NAME: Ardelynn Kartegra
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, some training
Smaller than most of the boys (and some girls) his age in the village, Ardelynn is fair skinned with straight blonde hair and blue...
I haven't really roleplayed on the site much since the 5th Timeline. I'll make a character, do a few threads and then RL stabs me in the back and I'm back to lurking. A sub account has never been a barrier to me RPing a character. A simple profile posted and the 2 minute process to set the sub...
So for starters, there are some aspects of the character history that don't fit with the history of t he Sith Eternal. I recommend taking a look at the write up available here and get a feel for the origins of the faction. Wit is correct in stating that there was no...
Hey buddy, dont know if you misclicked to save your edits but the profile still reads as if hes already a longstanding member of the BHG. I also dont know if the Guild would front a prospective nobody hunter the money for cybernetic implants on promise of them joining the guild.
Only real thing I'd recommend changing is the sentence at the start of Personality regarding her reputation to state classmates or some sort of qualifier rather than the broad "reputation at the temple." Reputations are locked to immediate social circle at the first level so the...
There are still quite a few references to the characters notoriety among Umbaran society and the changes Faster stated necessary for her graduating thr military academy had not been made. Characters start out as virtual unknowns to anyone beyond their immediate family until theyve earned...
Heya, I'm so sorry for the delay on this one. I hadn't seen a notification for the tag.
Theres really only two issues I see with the character; there aren't really off world warlords and fleets of ships in this timeline. Most conflicts are planetary civil war or system civil...