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Od Hart AGE ► 20 SPECIES ► Human HEIGHT ► 5'10'' / 1.78m WEIGHT ► 161 lbs / 73 kg EYE COLOR ► Grey, Yellow HAIR COLOR ► Dark Brown HOMEWORLD ► Coruscant GENDER ► Male FACTION ► Sith Eternal RANK ► Legionnaire FORCE SENSITIVITY ► Yes, Trained Biography If there ever was a fitting...

Well then, i may have to do overhaul on profile. Not sure how long it'll take, but im working on it. As for my awful proof reading skills... Im gotta use Grammarly or other proof reading website since i clearly haven't fixed it enough. Appriciate it. That would be big help.

“It is easy to love your friend, but sometimes the hardest lesson to learn is to love your enemy.” ― Sun Tzu, The Art of War

■ Name: Hallda Acrux ■ Profile: Link ■ Rank: Jedi Knight

Fixed missing words problem, aswell fixing some spelling and grammar problems (altough im 101% sure that i probably missed some, as im avarage when it comes to english). I also improved the description and added about the usage of Force Stun ability. And i added more detailed description for...

I personaly asume that resisting stun with willpower applies to all, but i myself arent 100% sure. As for telekenisis replacing Force Stun, problem is that 1) It can (and probably will) be exhaustive the longer he holds him in the air and 2) Person is pretty much guaranteed to retaliate...

Yeah, English has never been my strong suit (dosen't help that im Estonian and have learned three other languanges. Jack of all trades, master at none i guess), so yeah i did expect it to happen. Ill start fixing right away. Fair enough, altough from what ive read, person with high degree of...

Just to let know, im somewhat inexperienced when it comes to rp'ing character (most of my roleplay experience comes from rp'ing as a nation in other forum), so any criticism and/or advice would be appriciated.

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NAME: Hallda Acrux AGE: 23 SPECIES: Human FACTION: Jedi Knights RANK: Jedi Knight HEIGHT: 6’1’’or 185cm WEIGHT: 187lbs or 85kg HAIR COLOR: Dark Brown EYE COLOR: Dull Brown FORCE: Yes, Trained STRENGTH: ██████████ DEXTERITY: ██████████ STAMINA: ██████████ INTELLIGENCE: ██████████ WISDOM...

INFJ-A "Advocate". Quiet (almost disturbingly) accurate. As for the specifics: 75% Introverted 77% Intuitive 60% Feeling 61% Judging 59% Assertive

Allan

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@Elijah Brockway Well since i wrote in BIO that he had become quiet arrogant at the age of 18, it wont be too big of a problem to add more about his arrogance. Besides, i probably need to do more editing and spell-checks anyways.;)