I BS all my writing. People 'plan' stuff sometimes and ask me what i'm doing, I sit down, and just write and hope something good happens. xD
I think you did a good job. Just because it seemed to come across as Dex was jumping on the chance to help them, which portrayed the sticking together rather well. :)
Yeah, that one message took about 4 minutes to write. Anyways, with your post it was great. Liked what you did there. Elias will probably be impressed by the readings from your message. Especially since he is a technology/slicer himself. He'll understand.
Anyways, no edits needed as far as I see. Once we get everyone together i'll probably have a meeting between Dex and Elias. Also have to set up a meeting with the Hutts.