kib lortuna

NAME: kib lortuna
FACTION: no faction
RANK: no rank
SPECIES: twilek
AGE: 19
GENDER: female
HEIGHT: 5'10
WEIGHT: 105 lbs
EYES: light purple
HAIR: no chair
SKIN: light purple
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: tatoo on her head
DOMINATE HAND: both
FORCE SENSITIVE: no

STRENGTH: physicly weak
DESTERITY: agile
CONSTITUTION: very good
INTELLIGENCE: shes not really a harvard grad
WISDOM: not very wise
CHARISMA: very high

FORCE POWERS:
she doent have any

SKILLS:
shes a prostitute. shes very good at it.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
shes not a jedi

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
shes very strong willed. shes physicly weak.

GEAR:
taser, just in case things get bad. money. any other gear she needs.

SHIP:
a personnel shuttle

PETS:
no

PERSONALITY:
kib is very outgoing. she has to be to make money as a prostitute because she has to pretend that she actually likes being with fat politicians. but she is very passionate.

HISTORY:
kib lortuna was born on coruscant to two city police officers. her child hood wasnt that good. her dad wasa shot in the head and her mom because a prostitute. she trained kib as a prostitut apprentice and then kib became one too. she continues to be one to this day and really enjoys her work. she doesnt think its disrespectful to girls at all.

KILLS:
none

DUELING RING MATCHES:
no

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
no

ROLE-PLAYS:
none yet

Sad sad sad.....Worse than my maniac character Mazon Jaker.

needs work...This is why the rp school was created.

Masquerade said:

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That picture is pretty sweet. Reminds me of spiderman.

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Fioch said:

Sad sad sad.....Worse than my maniac character Mazon Jaker.

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Ruukil_2.0 said:

needs work...This is why the rp school was created.

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All three of you are terrible people. If you don't think it's a brilliant profile, then say how it could be improved, don't just say.. well, what you said. If you were brand new, how would you like it if that was how your first profile was greeted?

Constructive criticism, or mouths shut. Make your choice.

Who here has made a prostitute profile?

My first profile was Adenn and he got good reviews.

There is no need to say anything mean about it, Adenn.

Fioch said:

Who here has made a prostitute profile?

My first profile was Adenn and he got good reviews.

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How is that post even slightly useful?

Seriously, either post something relevant and HELPFUL or STFU and GTFO.

An unusual concept, but that doesn't mean it can't work. I won't lie and say the profile doesn't need a lot of work, but we're all here to help you if you need it. You can send a PM to me or another Admin, or you can start a thread for yourself in the Role-Play Training board.

I'm always available for help. :D

ok then...Put it through microsoft word.

Try to say it out loud when you correct it.

Ruukil_2.0 said:

ok then...Put it through microsoft word.

Try to say it out loud when you correct it.

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Much better.

We'll make a decent human being out of you yet!

uhu...thats what they said at the orphanage...but look at the orphanage now...Crispy.

Ruukil_2.0 said:

uhu...thats what they said at the orphanage...but look at the orphanage now...Crispy.

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Yeeaaah...

You sure it wasn't some sort of mental institution...?

Okay I geuss it was wrong it's just I don't see many profiles like this.

I have yet to read the profile...still staring at the picture...

Edit: on another note prostitut made me laugh real hard. Not bad, work on spelling and look at other peoples profiles to fish around for examples of how a decient storyline is written, not that yours was bad it's just lacking.

4/10 on this one, but there's always room for improvement.

I like it. :CHappy: great concept.

join the Bounty Hunters Guild. We need service at the guild hall. -wink-

Glitched said:

examples of how a decient storyline is written

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Are you kidding me? :CDumb:

Brandon Rhea said:

Are you kidding me? :CDumb:

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I just laughed really hard at that.:CHappy:

Brandon Rhea said:

Are you kidding me? :CDumb:

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I'm blunt and honest, if you have issues with that I'll be glad to talk to you about them ^_^