ATTN: Technology Archives Requests

[Dmitri]

Pandora & Cocoon: I will re-approve both of these, but only under the stipulation that neither are mass-produced and that the ability to carry explosives is dropped entirely. They can be battle droids/probe droids or smart bombs, but not both. In addition to that, I'd like to see the Pandora's maser cannon, internal blasters, gas canisters, frag mines, and repulsor feet removed. It can have a light blaster cannon or charric for a primary weapon. Your choice.

Can they be purchased by individuals and organizations? I'm not aiming for a droid army, just added security. I'll make the necessary edits tonight.

Gambler's Utopia: We don't even allow main factions to have starships as large as this one, so I'm not sure how that was missed. Furthermore, the write-up states that it is affiliated with the Galactic Trade Coalition. If they built it, how did the Imperial Knights come about using it for their base of operations? Was it stolen? Was it given to them? Is the GTC renting out rooms to organizations that could possibly endanger their business? I don't see a purpose for this ship other than to give the Imperial Knights a freebie, which isn't characteristic of an organization that revolves around trade and profit. This will remain archived. If the Imperial Knights require a base of operations or a flagship, they can submit a new profile after the skip.

I can tone down the size. I'm not the best judge when it comes to deciding dimensions. Working with Xeno, it's a DSC that the IK have a small hideout on. It's not solely controlled by the IK. It's commander may be an IK, which I plan to switch out with a DSC NPC so that K can be more independent, but it's not solely under its control. In fact, it's closer to Hutt control than IK control (yet at the same time not Hutt control, as Addipos the Hutt helped fund it but isn't the major shareholder). Originally I had proposed it with Xeno to be with the normal DSC when it appeared that there'd be a subboard for each DSC; as that didn't happen, the purpose of this ship lessened. Mostly it serves as a rendezvous for IK, Indies (especially mercenaries and smugglers, as it secretly serves as a shadow port). My plans post-time skip were to keep it mostly neutral (despite housing some IK). Still, I'll abide by your recommendation.

Cradle: This is a sound concept, but who owns it? Cane Es Cade? The monarchy of Empress Teta? It's also quite large for something that doesn't even belong to a faction. You make a reference to the Galactic Alliance, but they are about to be defeated, which means this station is likely to become a target immediately following the Battle of Coruscant. I don't see a clear intent, so I'm going to keep it archived. If a faction works with you to bring this thing back post skip, I'll work with you on that.

CRADLE was designed to be a shipyard orbiting Empress Teta. During the invasion of Empress Teta, it was given to the Jedi and any GA forces on the planet to escape on, in which CRADLE fled Empress Teta. Currently it is under Ashara Vashee's command. My intent was it would allow for a safe haven for rebels and/or Jedi post-time skip. Each Cradle has gone a different direction.

Ark: Two million passengers, 150,000 metric tons of cargo, a hefty compliment, a heavy armament, jamming capabilities, and a mere 2,000 meters of ship don't mix. You need to seriously rethink this thing before I move it from the archives. You've made a colony ship that is also a warship and a carrier. There's no significant trade off and there definitely should be. Please make changes and get back to me on this one.

I'll work on it tonight and get back to you.

 

[Gaja]

Name of item: Battle Master Armor
Previously approved: Yes, Xeno.
Link: X
Intent: This is the Battle Armor of Guhoo Armstrong, the Jedi Battle Master. While I could have him live and fight without it, which he will in the beginning of Part II of the Timeline, facing Darths in equals rugged sets of armor makes it a bit of a requirement atm. Other than having it around for when he faces evil Darths and what not, it looks really cool and contributes to Guhoo's image.

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Name of item: HK-616/X-600 "Mosaic"
Previously approved: Yes, Xeno.
Link: X
Intent: This would be the assassin droid - companion of Yuri Sharp and the equivalent of HK-47 mixed with Legion from Mass Effect. I want him back to provide awesome comic and nerd relief and to have him back Yuri up in meetings. He's handy.

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Name of item: ZX-RR Swoop Bike [Sharp Industries]
Previously approved: Yes, Boli.
Link: X
Intent: Aside from being a product of Sharp Industries this is one of the swoops that people really seem to like and have their characters use. I've gotten numerous vm's and pm's from players asking about owning one, so I think that it should be brought back. It's also used by some of the Reaper SC members.

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Name of item: Nousagi [Sharp Industries]
Previously approved: Yes, Boli.
Link: X
Intent: Again aside from being a Sharp Industries product I'd like to see this one returned because it's the swoop Yuri uses the most these days, guess you could call it his personal model? And preferring a design such as this one over what George Lucas and co created I'd really hate to have to switch over.

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Name of item: ZX-RRR Ninja Racing Swoop [Sharp Industries]
Previously approved: Yes, Jiang.
Link: X
Intent: This is a racing swoop that I don't see being used in your everyday thread, it was created to be sold to professional racers all around the galaxy and will dominate championships for years to come, but its purpose doesn't end there. A few models will remain in the hands of true, and rich, enthusiasts and will mostly see use when a quick getaway is required or chases in packed cities happen and the police needs avoiding. It's also been used by Yuri in the Inter Galactic race that almost happened and I intend to use it plenty in the future.

 

[Wit]

Name of Item: Garuda
Previously approved: Yes, Xeno
Link: Here
Intent: My Jedi Moridin's personal ship, will be used as a personal transport post time-skip as well. Currently being used to evacuate Jedi from the Temple Hangers during the Battle of Coruscant.

 

[Jiang Winters]

I've taken care of both of you - Wit, I made a post in your ship's thread with a minor edit that has to be made, so please take care of that ASAP.

 

[Wit]

I've taken care of both of you - Wit, I made a post in your ship's thread with a minor edit that has to be made, so please take care of that ASAP.

Thanks and done. :)

 

[Wanderer]

Any approved Komad Industries technology :p also could you take a look at a few of the unapproved ones as well?

 

[Jiang Winters]

You need to follow the format given in the opening post, and you need to do it for every item you want removed from the archives.

If an item was never approved, wait until the time skip is complete and repost it in the main board.

 

[Darkwasp]

Name: KDY R-12 "Razorback"

Previously Approved: Yes - Demiurge

Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?43608-KDY-R-12-quot-Razorback-quot-Starfighter&p=918872#post918872

Intent: My character (Bahati Rehn) and a few other characters are still using the fighter. Also I believe the GA still employees it in its military.

 

[Wanderer]

You need to follow the format given in the opening post, and you need to do it for every item you want removed from the archives.

If an item was never approved, wait until the time skip is complete and repost it in the main board.

Sorry about that Jiang. I'll get right on that.

 

[Vencu]

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Unarchived.

 

[Silver Cutlass]

Name of item:
LSG-11 Vulcan Scatter Gun

Previously approved:
Previously approved by Jiang Winters

Link:
LSG-11 Vulcan Scatter Gun

Intent:
My character Lyon Skirata uses this, as well as several other characters on the site.

 

[Vencu]

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Unarchived.

 

[Wanderer]

Name: RX-7 Enforcer

Previously Approved: Yes? - Jiang

Intent: A droid created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.


Name: ATR-9 Artix

Previously Approved: Yes? - Green Ranger

Intent: A fighter created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.


Name: Silverdawn Dreadnought

Previously Approved: Yes? - Green Ranger

Intent: A ship created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.



Name: Tank Droid MK V

Previously Approved: Yes - Green Ranger

Intent: A droid created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.


Name: Pacifier Carbine

Previously Approved: No

Intent: A gun created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.

 

[Jiang Winters]

Name: RX-7 Enforcer

Previously Approved: Yes? - Jiang

Intent: A droid created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.

I never approved this - I told you to make edits to it, which were never made. Feel free to repost this when we're open for submissions.

Name: ATR-9 Artix

Previously Approved: Yes? - Green Ranger

Intent: A fighter created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.

Done.

Name: Silverdawn Dreadnought

Previously Approved: Yes? - Green Ranger

Intent: A ship created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.

Boli never approved this - he made a single post telling you to use the right template.

Name: Tank Droid MK V

Previously Approved: Yes - Green Ranger

Intent: A droid created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.

Moved.

Name: Pacifier Carbine

Previously Approved: No

Intent: A gun created by my indie company to sell and use as military forces.

Not approved, so not getting moved. Sorry.


As a reminder - if it's not approved, it cannot be used in the story in any capacity.

 

[Twisted Reality]

Name of item:
AI-1 Stealth Transport

Previously approved:
Yes -Jiang

Link:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?48308-AI-1-Stealth-Transport

Intent:
It is used by Drakus, and will continue to be used through the time skip and beyond.

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Name of item:
Sith Sabre Armor-Mk1

Previously approved:
Yes- Demiurge

Link:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...-Armor-Mk1-SSA-MK1&highlight=Sith+Sabre+armor

Intent:
It is Drakus' main armor, and will be used through the time skip but will be upgraded to a new 'Variant' Due to things that will happen character wise during the 10 years of the time skip.

 

[Jiang Winters]

Done!

 

[Radiwalker]

Name of item:
Kerstasus

Previously approved:
Yes, by Demiurge

Link:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?42652-Kerstasus

Intent:
The initial user of the armor (Drenn Kerstasus) is dead (archived really), but I'll be creating a new character that will be a descendant/follower of his and at some point will obtain the armor in question. When I first created the armor I intended for it to be passed down from one character to another and thus be present in every timeline we did from now forth, I also intended that only one of my characters would use the armor in a timeline, so as to increase it's distinctiveness. However, since the next timeline won't be a sequel to this one, I've decided that I want to play this story out in a smaller scale. Also, just to point this out, this new character will make an entrance after the time skip.

 

[Vencu]

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Unarchived.

Please see my post within the thread. A few edits need to be made.

 

[Dmitri]

Pandora & Cocoon: I will re-approve both of these, but only under the stipulation that neither are mass-produced and that the ability to carry explosives is dropped entirely. They can be battle droids/probe droids or smart bombs, but not both. In addition to that, I'd like to see the Pandora's maser cannon, internal blasters, gas canisters, frag mines, and repulsor feet removed. It can have a light blaster cannon or charric for a primary weapon. Your choice.

Gambler's Utopia: We don't even allow main factions to have starships as large as this one, so I'm not sure how that was missed. Furthermore, the write-up states that it is affiliated with the Galactic Trade Coalition. If they built it, how did the Imperial Knights come about using it for their base of operations? Was it stolen? Was it given to them? Is the GTC renting out rooms to organizations that could possibly endanger their business? I don't see a purpose for this ship other than to give the Imperial Knights a freebie, which isn't characteristic of an organization that revolves around trade and profit. This will remain archived. If the Imperial Knights require a base of operations or a flagship, they can submit a new profile after the skip.

Cradle: This is a sound concept, but who owns it? Cane Es Cade? The monarchy of Empress Teta? It's also quite large for something that doesn't even belong to a faction. You make a reference to the Galactic Alliance, but they are about to be defeated, which means this station is likely to become a target immediately following the Battle of Coruscant. I don't see a clear intent, so I'm going to keep it archived. If a faction works with you to bring this thing back post skip, I'll work with you on that.

Ark: Two million passengers, 150,000 metric tons of cargo, a hefty compliment, a heavy armament, jamming capabilities, and a mere 2,000 meters of ship don't mix. You need to seriously rethink this thing before I move it from the archives. You've made a colony ship that is also a warship and a carrier. There's no significant trade off and there definitely should be. Please make changes and get back to me on this one.

Changes made to Pandoras and Cocoons. Explosives removed. Now they're closer to security droids (with some infiltration capabilities though low) and probe droids, respectively.

Gambler's Utopia I've nerfed. I've given it a more reasonable backstory (mainly how it'll be post-time skip). However, as I'll still be working out details with Gaja about its usage (if even used), I know it likely won't be unarchived yet. Still, thought I'd notify you of changes to see if the nerfed version works (which I halved, if not more, the sizes).

The Ark I've made edits to so it has barely any warship capabilities (I kept 10 dual turbolasers for defense as if memory serves most non-warships have at least some weaponry for defense or to stave off asteroids). The tractor beams I had considered removing but considering it's designed as a colony ship and/or medic ship, I thought I'd keep some of them for search and rescue purposes. I can remove them if need be. I also nerfed the passenger amount and cargo amount. Like I said, horrible at judging acceptable numbers.

CRADLE I still haven't decided on. I may just leave it in the archives. I may talk with Cassanova and GABA post-time skip to see their opinions on the matter but for now I'll leave it be as they're busy and I see no reason to detour them.

 

[Vulpes]

Name of item:
Galactic Broadcasting Network

Previously approved:
I think it was..?

Link:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?46160-Galactic-Broadcasting-Network

Intent:
Spoke briefly to a few people about the idea, but possibly it becoming an asset to Rebel forces, so they can spread anti-sith propaganda?