Ahhhh I absolutley LOVE this character I can relate to her on some stuff but you did a really good job. You might want to check some grammar stuff at the beginning but other than that she is amazzzzing
"Naw, I really don't think he should," Rouge shoved her head inbetween the two girls' head to head embrace. "We wouldn't want that, would we?"
Even though Rouge felt a little guilty about listening in, she had nothing else to do, with no big leads on who killed her dad in the speeder crash 9...
Name: Rouglin Maj
Nickname: Rouge
Faction: Independent
Species: Human
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Height: 5'11
Weight: 160
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
Skin: Tan
Credits: 1,000 credits
Distinguishing Marks: Scar across stomache from ship-crash when she was 16
Force Sensitive: Yes, but untrained...
I have an indie chaaracter too. We should rp sometime and maybe they can become good friends! (I can then add people to the relationship part of my profile). Well, I haven't made her yet but she's a worrk in progress!
Pretty good! I don't see anything that would need changed. Except for the fact that you didn't put down her height. Or weight. Or at least I didn't see them. If they are in there and I'm not seeing them, try to make them more vissible. If not, just add thaat quick little fix and it will be...
Hey! That's one great character!
The only thing I see as a problem is the stats. You only missed putting in the Strength, Constitution, Wisdom, and alll that crap. Other people might see other little things but this is the only major thing I saw. Great character!