1. Down the track I saw numerous swears and cusses. Nothing to worry about.
2. I was going to make a hacker character but you did it first. You stole my idea.
Gents, Icaro is a mind-reader.
In other news, Good work!
Tak walked up on Vindict for the second time around, on the same things he learnt last time. This time seemed to be improving the skills learnt yesterweek (I'm guessing it would have been a week). He walked up to the temple that he had walked the steps of many times before, observing the people...
Tak entered the room, Lightsabers in hand as he deflected the numerous shots fired at him, while letting Raslekx attack too. He sweeped with his lightsabers at two of their legs, making them fall over, then a double swipe at the remaining two, which would kill them instantly. Then he would knock...
Question 4= There aren't too much Pureblood females. We need to balance it out more.
Question 5= Purebloods are the best species for a Sith (In my opinion. They are second to Twi'leks.)
So people see bite marks? Don't Anzati eat brains? and It doesn't mention Anzati at all until the end of the bio. Just Constructive criticism. Feel free to prove me wrong.