Jedi Order Corte Fletchador

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Name: Corte Fletchador

Faction: Jedi Order

Rank: Jedi Knight

Species: Human

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Height: 1.77 meters

Weight: 75 Kg

Force Sensitive: Yes, trained

Reputation: Unknown

Appearance: He has brown eyes, brown hair, and an olive complexion. He has a scar on the left side of his chin from where he was cut in a barroom fight in his younger years. He wears brown pants, black boots, off-white polo type shirt, and a leather jacket. He usually only shaves once a week and styles his hair daily.

Attributes: From a young age, he knew that he was different and assumed it might have something to do with the force. He kept it from his parents, who were weapons smugglers for the Drellis Syndicate. It was because of his parent’s profession that he learned how to fly small to medium ships. When he was a child, he would go along with his parents where ever they went and developed a love of piloting and has since finely honed his skills. Due to his natural ability to fly, he thinks of himself as someone who can step onto any ship and fly it successfully. That hasn’t always been the case and he has learned the hard way via a few near-death incidents that resulted in totaled ships. Following with that weakness, he really does think of himself as someone who can always will the situation to go his way – being overconfident.

He joined the Jedi Order roughly eight years ago and has since graduated to Jedi Knight status. As such he has excellent skills with his lightsaber, however, he still has a lot to learn. He finds that he sometimes has a problem anticipating his foe’s next move. He is also proficient with small arms but wouldn’t consider himself an expert.

Personality: He is a fun and outgoing person, who doesn’t have a problem with instantly becoming someone’s friend. He is a natural born leader; his friends would follow him to the ends of the galaxy and back. When he speaks, everyone listens because he treats everyone like they are the most important person in the room. He does, however, have a bad habit of over-exaggerating his stories, especially when it comes to his flying career.

Biography: Corte was born on Coruscant to a mother and father who were pilots for the Drellis Syndicate. While he was grateful for the piloting skills that they taught him, he always knew that what they did for a living was morally wrong. Afterall, what were the customers really doing with those weapons? While on one trip to a backwater world, he witnessed one of the customers take the weapons off his parent’s ship and turn around and massacre an entire village of innocent people, all because they lived on what was considered “prime” real-estate. When he got back to Coruscant, he found himself in a bar drinking and gambling to forget. Even though he was sloppy drunk, he felt like he knew when the cards were stacked in his favor and profited from the knowledge. While doing this he caught the eye of a strange cloaked figure named Jamba, a human who turned out to be Jedi Master. Jamba invited him to his “office” which was a private sanctuary for Jedi that was a little off the beaten path and introduced him to his potential. He has been training for the last eight years and has recently passed the Jedi Knight test. Since this wasn’t exactly what his parents wanted for him, he has cut all ties with them for now to ensure his and their safety.
Skills: He is an expert pilot, okay marksman with a number of blaster pistols and blaster rifles, strong with force sensitivity (mid-level with a light saber, mid-level in hand-to-hand combat)

Gear: He wears the robes of a Jedi Knight, he always carries his light saber, he carries a pack (Containing rations, medkit, and change of clothes), and he carries a communicator.

Role Plays: None yet
 
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Just curious, I know it goes in order received, but what is the normal wait time for approval? Thank you!
 

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If you added the under review tag yourself then you should remove that, mods are supposed to add that when reviewing a character. So could be they thought someone was looking at the character and it got overlooked because of that. If you didn't add it then it means thay a mod added it and that it's already being reviewed.
 

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I added that but didn't know I wasn't supposed to......it has been removed, do you know how long the review should take? Thanks!
 

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I added that but didn't know I wasn't supposed to......it has been removed, do you know how long the review should take? Thanks!
You can start RP'ing right away, the only things you can't do is PVP or Plots. As for approval, it depends on how busy the staff is and how many accounts are ahead of you. - Hope that helps.
 

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Welcome to the boards.

Corte was born on Coruscant to a mother and father who were officers of the Empire

So, we are 100 years after TRoS (so we are in 135 ABY) Unless they are of a long-lived species then your parents it's kind of impossible for them to have been employed by the Empire. The profile seems to think that we are in the Galactic Civil War period (as it refers to the Empire in the present tense and rebels in Corus?)

The Empire has been dead for over 130 years. Here is the Story So Far that will give tons of helpful info on our setting. The profile will need to be adjusted to take these things into account.

Can you also describe more about how your character joined the Jedi in addition?

And he does sure seem to be an expert in everything [/thinking] Maybe tone that down? Give him some weaknesses and fewer fields he's an expert in?

A lightsaber/blaster hybrid weapon will need a link to an approved tech write-up in the tech boards on this site.

When you are ready for me to take a look at this profile again you can tag me, or if you have any questions you can ask.
 
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It looks the same?

Even the compare post feature shows nothing changed from the post pre-review version to the current one.
 
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