Aiden Nosmirc

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NAME: Aiden Nosmirc
FACTION: The Jedi
RANK: Padawan learner
SPECIES: Miraluka
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6’3”
WEIGHT: 165 lbs
EYES: N/A
HAIR: Pale Blue
SKIN: Ivory
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: One long scar going across the jawbone on the right side
DOMINATE HAND: ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: Highly force sensitive

STRENGTH: Lithe, a liquid strength with fast bone-crushing power

DEXTERITY: Ninja/Assassin like agility
CONSTITUTION: Adequate
INTELLIGENCE: Clever, witty
WISDOM: Deep Thinker
CHARISMA: Lower than Average, mostly a lone wolf

FORCE POWERS: Force Sight (Natural species ability)
SKILLS:
Close range combat expert, clever, slight foresight, extremely agile, can navigate large areas in short amounts of time, can escape situations easily.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
N/A
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
-Strengths: Uses inner feelings and memories of opponent against them. Close ranged combat is unparalleled, can see through outer defenses; can see true feelings and impulses of a character, can see into the imediate future
-Weaknesses: Dislike for ballistic weaponry ex.) lasers, guns, etc… has rage problems after long periods of time.


GEAR:
Staff
Combat knife
Flash grenades
Smoke grenades
Throwing Blades
Proximity Mines
Herbal Medkits

SHIP: N/A

PETS: N/A

PERSONALITY:
Mostly calm and quite however when attacked or approached by someone with ill means will use mockery and cold crueltyto gain an upper hand by enraging the opponent. Usually in deep thought and will often keep to himself.
Has a long-fused temper but has rage issues when limit is reached. Typically kind hearted and shows a willingness to better himself and others around him.

HISTORY:
Abandoned on an outer system planet at the age of 8, Aiden took to the streets and looked anywhere for help. He would always wonder what had happened to his parents all through his life, which was probably why he had such a cold disposition towards most people all though he got a very introspective view of their lives. He is a Miraluka, and he doesn’t use his eyes to see. His race is born with the ability to use the force to see. Even though he had this talent he still struggled for survival in his early years. He often had to go without food for days and when he did get it he felt bad because he had to steal it.

Later in his life he had to fight in order to stay alive. He was befriended by a group of street bandits at the age of 14 and lived for 4 years in that way. He was really close friends with them although he didn’t approve of some of their recreational habits. Instead of participating in their violent acts he would instead use a stolen instrument to calm his nerves and play music. As well as making music, he gained several skills including the uncanny ability to scale buildings in mere seconds as well as a mastery of close range combat. However, he didn’t enjoy the life of violence he was forced to live he often had to help his friends by viewing easy targets with his force abilities.

One day the street bandits that had adopted him attempted to force him to join in a beating of a young child when he refused he was isolated from the group and hunted down as a traitor when he turned them in to the authorities. He got chased into a corner and he pleaded with them not to make him do what he didn’t wish to participate in. Attempting to defend himself he accidently killed one of them. After seeing his power the other bandits left him alone. Aiden, seeing what he had done to whom he once called a friend, was overcome with grief and stowed away on a public shuttle to an inner system metropolis.

Since, he has been traveling system to system trying to bring peace to those who deserve it. However, he has one true goal, he wants to speak to the Jedi Council and join their ranks. He has moved to the planet Curuscant. There he has lived as a street vigilante, trying to redeem himself by helping the others around him. Wanting to join the Jedi and work to change himself to be a better person. He has lead a life focused on living in the right way. He is known on the street as “The Wandering Sage” due to his habits of self isolation and his wise advice and help. He will not allow any wrong to be committed against an innocent and will protect all who need protection. What is a life if not a test before death?


KILLS: N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES: N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: N/A
ROLE-PLAYS: N/A
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Ark

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Try finding a picture that is close to what he looks like. That would help.
 

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history needs to be longer, and fleashed out, and a picture that represents your character would be nice to.
 

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Picture

I am going to draw one and scan it in but yeah TJ said i needed to flesh up the history too so I will do tht
 

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I will upload a real pic of my character after i finish drawing it, i have a place holder right now!
 

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Space out the history, and use a Spellchecker.
 

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To Dan:

Thanks for the tip i dunno what you saw that was misspelled... I used microsoft vista's office word program and only one grammatical error showed up.

Thanks for the tip anyway!
 

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alot better and a hint of batman to it lol with the whole vigilanty thing.
 
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