Woah...so what you're saying is at this moment my cowardly electrician is at least the second highest ranking member of the Border Alliance. I should start a war, you know, with me and that one other person....
Edit: actually my cowardly electrician would probably just give up and let the Sith...
Senator Saracbecca paused as Rhone addressed a few more people before return to Saracbecca and introducing her to a pair of Senators standing nearby. First was Senator Chaznot of Zeltros, Saracbecca at least recognized this one. She bowed to the female Zeltron and exchanged pleasantries quickly...
Saracbecca stirred in her seat, two speeches before her. The second had been hastily written within the last three minutes after the tenth senator, or so it seemed, voted yea. Were they all blind? Could they not read the bill, or had they simply not read it at all? Certainly, she wanted the bill...
Hey, I love the way this profile is written. I may just steal the idea for my next character. The only trouble I have with the profile is the skills and abilities section. Because it's more of a literary profile it's hard to read exactly what her strengths/weakness, skills, and abilities may be...
Reference key: [1:1:3] First section, first paragraph, third sentence of linked page.
Name: Kashyyyk
Coordinates: P-9[1]
Hyperlane:
Randon Run
Great Kashyyyk Branch
Durkteel Loop
Nightroad
Climate: Tropical, one continuous season due to no axis tilt and perfectly circular orbit. [1:1:1]...
Saracbecca listened closely as Jedi Bramber spoke about himself and some of his short comings. She was glad to hear that he was a good swordsman, as it would probably come into play later that very day. Saracbecca laughed outwardly as Bramber mentioned Wookie women. He was only 19, a young...
Saracbecca looked at the man who appeared next to her. He seemed to be vouching for her. She cocked her head sideways and gave out a grumble and a nod to what the man what saying, though she was unfamiliar with who he was. It was only a split second later that the door whipped open and the...
Looks good, would you mind expanding on your powers and their limits when you have time? Also I think weakness 2 and 3 can be combined into one. You also only NEED one weakness with two powers so if you want you can take out the weakness to magic if you want.