Not sure if anyone is still around that I used to RP with but forgot all about all the fun I used to have on this website.
My writing skills have kind of gone down the crap shoot, if I ever had any in the first place XD but it feels good to be back! If you remember please feel free to post...
Way too much power, for someone of seventeen.
Only youngling training? Come on, alot of master on this sight do not even know half the stuff this character does.
Other than thatm good profile.
I lkike the layout, but you need some history.
Hundreds of robed figures milled about, conversing softly in the cavernous halls of the sacred place, men and women of all species and all ages. Yes, though one stood out, or at least broke away from the crowd. The middle-aged Jedi, his brow robes shuffled ever so slightly, the cloth clinging to...
"Yes Master, as you say. It would be best to learn as much as we can about our enemy... the Jedi... I would rather die then sacrifice all that we have gained."
She stopped then eyes locked on her mentor, her master. They shown utter loyalty and determination.
"It would never come to that...
Makal couldn't help but smile to the comment himself.
"Indeed, well maybe in time, my padawan has been learning quickly, I believe this mission will give him the training he needs. A padawan can only train so much, my rewards to the boy. Well we shall wait, he should arrive momentarily..."...
"Ah I see old friend. Well my padawan should be along shortly, I hope that if any remain at all that they will lay down their arms peacfully. There is no need for bloodshed, for we are all brothers int he force." Jorbor was calm, his spirit held on high at the moment. The stillness brought...
Quickly the knight brought his blade back and to the left, fueled by the power of the force. Collideing with his padawans blade, then with his free arm he sent the fury of the force. In the form of a violent push, though unexpected the boy had to learn.
"Always expect the unexpected! Young...
Her expression turned to that of surprise, though it was in no negative manner. She had waited for so long, to finally hone her skills in battle and now was her chance at glory.
"Master a mission? I would be honored, I believe I am ready for such an undertaking. Let me be your blade......"...
Patiently he strolled into the small confines of the room. His padawan was late it would seem, yet this was not unusual of the brash youth. The old Jedi Knight could only sigh. pondering to what he padawan must have been up to.
Brown robes flourished about the ground, his garments clung to his...
Specters from an old war
Could you put my Jedi Knight, Makal Jorbor... In one of the remaining two spots for the mission thanks!
Also I was wondering if I could bring my padawan along with me. This is something the jedi Are acustomed to doing, though I thought I might ask anyways...
"The force in essence exsists all around us, we harness its power from within, and use it to destroy our enemies. The force is unexplainable it just is, to tell you the truth master. My explanation is truely opionated...."
She paused momentarily rethinking her words.
"Please inform me if I...
"Padawan the Makashi Form takes no effort. You flow as if in a dance, a saber form that can be easily replicated while only using one hand. You use your opponents power against him. You have reach, you have agility...."
The kinght ignited his saber once again, the familar green glow filling...
Makal tightened his grip, upon the hilt.
He had anticipated this maneuver, simply dropping his saber below the padawans, he brought it upwards thrusting to the right in a clock-wise motion. The movement was fluid and well thought out, a maneuver that was used to simply take your opponents...
He also conveyed a simple message, 'ignite you saber do as I do' Makal pulled out a different hilt this time, a shiney one similar to Corrans. The blade came to life with a hum, a radiateing blue.
The saber was held in one hand, then brought up vertical directly in front of the his face, as...
Makal was knelt as if he had never moved from that spot since him and his padawan had parted. In deep meditation, the Coruscanti sun was just beginning to rise over the horizon, filling the sky with a deep purple and blue haze. The master sent a strong mental impression to the student, to hone...