Ahri Vekarr

[Count Sam]

"I am Ahri, and you are about to be my prey today"​

"Yeah my name Is a Ahri, and I am a Taung who was raised on our beloved planet just like any other Taung. And yeah you should shiver, and hide when you hear my name, and race, since I am really agile, and tough just like my parents. I would also highly recommend that you dont use any tricks in a fight with me, since being an honorable, and a brave warrior does not prevent me from being cunning as well. I am also good at fightning with swords."


"You want to know who taught me how to use swords? Well I kidnapped one of those so called jedi, and tortured him. Forceing him to teach me was pretty hard but gladely he taught me how to use the basic form of the jedi befor he died, and well I dont remember its name exactly but it goes by form 1."



"You want to know more about me? Well there is nothing to know about me I am just a normal Taung, maybe a little bit tall, but my face probably looks like any Taung, and of course I got alot of experince in the battlefield from the too many battles I have fought in along with the rest of my race. I also hate the Hutts, and I almost thought about betraying my race when an alliance was forged, but as I told you I am an honorable warrior, and doing such a thing is not in my book. Yeah I am jus like my parents who fought in many battles as well, but the ended up dying of course, not like that I needed their help or anything. A true warrior does not need the help to get his job done. Ok well there is nothing more you need to know about me except that I am good with ships, and other mechanics including weapons as well, but I would not help you."


"oh, did I forget to tell you I really hate humans, so you better leave now befor I change my mind, and kill you, but hey Ill give you a chance to fight back since I am an honorable warrior. Damn, why am I still talking to you I rarely even talk to people from other races. Leave now, or get ready to fight me"​

 

[McFisticuff]

Sounds pretty cool. Although kidnapping a jedi seems unrealistic unless it was a lesser knight or padawan.

 

[Count Sam]

lol, I was thinking about the same thing befor I wrote this jedi part, but well he is a Taung after all :p

 

[Ru the Boatswain]

The use of the word 'pretty' put me off. Keep the words in character for more effect.

 

[Count Sam]

Gotta agree with you but in the whole profile it sounded as if an ordinary, and typical street gangster was talking.*cough* well its not like that I had a better idea or anything:CAbove:

 

[shwarzwald]

So made another character did we?