Jedi Order Kaerdunth Shir

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KAERDUNTH SHIR

AGE

► 22​
SPECIES
► N/A​
HEIGHT
► 5'8"​
WEIGHT
► 125 lbs​
EYE COLOR
► Gold​
HAIR COLOR
► Black​
HOMEWORLD
► Naboo​
GENDER
► He, Him, His​
FACTION
►Jedi Order​
RANK
► Padawan​
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes​
BIOGRAPHY
Born and raised on the peaceful planet of Naboo, Kaerdunth lived a modest and simple lifestyle. He did not live in a rich household and his parents were simply commoners, but they did make sure that Kaerdunth was taken care of and that he wouldn’t be out on the streets. He received a modest education via the planet’s public-school system and made it his mission to excel in all of his classes. Kaerdunth was more interested in his schoolwork and laying down the foundations for success, instead of playing or interacting with the other kids, and in fact he only socialized with them if he had something to gain. This concerned his parents who worried that there was something wrong with their son, as he held little to no interest in socialization, save for when it only benefited him and aided his ambitions. Though he did not regularly engage in socialization, Kaerdunth was never malicious towards any of his peers, but instead remained apathetic and indifferent towards him. There was only one time that Kaerdunth ever acted with malicious intent towards his peers, and that was when he was defending himself against some bullies who made the mistake of picking on him during lunch. When one of the bullies went to punch Kaerdunth, he retaliated by stabbing the bully in the neck with a fork. While unconsciously using the force to inspire fear into the other two bullies, causing them to run away screaming in terror. This sudden display of force sensitivity caused the headmaster of the school to alert the jedi, and after convincing his parents that joining the order was the best bet. Vincent was inducted into the Jedi order as a padawan at the age of sixteen.
PERSONALITY
A cool and mannerly young-adult Kaerdunth posses a strikingly cold and calculated demeanor for a Jedi. He is more of a scientist with a logical mind and a near insatiable curiosity, rather than a righteous warrior who would defend the innocent until his dying breath prevents him from raising a lightsaber. Admittedly, Kaerdunth is more interested in unraveling the inner workings of the force, instead of the noble duties or philosophical pursuits of the Jedi. He doesn’t really care about galactic conflicts and political issues and views them as nothing more than either entertainment for his occasional boredom that haunts him or childish antics. Kaerdunth is the type of person to question everything that has been taught or told to him, which can be a little irritating to some Jedi masters who are simply trying to do their job. If you were to tell him not to use the dark side of the force, Kaerdunth would ask you why, and then debate with you on the matter of the force. Likewise, telling him not to do something would only peak his interest in the matter, which more often than not does get him in trouble. However, with that being said Kaerdunth takes a methodical and careful approach to problems, and he does not like make decisions without having all information and facts given to him. Due to this Kaerdunth holds unbelievable amount of patience, and he often makes long plans that would take time to achieve but would have bigger benefits, than short plans with smaller benefits.
SKILLS & POWERS
Possessing a strong connection to the force and an even stronger pull to the dark side. Kaerdunth force sensitivity is no doubt a little greater than most padawans within the order. But that doesn’t necessarily mean that Kaerdunth is more powerful than other members, more so, that with training Kaerdunth possess greater potential than what others usually have. For the most part, Kaerdunth main focus is on learning about and mastering the various force techniques and unraveling the mysteries of the force. While this does occasionally shift his focus away from developing his skills with a lightsaber, Kaerdunth does possess knowledge in form one shii-cho form, two makashi and form six Niman; and he does plan to create his own lightsaber form by combing the three.
Equipment


  1. Curved Lightsaber
  2. Jedi Wanderer Robes
  3. Ship VT-2000
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You'll need to link a tech article for your ship before I can approve.

Please tag me when this is completed.
 

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Too lazy to do a write up right now xD, so I'm just gonna replace that with something in the generic technology section.

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I had one more revision that needed to be made which I overlooked when approving your profile. I am sorry, as I know it is a bit inconvenient, but the idea that he was sent to the Jedi Order is unrealistic for a few reasons. He wouldn't have been taken without his consent, even as a child. I also don't believe that him assaulting another child with a fork would be cause for the dean of his school to consider sending him to the Jedi. Please fix these when you get the chance and tag me.

I also really hope that you reconsider your choice to leave the site. Please don't hesitate to reach out to me if you need anything; that's what I'm here for.
 
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