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Saeryl let out a sigh as the man simply refused to listen to reason. The bounty hunters had been paid, let her free and left without incident, so now it was just them and the Ithorian. She walked forwards up to Karasym, unclipping her Saber from his belt before walking around behind the Ithorian...

Aria spent the first five minutes tracking down their Eeopies and bringing them over to where owyn had left her, but did then doze off after about ten minutes of Owyn being gone, getting a bit of rest before Tikk's chattering awakened her. She opened her eyes to see that Owyn was walking back...

Aria couldn't help but smile warmly at him as he brushed the hair out of her eyes, then would simply shrug her shoulders. She was tired, but she felt she could wait until they got back to the ship so that she could collapse into a real bed. At least she hoped she'd make it - now that he...

Saeryl tilted her head slightly as they moved into the room, seeing that Karasym was already inside. Apparently he enjoyed making things more difficult then they needed to be. She shook her head as the bounty hunters all drew weapons and trained them on her. "Now now, there's no need for...

I'd be ok with this. But I've already used up every character idea in my head so I'm gonna just copy/paste my characters with new names and give them sharp sticks/clubs for weapons, ok?

Grammar wise, it could use some work... less commas would be a good start - especially in the ending paragraph. There are a couple missing words and some misspellings as well. As for the character herself, reading through that profile brought the word 'overpowered' to mind, since you've...

Aria smiled softly as he took her hand, slowly looking back at him before his hand was guiding their heads closer together. She closed her eyes, lips parting slightly - and then he was talking again. She opened her eyes and started to speak, something along the lines of him talking too much when...

Saeryl smiled to herself as Karasym left, then walked along quietly as she was escorted by the bounty hunters. This would be a good test, seeing if he actually went through with the plan.She was a stranger to him, so she didn't see why he would risk his life unless his morals demanded it. She...

Saeryl didn't complain as the cuffs were put on her, but she would correct the man. "Oh, neither of us are Jedi. But I'm sure he'll love me." She looked over at Karasym, smiling softly at him. "You say you want to change,t o be a better man? Well, killing these people is not the way to...

Saeryl blinked in surprise as the door blew open, the sat still and waited as Karasym and the bounty hunter spoke. She gasped as one drew a blaster and shot, surprised by Karasym's reflexes, and that he had blocked a blaster shot with his hand. Why had he done that? She slowly stood, pulling her...

Aria looked over at the direction she had come as she heard Owyn yell her name. She was surprised he was awake. She hoped he didn't try to move so soon, it might be bad for him. She reached down and unentangled the power pack from the disgusting mass of old dead guy, then piked it up gingerly by...

Aria stopped the flow of the Force through her body as she heard Owyn speaking weakly, her eyes opening to see he was looking to hers. She frowned as he passed out, then shook her head slightly. He was right, that wasn't the way to heal. She didn't know that it hurt him so much, but she did know...

Saeryl studied him quietly for a few long moments, then reached out a hand to pat his arm genty, a smile appearing on her face. "Well, if that's the way you feel, then I for one will forget about everything I've been told about you." She paused for a moment, then nodded and looked to his...

Mirci't came out shortly after Jesmond did, but she hadn't taken most of what he had left on the floor. She had the belt on and the bracelet, but she had left everything else behind. The rest was just dead weight that would do her no good. She moved to and hopped into the back seat of the...

Saeryl continued frowning, then shook her head and waved a hand dismisively, but not at him. She was actually doing it at her thoughts. "Well that doesn't make sense. Lane once told me that if I ever met you, you'd kill me slowly in ways I couldn't even imagine." She let out a sigh...