Petra sat down with Eryn, his words calmed her thoughts a bit. She took some time to think as she read the menu.
"I'll have some water and a small cake, if that's alright."
Petra watched as the person at the counter nodded and went to get their orders. A young girl came from behind the counter...
Petra laid quiet on the side of a building, resting in the shadows embrace. She had gotten in trouble again on Ziost and needed a getaway place so she had been hiding on the planet Abafar.
"For a planet so bare and quiet I suppose it is expected there would be a lack of sustenance...next time...
"Yes... My Master was always very good to me. He took care of me, trained me... But he believed differently from some others. Too differently, apparently. The Sith decided to "remove" him from existence."
Petra had to pause for a moment after that. The thought of what happened back then made her...
Petra followed the stranger. She felt his authority and power emitting from his aura, and also... something else that seemed far too familiar.
"Thank you... ... for not killing me. I am grateful for this. I am not certain of how 'powerful' I am. I have gone too long with out a Master and it has...
Hello! I think I might have mentioned before, but I draw things !!! I'm posting this to show off a bit of my work, and to possibly get some commissions from it. If I'm not allowed to advertise like this, I'll remove this post or an admin could too. I don't want to step across any lines. My...
The fighting had ceased. A tall stranger with an unusual authority had seemingly spared her. Petra hesitated.
She relaxed herself and spoke softly
"I am Petra," She thought for a moment, what was going on? One minute she is fighting off guards who have every right to attack her and the next some...
She saw their eyes... small and weak. These children had been abandoned with no one left to guide them. Petra felt a deep sense of empathy for them. She kept her right hand close to her saber so that it'd be at the ready.
She quickly ran back into the store, carelessly grabbing the food...
I'd love to do an RP with you sometime. Send me a private message and we can start planning some ideas!
I actually plan on Petra becoming Eryn's Acolyte. (That's Deviant's character, you should check him out, he's so cool!)
aaaand thank you, I draw a lot :3
Thank you so much for your input! Characters do sometimes reflect traits of the people who made them, and I'm anything but tomboyish. Ha-ha!
I definitely have a lot to improve on here, but I'm glad you took the time to give me a specific suggestion :) I added a bit more to her personality...
The room was dark and dusty. A sliver of light came through a small window, creating only enough illumination to see the door and a few boxes next to it. It was a small garage within a housing development on Ziost. The place was abandoned for the most part, so it seemed like a good enough space...
Wow thank you so much! I like your point, I'll try to break it up a little.
Also, I checked out your character Eryn, I love how much detail you put into him! He's so cool! I think Petra would be honored to have someone like him to look up to. I think they'd get along well.
NAME: Petra
FACTION: Sith
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Dathomarian
AGE: 14
GENDER: Female
FORCE SENSITIVE: Force sensitive.
APPEARANCE:
ATTRIBUTES:
Strength: 4/10 Not very familiar with using a light saber, minimal amount of training.
Dexterity: 7/10 Very agile, fast in maneuvering. She's used to...