So far, it seems like a great app. However, he doesn't seem to have any real weaknesses. You might want to add a flaw or something that he can't do well, for the sake of balance.
Var wasted no time getting into position, moving quickly yet quietly to spot behind one of the huge native flowers on the north side of the building. Pointing his repeater at the doorway, Var was ready to cut down any and all hostiles inside the building. He muttered into his own com link "Ready...
Var crouched down slight in the mud, listening intently. Looking around, he spotted nothing out of the ordinary. Mostly satisfied that they were safe for now, Var looked back toward Aethon. "Been a Mandalorian for about six years now. Joined up when I was eighteen, wanted to fight for a free...
Idly rubbing flecks of dirt off of his helmet's visor, Var nodded at Aerith's plan. It seemed simple enough and with a bit of luck everything would well. As much as he hoped it would, six years of service to the Dominion taught him that things typically go wrong in combat situations. Thankfully...