Achilles Roark-The Young Falconer

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NAME: Achilles Roark
(Aliases): The Young Falconer, The Prepubescent Pursuer

FACTION: Independent

SPECIES: Human (Caucasian)

AGE: 12

GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’5

WEIGHT: 140 lbs

FORCE SENSITIVE: No

APPEARANCE:

His facial appearance consists of a round oval head, along with blue eyes and semi-thin lips. His skin consists of multiple burns,scars and bruises through multiple incidents of getting into incidents that were WAY above his skill level, and crashes from other incidents. A noticeable feature his a deep burn scar around his waist, this was due to a lightsaber incident, when he tried attacking a Jedi Knight.

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ATTRIBUTES:

He has a decent amount of strengths. One of these strengths are his ability to learn from his mistakes pretty quickly, after 4 years of him leaving his home planet forced him to learn this. His is extremely determined and is hard to sway when he made up his mind on something, this is also one of his biggest weaknesses. He is in fact is pretty athletic for a child his age due to his intense adventuring, so he’s physically above children (in his species) who hasn’t exercised as intensely. His dexterity is above average, because of his years of engineering taught him how to control his fingers better. Learning about honor from his parents, Achilles puts extreme effort into being trustworthy to those who place their faiths in him.

A few of his weaknesses are his stubbornness, his sheer inability to change his mind placed him in situations where he hasn’t taught it through. The deep cut he experienced pierced one of his lungs. While now it patched up, it still affects his lung capacity, which ultimately lowers his stamina, because he runs out of breath quicker than normal. While stronger than most children, he is much weaker than the average adult.

PERSONALITY:

Achilles has a very strong personality, he is both extremely blunt and strong-willed. Despite living in the harsh communities of Tatooine and his “hardened” demeanor, Achilles cares about those calls close. He is extremely independent, and is extremely heistent of help. This results in him being untrusting about people, almost on the verge of paranoia.



BIOGRAPHY:

Look In About Me

SKILLS:

One of the more major skills that young Achilles possesses is his inhuman prowess in technological engineering: which he obtained from many years of hands-on experience with his father’s shop. Another skill of his is tracking, after leaving his home planet and becoming a young bounty hunter (albeit smaller bounty jobs), helped him hone his tracking skills and allow him to track down his bounty.



The lightsaber found in his starfighter (corrupted and forced to bleed by the sheer anger and pain of the child) has been by his side since his departure and he learned how to handle himself with it. While nowhere near the skill level of a newly graduated Jedi, he is once again above most Padawan due to having to learn to adapt in much more dangerous conditions.

GEAR:

Weapons

C.O.S Blaster (Concentrated Onus Sonar): Constructed and approved upon from his grandfather's gun. The C.O.S Blaster utilises extremely concentrated sound waves. A direct hit from the C.O.S results in violent and uneven vibrations (plus sound) to radiate through that certain area. Due to being sound waves and not plasma, blasts emitted from the C.O.S Blaster can not be deflected by lightsabers.

Juggernaut Saber: A lightsaber that previously belonged to a Jedi gone rouge, but corrupted by Achilles's hatred. This is a life-sized redden saber with a black leather

grip wrapped around to hilt to provide him with comfort and improved grip.

Armor

Mullinine Scrap-Armor Set: Constructed from the scraps of what remained of his family's mechanic shop





-- The Content Below is Optional, but Encouraged!--

SHIP: A reskinned Liberator-class Starfighter.



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Hey, welcome to the site! A few changes might be required before this guy is good to go. His Force Sensitivity is listed as No, but then you list him as having had Force training and being able to bleed a lightsaber. Also, the profile might better suit someone a lot older than 12. Near inhuman prowess in technological engineering will surely have to go, no one is that special as a level 1. A 12 year old level 1 at that. And having years of experience as a 12 year old is a bit much. The weapons will need tech write ups as they seem to be original stuff. And most importantly, you'll need an actual biography section.
 
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