I would first like to say that this is a very interesting concept. I also feel that you could have done a lot more with the idea, but the ideas I have would require a much heavier suit. As it is, I don't believe this will get approved in its current form.
I don't feel that the level of...
I don't think anyone would have an issue if it's a major update or change to the profile. However, necro'ing is generally frowned upon, but I don't believe this counts.
I would suggest you scrap this character and try again. This is a role play site not a video game. Invest yourself into the creation of your character and try to make something interesting. Take some time to read the lore on the site, and look at the available factions. A good way to get started...
We're not in the clone wars era.
If he's not in a faction you may as well just put "N/A" for your rank.
You can't just make yourself resistant to force powers by saying he was trained to resist them. That's called god modding.
The only purpose your biography serves is to explain why...
I'm back. Hopefully for good this time. Was suffering from a lot of stress, so my urge to role play just died on me. I'm much less stressed now, so I plan to try to get back into things, and not just drop off the face of the earth.
I will choose the lesser of two evils and vote Democrat. Unless a sane Republican actually turns up, but I won't hold my breath for that unlikely event to occur.