Od Hart
AGE
► 20
SPECIES
► Human
HEIGHT
► 5'10'' / 1.78m
WEIGHT
► 161 lbs / 73 kg
EYE COLOR
► Grey, Yellow
HAIR COLOR
► Dark Brown
HOMEWORLD
► Coruscant
GENDER
► Male
FACTION
► Sith Eternal
RANK
► Legionnaire
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes, Trained
Biography If there ever was a fitting...
Well then, i may have to do overhaul on profile. Not sure how long it'll take, but im working on it. As for my awful proof reading skills... Im gotta use Grammarly or other proof reading website since i clearly haven't fixed it enough.
Appriciate it. That would be big help.
Fixed missing words problem, aswell fixing some spelling and grammar problems (altough im 101% sure that i probably missed some, as im avarage when it comes to english). I also improved the description and added about the usage of Force Stun ability. And i added more detailed description for...
I personaly asume that resisting stun with willpower applies to all, but i myself arent 100% sure.
As for telekenisis replacing Force Stun, problem is that 1) It can (and probably will) be exhaustive the longer he holds him in the air and 2) Person is pretty much guaranteed to retaliate...
Yeah, English has never been my strong suit (dosen't help that im Estonian and have learned three other languanges. Jack of all trades, master at none i guess), so yeah i did expect it to happen. Ill start fixing right away.
Fair enough, altough from what ive read, person with high degree of...
Just to let know, im somewhat inexperienced when it comes to rp'ing character (most of my roleplay experience comes from rp'ing as a nation in other forum), so any criticism and/or advice would be appriciated.
@Elijah Brockway
Well since i wrote in BIO that he had become quiet arrogant at the age of 18, it wont be too big of a problem to add more about his arrogance. Besides, i probably need to do more editing and spell-checks anyways.;)
@Deviant
Erm knowing that my characther that was created less than week ago will be possibly killed by sith with god like speed and charisma? With unknown lightsaber form and high stats in meele?! Thats quiet intimidating... But hey youll need to slice Revalda's head off to guarantee his death...
Howdy i'm also searching for roleplay. I have conflicted but capable Jedi Knight, tough only true problem is... Well... That im still waiting to get approval in Jedi sign-up thingy.
@Talon maara
Well after double checking 'Dark Side Corruption and You' i realized that having light and dark powers, and still be with Light side is... Erm... Unrealistic. *sigh* Guess i have to rebalance and fix more things in Revalda. Cant blame rules tho. Infact should double check all rules.