I feel bad for bumping a character that is as old as this one is, but I want to get some good use out of him before the current timeline ends. All of the other threads he has participated in died due to a lack of posting activity. Would anyone be interested in doing a thread alongside this...
Oh, wow. I did not know that Jedi are now allowed to form attachments. I guess I'm just a conservative. XD Anyways, your character is very good. Looking forward to seeing him in action. :)
I have only 2 qualms with this character. In your intelligence description, you said he does not care for academics. Then in wisdom you proceed to list that he is interested and skilled in many very academic fields, such as anthropology, philosophy, psychology, sociology, etc. It would help to...
Very nice character! :) He seems to be quite genial. I personally longed for a longer biography, but this is only because you have a rather pleasant writing style. And I'm sure that will flesh out as you develop the character and engage in role plays with him.
In addition, I rather liked your...
"S'cuse me! Pardon me! Move it already!" the bounty hunter spat hurriedly at passerby, slipping through their ranks as swiftly as he was able. His head whipped curtly from side to side, but his target remained most elusive.
Nevertheless, he remained calm and undeterred. To panic and break cover...
As the crowds shuffled mindlessly out of the hangars, the Clantaani above began to dissect them with his eyes. There! Long hair! No....not half shaved. Discolored eyes!!! Ah, but they are colored none the less. Partially shaved head! In a mohawk, the inconsiderate brute.
His eye balls flickered...
It's up to you guys. And thank you Prose A for changing it to Ask, I think that will help a lot. My biggest concern was having to fight two Jedi on my lonesome since I haven't seen Kant post yet, and Earlich was not going to be a combatant.
If you think switching sides would help, Shiznit, then...
We have a slight problem on this thread. A couple people had prearranged to be in this thread already. The setup was going to be:
Attackers:
Kant
Captain Flynn
Ehrlich Mar (controller, non combatant)
Defenders:
Prose A
Allurah
(Open to one additional defender)
Currently we have the following...
We're still adding to Loose Ends, but that won't be the actual hunt. That's more unraveling the "Collector" mystery. We're going to do the actual hunt in "Silver Pastures: Divagation". It's your turn to post in both threads.
The silence left by the death of the speakers can almost be considered audible. It echoes emptily through the room, crashing down to deafen the ears of all present. A sense of foreboding fills the heart of the old Clantaani. After a career of 47 years as a man-hunter, he had learned to keep...
Mar's use of background music in this thread has been very inspirational. I think it truly enhanced the read and gave it that very creepy feel that sends chills up and down the spine. I think it would really improve the reading experience to continue doing this throughout the "Loose Ends"...
Hi all, Madd Dogg here. The way I see things progressing, "Loose Ends" has been kind of like a prequel to the actual hunt. The other defenders have started other threads explaining where they are. I think for all intensive purposes "Loose Ends" should be a thread where the bounty hunters acquire...
Hey Prose A! Sorry to steal the wind from your sails, but I'm supposed to be trying to capture you? Wanted to give you a heads up that Kant and I are going to be joining your thread, in case you wanted to include him in the post order so that way he's not completely left behind.