Alvaeria, Ravus now seeks to accomplish what his ancestors began back when their kingdom was established. To pacify the monstrous infestation lurking throughout Skynara. He doesn't have much of a desire to take the throne at the moment, but he has recently been getting pushed in that direction more and more by his ex-master.




L I K E S

Finding new relics and temples. Soaking in hot springs.


D I S L I K E S

Cold temperatures. Alvaeria's current political stance on Ebania.

A B I L I T I E S

A T T R I B U T E S

Strength
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Dexterity
███

Stamina
█████

Intelligence
███

Wisdom
███

Charisma
██



S K I L L S

Computers
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Mechanics
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First Aid
███

Survival
████

Piloting
███

Leadership
████

T H E F O R C E
Favors and excels in Pyrokinesis.

Follows the belief that the dark side is the natural state of the Force, which is to be bent and dominated to one's sheer will. He had some guidance when he was younger, and later had extensive training when the Sith Besalisk, Krug, became his master. He is familiar with a wide variety of neutral powers, mostly defensive and physically enhancing powers, and is capable of using a few other basic dark side abilities.



S K I L L S

Great at unarmed fighting, swordplay, and lightsaber combat. Capable of using blastswords proficiently.

Was provided a moderate education while he was raised in Sephyre Fortress, and had prestigious martial training from his time being raised in the Shadowguard. These skills were further improved after he became Krug's apprentice.



L A N G U A G E S

Fluent in Galactic Basic and his native languages.

Can't really speak any other languages, but can understand some simple phrases from some common languages.
A S S E T S

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W E A P O N S

+ Crimson lightsaber

+ DE-10 blaster pistol


W A R D R O B E S

+ Black, dark red, and white robes/tunics.


A C C E S S O R I E S

+ Ammo bandolier



D R O I D S

+ None


S H I P S

+ None


V E H I C L E S

+ None


M I S C

+ Smartpad Dataphone

+ Personal Translator Mask

R E L A T I O N S H I P S

F A M I L Y

King Sephyre > (Sephi Father)
King of Alvaeria. A man who has been around for a couple centuries. He led the Sephyre family into building and defending Sephyre fortress at the bottom of Alvaeria. When Ravus's Firrerreo mother crash landed on Skynara he was there to save her from the clutches of the untamed wilds and brought her back to his fortress, where the two eventually fell in love.

Queen Sephyre > (Faux Sephi Mother)
A close friend to Ravus's parents, and a member of a different Sephi family. She agreed to marry Ravus's father in order to protect his non-Sephi mother, not to mention the bonus of an elevated status, more wealth and power that she got in the process. King Sephyre does what he can to keep her pleased, so that she doesn't reveal to the rest of Skynara what has happened. With the reemergence of Ravus as the crown prince people have begun to have suspicions, but so far Alvaeria has been able to keep its people distracted through various means.

Secret Ma > (Firrerreo Mother)

Her identity is kept hidden for her protection and the political image of the Sephyre family. She escaped Firrerreo and crash landed on Skynara where she struggled for her life in the wildlands until she was found by Ravus's father. They later fell in love, but as she wasn't a Sephi the pair were forced to keep their romance a secret. While she is provided enough credits that she doesn't need to work, she still finds other ways to help Alvaeria, and is sometimes able to visit Ravus and the king when the opportunities arise.



F R I E N D S

Personal Shadowguard > (Subordinates)
Only a few of the highly trained experts that have devoted their lives to watching over Ravus and following his orders have survived over the cycles. He doesn't really want to lose these friends he has developed a strong connection with, and as such he typically chooses to operate alone or alongside Krug, and utilizes the guards for running errands or watching over his stuff.



N E U T R A L

Krug > (Ex-master)
Sith Champion. Grey Besalisk. Made an emergency landing on Skynara, and eventually got pulled into the war going on between the kingdoms and wildlife that ran rampant throughout the planet. Trained Ravus in the ways of the Force and dark side while staying at Sephyre Fortress until his ship could be repaired enough for the pair to leave the planet so they could take their lessons to other worlds and search for more power.



E N E M I E S

Person > (Relation status)
Extra notes and info.
T H R E A D S

C H A P T E R 1: Skynara

We Rise At Dawn > Ravus sets out on a critical mission for the Alvaerian kingdom, involving the crown princess of Ebania, Viola Enwynn.

Until Death Do Us Part > After having successfully captured the Ebanian princess, Ravus takes Viola through the vast Skynaran cave systems to take her back to Sephyre Fortress.




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Updates & Notes

2022

September

2nd

- Made the vague blaster pistol a DE-10 Blaster Pistol. (link)

21st
- Added new thread: Til Death Do Us Part (link)
 
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Hey @AdventCore so we've already had multiple staff members bring up issues with this character so please tone this character down quite a bit since he's basically good at everything (prince in a royal family, good at Sith magick (including being skilled in niche Force powers like Shroud/teleport), great with a lightsaber, skilled with blasters and bows, speaks at least five languages, sephi-firrerreo so trait advantages of both species, and has elite royal guards, etc.).

Given he's royalty I would recommend focusing on toning down the Sith and Dark Side knowledge. He really shouldn't know Sith magic, niche skills, etc. This profile is more on par with what I'd expect out of a character with 200-300 posts of development under their belt.
 

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Yeah you got it, I think I'd rather develop some of that stuff over time anyway tbh.

I'll start pulling some of that stuff out, thanks for the heads up!

edit: I can understand removing the blastsword for now too, since I should just wait for that write-up to be approved first anyway
 

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Hey @AdventCore so we've already had multiple staff members bring up issues with this character so please tone this character down quite a bit since he's basically good at everything (prince in a royal family, good at Sith magick (including being skilled in niche Force powers like Shroud/teleport), great with a lightsaber, skilled with blasters and bows, speaks at least five languages, sephi-firrerreo so trait advantages of both species, and has elite royal guards, etc.).

Given he's royalty I would recommend focusing on toning down the Sith and Dark Side knowledge. He really shouldn't know Sith magic, niche skills, etc. This profile is more on par with what I'd expect out of a character with 200-300 posts of development under their belt.

Sith Magick and niche powers removed.

Languages set to only be spoken with basic and native, his understanding of other languages reduced to only being able to recognize a few common phrases like some slang and pick-up lines. (Will remove those if someone thinks I should)

Blaster and bow proficiencies removed.

Elite guards downsized to just a few guys left in his charge, and an added note about his mortality toward them to keep them out of battles (so as to not bring them into pvp, which the ex-master is also not going to be in since he's just meant to be an obstacle for the story between Ravus and Viola).

Sith and Dark Side knowledge is also far less. Due to him hanging around with Krug and focusing on training I think he wouldn't actually have much information on the Sith. Probably doesn't know much about their bases or leadership, things like that.

I also went ahead and removed the droid, ship, and vehicles to help balance things.


I think I got everything, please lemme know if there's anything else standing out that anyone wants to address! I'm not sure what to do about the traits, but I'm willing to tone those down too if need be.
 
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Sith Magick and niche powers removed.

Languages set to only be spoken with basic and native, his understanding of other languages reduced to only being able to recognize a few common phrases like some slang and pick-up lines. (Will remove those if someone thinks I should)

Blaster and bow proficiencies removed.

Elite guards downsized to just a few guys left in his charge, and an added note about his mortality toward them to keep them out of battles (so as to not bring them into pvp, which the ex-master is also not going to be in since he's just meant to be an obstacle for the story between Ravus and Viola).

Sith and Dark Side knowledge is also far less. Due to him hanging around with Krug and focusing on training I think he wouldn't actually have much information on the Sith. Probably doesn't know much about their bases or leadership, things like that.

I also went ahead and removed the droid, ship, and vehicles to help balance things.


I think I got everything, please lemme know if there's anything else standing out that anyone wants to address! I'm not sure what to do about the traits, but I'm willing to tone those down too if need be.

This looks much better, thank you!

PS: I like the formatting of this profile
 
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