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  1. TheRevanchist

    TheRevanchist Member

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    NAME: Shorkazzabecca
    NICKNAMES: Kazza
    AGE: 56
    SPECIES: Wookie
    FACTION: Independent
    RANK: N/A
    XP LEVEL: 1
    HEIGHT: 7''
    WEIGHT: 200lbs
    HAIR COLOR: white
    EYE COLOR: golden brown
    DISTINGUISHING MARKS: intricately braided beard, (Sharma started it)
    FORCE: Yes

    Personality
    Kazza is a young wookie struggling with the failures of his past, and striving for a brighter future.. He is usually quite reserved (for a wookie), encouraging to others trying to find their way, but not himself, He is slow to trust, but once his trust is earned a greater friend you will not find. But he is no stranger to the darker emotions, He has nothing but hate for trandoshan, nothing but anger and disgust for his past actions, doesn't like to talk about his past, he also has a soft spot for children and is enraged when he sees their mistreatment, is a fan of "strong" alcohols from around the Galaxy.

    BIO
    Born on Kashyyyk to a small tribe, his birth was seen as a bad omen for his fur was an unnatural color of white. His childhood was relatively happy while it lasted, he played an learned with the other children, but he always stood out and not just because of the color of his pelt, he was force touched.
    Sometimes he would see visions in his dreams usually little things like what that days catch was, or where something was lost, he was good at spotting the little lies adults tell children, and finding hiding playmates, while his clan thought he was a bit off they never thought he could be one with the force.
    At 13 he undertook his rite of passage into adulthood. He Kew his life would change after its completion, but he never expected how drastically his life would change. Upon his return he discovered his clan under attack by trandoshan hunters, running to the rally cries of his family he never saw the stunner blasts coming...
    He awoke in a cage disoriented and confused leered over by a small group of battle scarred trandoshan on an unknown planet. Their leader hissed at him and opened the cage prodded him with a (shock cattle prod) and he ran from them and their hissing laughter.. Running through the alien landscape he was hunted for days? He couldn't tell all was a blur of running and killing, the one thing he can remember clearly is the force it tipped the scales, and soon he was the hunter, he would return every hurt inflected on him and his own, until just one remained.
    Kazza chased him all the while the trandoshan taunting him with the knowledge that he and his crew wiped out Kazza's family, upon reaching the ship he attacked without thought and used his claws taking the bastards left eye, but not before the ships systems and defensive weapons activated, forced to flee he was stranded, battle rage lifted he despaired over his shame, the fact that he was now a madclaw and a failed avenger of his clan.
    Months passed before a ship was forced to land for repairs, and was discovered by a kindly middle aged man,so happy to see someone Kazza helps the man make repairs (read lugging heavy things). Once repairs were completed the man Urgo Machello asked with a roguish grin if Kazza needed a lift, and a lifelong friendship was made. Refusing to return in shame to his homeworld, he chose to wander the stars with Urgo, searching for new hyperspace routes and uncharted systems. Urgo introduced Kazza to many interesting places and people throughout their friendship, adopted as an honorary member Of Urgo's family.
    He had peace in his life again only shadowed by his regrets and failures. Upon Urgo's death the now 30 Kazza moved on to find the one thing that he had unfinished the hunter. Given the original ship he served on with Urgo by his daughter Sharma, with the promise to visit her and Kazza's "nieces and nephews". he started self training his force powers after meeting a jedi who gave him a few pointers and told him he should find himself a lightsaber,before moving on to his business, while searching the Galaxy like Urgo and he did all those years ago, he takes bounties and smuggling as the mood takes him,his plans are to create a lightsaber and find other force users who are in between the light and dark as he is and always on the hunt for the one that got away.

    Gear(not really sure about this)
    Vibroblade
    A-45 Blaster Rifle
    Z-13 Light Freighter
    MR Series Utility Astromech Droid
    Skills
    Vibroblade combat is his preferred style close and personal
    Blaster proficient uses blasters only if the situation calls for it, sometimes it's better to play smart and from a distance
    piloting skills taught to him by Urgo during the adventures, one of the few skills he possesses that has no negative connotations to it, he feels the most at peace in the dark of space.

    Hope this is a good start tips appreciated!
     
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  3. Shax

    Shax Magician of Wumbledoon

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    It just takes time, the admins generally work from what hasn't been approved yet to the more recent ones, so patience is a virtue here. From what I understand you can still do threads, just can't participate in faction stuff or plots until you are approved.
     
  4. TwoSidedHeart

    TwoSidedHeart Eternal Contradiction

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    You only posted yesterday, I'm sure they'll get to it. :)
     
  5. Faster Than Light

    Faster Than Light Gentleman af New Members Mod New Members Moderator

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    Yes. The CP Mods review profile based on character creation date. So, profiles that have been made earlier will get looked at first, so it will be a few before your profile gets reviewed.

    In the meantime however, you are welcome to roleplay until then
     
  6. Raydo

    Raydo Lord of Naps

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    Hey there,

    Please link your weapons to approved tech submissions from the tech boards. (Only need to do this with your rifle and ship currently). Tag me when that is finished and ill come back and take a look! Let me know if you need anything else.
     
  7. TheRevanchist

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  8. Raydo

    Raydo Lord of Naps

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    Works for me you can also link it like [*url='LINK GOES HERE']Text[/url] (Remove the asterisk at the beginning. Whichever you prefer. I apologize, still trying to wake up, but could you also link the droid the droid as well when you get a chance. Everything else looks good.

    Approved.
     
  9. TheRevanchist

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