Recommendation #1: Work on the grammar. Honestly, I am from the US, but I understand that you may or may not be.
Recommendation #2: What Force Powers does he have specifically? Healing, Telekinesis maybe. Others will say more about it.
Recommendation #3: Chiss have a 3 part name. Ex...
Name: Vogh'atel'emuga, core name Hatele
Faction: The Jedi Army
Rank: Knight
Species: Chiss
Age: 25 Standard Years
Gender: Male
Force Sensitivity: Positive, fully trained
Appearance:
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 190 pounds
Eye Color: Crimson
Skin Color: Blue
Strength: Scale of 1-100 He Is 93...